On Fri, Feb 24, 2006 at 02:37PM -0800, Jeremy C. Reed wrote: >- maybe make "currently containing over" its own sentence. It is worth having in there at all? I've removed it for the time being. >- also it works fine with commercial software -- so "freely available" is >not accurate. Removed. >- "Support for binary-only distributions ... NetBSD emulated platforms" >sentence is unclear to me. Removed. >- in your "The installation prefix," sentence maybe add "configuration >file locations, " also. Added to FILES section. >- normally man pages are sorted first by section and then alphabetically >for your SEE ALSO section. Fixed. >And as a roff style rule we attempt to follow: >each new sentence in your roff source start on a new line -- it will >render the same, but easier to read and edit the roff source itself. >For example, move "It is" to a new line (and reformat as appropriate). > >(Including your ".It" entries for manpages, put on multiple lines.) Fixed. >- many packages provide start up scripts and default and example >configurations and your custom configurations are not removed nor >overwritten on deinstalls or installs. > >- Most of pkgsrc can be used to install and use software without any root >privilege. Added. I rewrote the sections before the feature list. Latest version, same location: http://www.jdwhite.org/~jdwhite/netbsd/pkgsrc.7 Feedback welcomed. -Jason -- Jason White <jdwhite%jdwhite.org@localhost> Jabber: jdwhite(jabber.org) http://www.jdwhite.org/~jdwhite jason.d.white(gmail.com) PGP KeyID: 0x5290E477/A8A2 3FDB AB33 98EB ED74 EDAA F538 9A30 5290 E477