curprev01:0901:09, 26 June 2024 Roman Spinnertalkcontribs 29,782 bytes+86 Revising: The most obvious efforts are the appearance of the year itself, including on a Pentagon display and the registration sticker on the rear license plate of Senator Prentice's Bentley sedan. → Although "1970" appears on a Pentagon display and the registration sticker on the rear license plate of Senator Prentice's Bentley sedan, the day/date indicator in the Pentagon depicts TUES / MAY 13, a date occurring only in such post-1964 years as 1969, 1975, 1980 or 1986.undo
curprev05:0205:02, 11 September 2023 HolyTtalkcontribs 29,757 bytes−7 →Plot: ce How can one be a "former" air ace? "Former" makes no sense here. The character became an ace during wartime service; he remains an ace after that.undo