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Ni I have a great idea for a big story for the star liner program. I worked for the Army National Guard for 30 years and the Palm Beach County Sheriff's Office. My idea is to send me up to the space station to let the world know that the U.S Military is always on guard along with the U.N Nato Laws. Tghis would be the biggest and best publicity for the star liner program.
— Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:58B:100:6D70:BC2C:1EC9:10C:BC30 (talk) 23:56, 19 May 2022 (UTC)Reply
The capsule "features wireless Internet and tablet technology for crew interfaces". This is taken directly from the reference, which is the Boeing information site, However, it is almost certainly incorrect. the Internet (capital "I") is a global network. I doubt the capsule command interfaces access the Internet. I suspect the capsule WiFi is a local Intranet.
Are we required to use the Boeing info unmodified when it is likely to be incorrect? Perhaps we should convert this to a quote:
A anon user asserted that the sticky valves were caused by intense storms. This does not appear in any of the references, so I reverted. If it is in fact true, it should be in the paragraph about the test and not in the table entry, and it needs a reference. -Arch dude (talk) 01:13, 1 September 2022 (UTC)Reply
The tables are too long for comfort on some displays, and the entries in the "notes" and "remarks" columns are wordy and contain too much detail. An interested reader can go to the linked articles instead. I intend to trim these entries somewhat unless there is an objection. -Arch dude (talk) 17:00, 1 October 2022 (UTC)Reply
The last para in the lede tends to grow by accretion as we add a sentence for the latest major development. That last sentence is usually OK for the lede, but the earlier sentences are then not longer important enough for the lede. I intend to trim that paragraph. All of the actual info is still in the body of the article. -Arch dude (talk) 14:57, 25 April 2023 (UTC)Reply