curprev12:1612:16, 15 June 2024 FeralOinktalkcontribs 35,392 bytes−1,310 corrected grammar (too many semi-colons everywhere!); removed US News opinion article as source; Removed first sentence of context section as 1 it is wrong 2 the 2nd paragraph contradicts it with a source; Mesopatamian parallel isn't similar and is the wrong time; too many links in See Alsoundo[automatically accepted]
curprev11:3311:33, 15 June 2024 FeralOinktalkcontribs 36,702 bytes−437 Reverting to prior version by Gråbergs Gråa Sång because the paragraph about puns and possible etymology is not necessary to "identify the topic" nor to "establish context, explain why the topic is notable" and is NOT part of the most important points or controversies; IncandescentBliss is repeatedly re-inserting content that doesn't belong in lead.undoTag: Undo[automatically accepted]
14 June 2024
curprev00:0800:08, 14 June 2024 IncandescentBlisstalkcontribs 37,139 bytes+437 Refined to address reversion. “ It should identify the topic, establish context, explain why the topic is notable, and summarize the most important points, including any prominent controversies.” https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Lead_sectionundoTags: RevertedMobile editMobile web edit[automatically accepted]