curprev01:1101:11, 10 May 2020 Guliolopeztalkcontribs 4,728 bytes−35 Remove "ref improve" tag. When this was added, back in 2016, there was one solitary reference supporting the text. That is no longer the case. While some issues remain, these can largely be addressed inline. As per inline tags.undo
curprev00:1800:18, 10 May 2020 Guliolopeztalkcontribs 3,107 bytes−505 Temper uncited commentary, unqualified editorial and unattributed opinions. Some of this (especially the stuff about penpals and whatever) reads like content better suited to the school's website. Which Wikipedia is not. WP:NOTWEBHOSTundo