curprev11:1011:10, 26 June 2023 Guliolopeztalkcontribs 54,135 bytes−279 →Future: Summarise speculation. While the flyingireland.com source does include some of these "possible contenders", it doesn't explain whose opinion or speculation is described and is all pie-in-the-sky until the tender process is completed. This section is already too long and full of conjecture without adding yet more.undo
curprev15:5415:54, 10 June 2023 Guliolopeztalkcontribs m53,950 bytes−40 →Future: Simplify. I often use 100 words when 10 will do myself. But that's not always a good thing. "[money] to support the procurement of [x]" is perhaps very similar to "[money] to procure [x]"undo
curprev15:5215:52, 10 June 2023 Guliolopeztalkcontribs 53,990 bytes−193 →Future: Summarise speculation. (This section is growing with both planned and speculated acquisitions. Planned is probably OK. But this level of speculation ("might", "could potentially", etc) is a bit much. Lots of things could happen. Almost endless possibilities. Not sure we need to cover/speculate as to them all...undo
curprev15:4715:47, 10 June 2023 Guliolopeztalkcontribs 54,210 bytes−111 →Future: Summarise. There are now two separate paragraphs dealing with the planned C295 replacements. This is therefore redundant to much of the text at the end of this section.undo
curprev11:0811:08, 8 June 2023 Guliolopeztalkcontribs 53,308 bytes−76 →Future: ce (an STOL aircraft with no police/surveillance history and instead used as cargo and commuter aircraft? Why would that be selected? Also, why are we using "or". As if these are the only 3 possible aircraft?)undo
curprev10:5910:59, 8 June 2023 Guliolopeztalkcontribs 53,384 bytes−331 Remove speculation and other text which seems to be wholescale (and verbatim) copy/pasted from the flyinginireland.com source.undo
curprev11:0011:00, 30 May 2023 Guliolopeztalkcontribs 51,979 bytes−309 →Future: Copyedits. Summary. Phrases like "seamless, safe and secure integration" make this read like a press release(?) How can an aircraft (due for delivery in 2025) support "current" overseas anything? (What do the words "current and future" add at all?)undo
