curprev23:5123:51, 3 August 2021 JG66talkcontribs 40,988 bytes+14 undo some horrible copyediting here (3 consecutive sentences beginning "It was" and using passive voice ... yuk; also avoid consecutive sentences with similar structure later on – "Heavily promoted by ...", "Critically well received ..." – it's jarring)undo
curprev06:4706:47, 28 April 2021 JG66talkcontribs 40,630 bytes−363 →March 1970 recording: I don't think this is needed – we have RS's "absolutely lost" comment here, and his mindset from Sept '69 is adequately described at the start of the article; this Anthology quote relates to late '69 anyway, not Mac's self-promotion six months laterundo