curprev04:5604:56, 19 June 2024 Flawed Fixtalkcontribs 17,919 bytes−895 You wouldn't normally say that someone already in the organization is "invited" to spring training. Removing details that are unimportant in an article about Jake Westbrook. "full season" is a bit confusing, since it says he missed the last month of that season. Copy editing.undoTag: Reverted
curprev12:5112:51, 29 May 2024 Maddening Mixuptalkcontribs 17,897 bytes−895 You wouldn't normally say that someone already in the organization is "invited" to spring training. Removing details that are unimportant in an article about Jake Westbrook. "full season" is a bit confusing, since it says he missed the last month of that season. Copy editing.undoTags: Manual revertReverted
curprev21:5921:59, 16 May 2024 201.204.47.68talk 17,897 bytes−156 →St. Louis Cardinals (2010–2013): "full season" is a bit confusing here, since it says he missed the last month. It probably means that he pitched at least 162 innings, which is the benchmark for appearing among the ERA leaders, but that gets a bit complicated.undoTag: Reverted
curprev23:2623:26, 15 January 2024 138.121.24.219talk 18,274 bytes−433 You wouldn't normally say that someone already in the organization is "invited" to spring training. Removing details that are unimportant in an article about Jake Westbrook. Copy editing.undoTags: Manual revertReverted
curprev17:2617:26, 11 January 2024 190.144.34.146talk 18,274 bytes−433 You wouldn't normally say that someone already in the organization is "invited" to spring training. Removing details that are unimportant in an article about Jake Westbrook. Copy editing.undoTag: Reverted
curprev19:4219:42, 7 January 2024 202.40.178.54talk 18,299 bytes−408 You wouldn't normally say that someone already in the organization is "invited" to spring training. Removing details that are unimportant here. Copy editing.undoTag: Reverted
curprev01:0401:04, 7 January 2024 115.127.28.10talk 18,309 bytes−407 You wouldn't normally say that someone already in the organization is "invited" to spring training. "lackluster" is probably not encyclopedic, and going 4-4 does not necessarily mean you pitched badly. Removing details that are unimportant here. Copy editing.undo
curprev01:1901:19, 17 December 2023 177.93.44.69talk 18,298 bytes−845 Restoring good version, and removing the part about his spring debut, which is unimportant and out of chronological order, since his 2000 performance on the Yankees' AAA team was already mentioned above.undoTags: Revertedreferences removed
curprev01:0401:04, 17 December 2023 177.93.44.69talk 18,480 bytes−663 You wouldn't normally say that someone already in the organization is "invited" to spring training. "lackluster" is probably not encyclopedic, and going 4-4 does not necessarily mean you pitched badly. Removing details that are unimportant here. Copy editing.undoTags: Revertedreferences removed
curprev02:0702:07, 15 December 2023 201.220.112.98talk 18,851 bytes−292 You wouldn't normally say that someone already in the organization is "invited" to spring training. "lackluster" is probably not encyclopedic, and going 4-4 does not necessarily mean you pitched badly. Removing details that are unimportant here. Copy editing.undoTags: Manual revertReverted
curprev18:2718:27, 11 December 2023 80.194.38.106talk 18,851 bytes−292 You wouldn't normally say that someone already in the organization is "invited" to spring training. "lackluster" is probably not encyclopedic, and going 4-4 does not necessarily mean you pitched badly. Removing details that are unimportant here. Copy editing.undoTags: Manual revertReverted
curprev19:2419:24, 10 December 2023 27.75.212.74talk 18,851 bytes−292 You wouldn't normally say that someone already in the organization is "invited" to spring training. "lackluster" is probably not encyclopedic, and going 4-4 does not necessarily mean you pitched badly. Removing details that are unimportant here. Copy editing.undoTags: Manual revertReverted
curprev21:3321:33, 9 December 2023 151.30.64.251talk 18,851 bytes−292 You wouldn't normally say that someone already in the organization is "invited" to spring training. "lackluster" is probably not encyclopedic, and going 4-4 does not necessarily mean you pitched badly. Removing details that are unimportant here. Copy editing.undoTags: Manual revertReverted
curprev00:5000:50, 9 December 2023 103.44.116.22talk 18,851 bytes−292 You wouldn't normally say that someone already in the organization is "invited" to spring training. "lackluster" is probably not encyclopedic, and going 4-4 does not necessarily mean you pitched badly. Removing details that are unimportant here. Copy editing.undoTags: Manual revertReverted
curprev13:5613:56, 8 December 2023 181.174.115.9talk 18,851 bytes−292 I don't think you would be "invited" to spring training if you're already in the organization. "lackluster" is probably not encyclopedic, and going 4-4 does not necessarily mean you pitched badly. Removing details that are unimportant here. Copy editing.undoTag: Reverted