curprev17:4117:41, 16 November 2015 Mabalutalkcontribs 5,359 bytes−599 No need to give the full citation for repeated cites, you can just use "<ref name=chosentag/>" instead of copying the entire cite. Some light copy editing for style and toning down promotional language. "Everday modern girl" marked as a quote.undo
curprev23:0323:03, 6 November 2015 Mabalutalkcontribs 5,282 bytes+346 The Wall Street Journal cite is a good source for notability, shame to lose this. Also, references should come AFTER punctuation.undo