curprev18:5818:58, 3 April 2024 Ini 3 Abic-3talkcontribs 16,678 bytes−2,751 In addition to grammar mistakes, the text lacked cohesion terribly and there was a lot of redundancy and repetition of information, so I had to omit them and reformulate certain paragraphs.undoTags: references removedVisual edit