curprev18:5718:57, 22 June 2024 Carlstaktalkcontribs 134,619 bytes+5 clarity: the wording "The parts of the pig white plantation owners did not eat" makes the reader pause—the first thing I saw when I read it was "pig white plantation owners"undo
curprev15:4015:40, 16 June 2024 Carlstaktalkcontribs 123,663 bytes+47 logical quotes; clarity; present tense; wikilink Scoville scale, which says: "The Scoville scale is a measurement of pungency (spiciness or "heat") of chili peppers and other substances"undo
curprev15:2615:26, 16 June 2024 Carlstaktalkcontribs 123,149 bytes+150 ce: full sentences get quote marks on outside of punctuation per logical quotes; clarity, redundancy: "and found that slaves got nutrients from their food by boiling food in a kettle which released vitamins and minerals their bodies needed" just restates what the previously quoted text says in different wordsundo