Jump to content
 







Main menu
   


Navigation  



Main page
Contents
Current events
Random article
About Wikipedia
Contact us
Donate
 




Contribute  



Help
Learn to edit
Community portal
Recent changes
Upload file
 








Search  

































Create account

Log in
 









Create account
 Log in
 




Pages for logged out editors learn more  



Contributions
Talk
 



















Contents

   



(Top)
 


1 A Commons file used on this page or its Wikidata item has been nominated for deletion  
1 comment  




2 Idea  
3 comments  




3 Wireless Internet?!  
1 comment  




4 I reverted an unsourced assertion about the valve problem  
1 comment  




5 trim notes/remarks columns in tables?  
1 comment  




6 trim last (development) paragraph in the lede  
1 comment  













Talk:Boeing Starliner: Difference between revisions




Page contents not supported in other languages.  









Article
Talk
 

















Read
Edit
View history
 








Tools
   


Actions  



Read
Edit
View history
 




General  



What links here
Related changes
Upload file
Special pages
Permanent link
Page information
Get shortened URL
Download QR code
 




Print/export  



Download as PDF
Printable version
 




Print/export  



















Appearance
   

 





Help
 

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
 


Browse history interactively
 Previous editNext edit 
Content deleted Content added
m Archiving 1 discussion(s) to Talk:Boeing Starliner/Archive 1) (bot
Line 49: Line 49:


The tables are too long for comfort on some displays, and the entries in the "notes" and "remarks" columns are wordy and contain too much detail. An interested reader can go to the linked articles instead. I intend to trim these entries somewhat unless there is an objection. -[[User:Arch dude|Arch dude]] ([[User talk:Arch dude|talk]]) 17:00, 1 October 2022 (UTC)

The tables are too long for comfort on some displays, and the entries in the "notes" and "remarks" columns are wordy and contain too much detail. An interested reader can go to the linked articles instead. I intend to trim these entries somewhat unless there is an objection. -[[User:Arch dude|Arch dude]] ([[User talk:Arch dude|talk]]) 17:00, 1 October 2022 (UTC)


== trim last (development) paragraph in the lede ==


The last para in the lede tends to grow by accretion as we add a sentence for the latest major development. That last sentence is usually OK for the lede, but the earlier sentences are then not longer important enough for the lede. I intend to trim that paragraph. All of the actual info is still in the body of the article. -[[User:Arch dude|Arch dude]] ([[User talk:Arch dude|talk]]) 14:57, 25 April 2023 (UTC)


Revision as of 14:57, 25 April 2023

A Commons file used on this page or its Wikidata item has been nominated for deletion

The following Wikimedia Commons file used on this page or its Wikidata item has been nominated for deletion:

Participate in the deletion discussion at the nomination page. —Community Tech bot (talk) 02:08, 5 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Idea

Ni I have a great idea for a big story for the star liner program. I worked for the Army National Guard for 30 years and the Palm Beach County Sheriff's Office. My idea is to send me up to the space station to let the world know that the U.S Military is always on guard along with the U.N Nato Laws. Tghis would be the biggest and best publicity for the star liner program.

 — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:58B:100:6D70:BC2C:1EC9:10C:BC30 (talk) 23:56, 19 May 2022 (UTC)[reply] 
Please do not post your personal information here, it's a public site and ill-intentioned folks might abuse it. -Arch dude (talk) 01:02, 20 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry, this is not a general formu. It's a page where we discuss how to improve the article. -Arch dude (talk) 01:02, 20 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Wireless Internet?!

The capsule "features wireless Internet and tablet technology for crew interfaces". This is taken directly from the reference, which is the Boeing information site, However, it is almost certainly incorrect. the Internet (capital "I") is a global network. I doubt the capsule command interfaces access the Internet. I suspect the capsule WiFi is a local Intranet.

Are we required to use the Boeing info unmodified when it is likely to be incorrect? Perhaps we should convert this to a quote:

-Arch dude (talk) 16:25, 10 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I reverted an unsourced assertion about the valve problem

A anon user asserted that the sticky valves were caused by intense storms. This does not appear in any of the references, so I reverted. If it is in fact true, it should be in the paragraph about the test and not in the table entry, and it needs a reference. -Arch dude (talk) 01:13, 1 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

trim notes/remarks columns in tables?

The tables are too long for comfort on some displays, and the entries in the "notes" and "remarks" columns are wordy and contain too much detail. An interested reader can go to the linked articles instead. I intend to trim these entries somewhat unless there is an objection. -Arch dude (talk) 17:00, 1 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

trim last (development) paragraph in the lede

The last para in the lede tends to grow by accretion as we add a sentence for the latest major development. That last sentence is usually OK for the lede, but the earlier sentences are then not longer important enough for the lede. I intend to trim that paragraph. All of the actual info is still in the body of the article. -Arch dude (talk) 14:57, 25 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]


Retrieved from "https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Talk:Boeing_Starliner&oldid=1151678598"

Categories: 
C-Class spaceflight articles
Mid-importance spaceflight articles
Space stations working group articles
WikiProject Spaceflight articles
C-Class United States articles
Low-importance United States articles
C-Class United States articles of Low-importance
WikiProject United States articles
Wikipedia articles that use American English
Hidden category: 
Pages using WikiProject banner shell without a project-independent quality rating
 



This page was last edited on 25 April 2023, at 14:57 (UTC).

This version of the page has been revised. Besides normal editing, the reason for revision may have been that this version contains factual inaccuracies, vandalism, or material not compatible with the Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike License.



Privacy policy

About Wikipedia

Disclaimers

Contact Wikipedia

Code of Conduct

Developers

Statistics

Cookie statement

Mobile view



Wikimedia Foundation
Powered by MediaWiki