I think this article really needs more on Dean's role in the Watergate hearings. Right now there's too much stress on where he spent 127 days.-R. fiend 15:35, 19 May 2004 (UTC)[reply]
I found a lot of the language of this article to be tripping over itself so I attempted to expand and rewrite it some. A good portion that I found lacking in the article was Dean's role in Watergate. There was plenty in there about whistle-blower but very little about what he did in the cover up. I've tried to hit on that some, lay out the chronology leading up to his firing on April 30 and go from there.
I also standardized the references, added the photo, and broke it up into sections. Comments and suggestions always welcome.
--Wgfinley 03:26, 7 Mar 2005 (UTC)
