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No mention of the fact that he seems to wear the exact same type of clothes and sneakers every day? That seems at least noteworthy. Maybe I'm the only one who finds it intriguing (especially the irony of monotony from a company whose motto is/was Think Different), but it's a large part of his persona, and seems appropriate for inclusion. <small>—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/192.231.128.67|192.231.128.67]] ([[User talk:192.231.128.67|talk]]) 21:26, 5 September 2007 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
No mention of the fact that he seems to wear the exact same type of clothes and sneakers every day? That seems at least noteworthy. Maybe I'm the only one who finds it intriguing (especially the irony of monotony from a company whose motto is/was Think Different), but it's a large part of his persona, and seems appropriate for inclusion. <small>—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/192.231.128.67|192.231.128.67]] ([[User talk:192.231.128.67|talk]]) 21:26, 5 September 2007 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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I have a link I wanted to add with an economist article about his life but it wont let me edit... here's the link, "http://economist.com/business/displaystory.cfm?story_id=9298983"
Did anyone else notice that Fraud now redirects to this page? Sbard 05:25, 28 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I've protected the page to deal with heavy vandalism in the past few days, I presume mostly to MacWorld and the announcement of the MacBook Pro. WikiFanatic 03:14, 11 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]
That is right, he only earns $2usd a year.
I'd like to see something changed in the 1st paragraph. It says that Jobs was "pushed aside" in 1985. The verb seems negative towards that movement and therefore POV. I'd suggest "ousted" instead. Repetition 14:29, 2 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Steve Jobs should be added to Category:American college dropouts.
The article states that Jobs is the largest shareholder of Disney. In fact, he is the largest *individual* shareholder; there are institutional shareholders that own more Disney shares than Jobs does. 75.3.77.26 00:13, 2 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Does it rhyme with "globes" or with "globs"? Somebody who knows might well add a sentence about this at the beginning of the article.
"After Steve's spiritual trip to India, he returned to America bold and wearing traditional Indian wear" (Early years, 4th paragraph, 1st sentence) should read "...America 'bald' and wearing...". It's little things like this that makes Wikipedia appear less than legitimate in the eyes of mainstream media and the reference book/libraries communities. anonymous/141.153.152.25
Since the page is currently locked to prevent vadalism, can someone at some point make the following minor edit: change the link in the first paragraph from "Toy Story series" to "Toy Story" (i.e. "series" shouldn't be part of the link). --Hux 05:14, 19 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Pixar has now been bought by Disney, according to Norwegian media. But I just found out that I can't edit this article - I haven't edited anything in wikipedia for a while so these changes are new to me.
I suggest the following additions. The big reasons why the Apple II became such a smash hit was, besides the beautiful plastic case and the internal modular design, the invention of the disk drive and the spreadsheet program called Visicalc. The disk drive was a huge leap over the cassette tape -- the latter was sequential and if it hiccuped, the whole tape had to be reread. As to Visicalc, that program quickly became a standard for businesses -- no more need for paper spreadsheets with their constant rippling corrections. As Visicalc grew in businesses, so did Apple II. I won't write here anymore, but I ask someone to consider this and perhaps update the article accordingly. I'm not sure if the disk drive was a Jobs or Woz idea. 24.225.133.155 02:38, 20 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Another Edit: this paragraph reads poorly (gushing/fanciful):
The year of 2007, coined "The first 30 years was just the beginning," was kicked off by the Macworld Expo at Mascone Center in San Francisco. Steve Jobs began the episodic keynote address by reviewing Apple's music business through iTunes music and video highlights, mentioning that the rumors of the decline in internet music business was bogus. Highlights included the long awaited iPhone cellular device as well as the rebranding and introduction of the once-fabled AppleTV. After the long awaited introduction of these two visionary products, there was still "Just one more thing." Steve announced on January 9th, 2007 at 10AM that "Apple Computer, Inc" would be forever known as "Apple, Inc."
Instead, suggest this which retains some color in a more NPOV style:
At the 2007 Macworld Expo at Mascone Center in San Francisco, Jobs summed up Apple's progress with, "The first 30 years was just the beginning." He began an episodic keynote address by reviewing Apple's music business through iTunes music and video highlights, responding to reports of the decline in internet music business. Highlights included the long awaited iPhone cellular device as well as the rebranding and introduction of the once-fabled AppleTV. After the long awaited introduction of these two products, there was still "Just one more thing" to add (January 9th, 2007 at 10AM): "Apple Computer, Inc" would thereafter be known as "Apple, Inc." Voideater 20:34, 12 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Another edit: this paragraph, under the personal section, is grammatically incorrect: In 1984, Jobs purchased a 17,000 square foot, 14 bedroom Spanish Colonial mansion, designed by George Washington Smith in Woodside, California, also known as Jackling House. Although Jobs lived in the mansion for ten years, reportedly in an almost unfurnished state, although he kept an old BMW motorcycle in the living room, and let Bill Clinton use it in 1998, the mansion was allowed to fall into a state of disrepair. Planning to demolish the house and build a smaller home on the property, he met complaints from local preservationists over his plans. In June 2004, the Woodside Town Council gave Jobs approval to demolish the mansion, on the condition that he advertise the property for a year to see if someone would move it to another location and restore it. A number of people expressed interest, including several with experience restoring old property, but no agreements to that effect were reached. Later that same year, a local preservationist group began seeking legal action to prevent demolition. In January 2007 Jobs was denied the right to demolish the property by a court decision.[36].
A suggested fix (though not perfect...): In 1984, Jobs purchased a 17,000 square foot, 14 bedroom Spanish Colonial mansion, designed by George Washington Smith in Woodside, California, also known as Jackling House. Although Jobs lived in the mansion for ten years, reportedly in an almost unfurnished state (other than the old BMW motorcycle in the living room which he let Bill Clinton use in 1998), the mansion was allowed to fall into a state of disrepair. Planning to demolish the house and build a smaller home on the property, he met complaints from local preservationists over his plans. In June 2004, the Woodside Town Council gave Jobs approval to demolish the mansion, on the condition that he advertise the property for a year to see if someone would move it to another location and restore it. A number of people expressed interest, including several with experience restoring old property, but no agreements to that effect were reached. Later that same year, a local preservationist group began seeking legal action to prevent demolition. In January 2007 Jobs was denied the right to demolish the property by a court decision.[36].
More editing needed: The third paragraph of "Return to Apple" reads "With the introduction of the iPod portable music player, iTunes digital music software, and the iTunes Store (...)". Note that iTunes was introduced in January 2001 and the iPod in October 2001; the sentence should therefore be reordered to read iTunes, iPod, and then iTMS. 71.86.204.93 21:43, 1 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Also in "Return to Apple": "Jobs is both admired and criticized (...) during his keynote speeches (colloquially known as "Stevenotes") at Macworld Expos." Append "and Worldwide Developers Conferences." 71.86.204.93 21:50, 1 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Near the end of the article: "After over two decades of no public meeting interaction between Jobs and Bill Gates, in May 2007 came the announcement of a joint scheduled interview between the two technology icons." The meeting happened and this article needs to updated. 71.86.204.93 22:09, 1 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Is Mona Simpson really 100% biological sister of Steve Jobs. The reason I'm questioning this. I came across this Salon.com interview of Mona Simpson. An excerpt of the interview: ... All right, your half-brother, Steve Jobs [co-founder of Apple Computers]. I tried again to see another outside source that is saying this. It is the official Amazon.com review (non customer but an employee) of a Mona Simpson book saying, "...Mona Simpson's half-brother and the founder of Apple Computers" --J. Nguyen 01:12, 25 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]
The article currently contains this text:
So, if they agreed to split the bonus evenly and Jobs told Woz that he got $500 -- wouldn't half of that be $250, not $350? Something then is wrong... is the $500 wrong or the $350 wrong? --dharris Thats not ture in the book iWoz by steve wozniak steve jobs took more the the 50/50 i can't remember really what it was but steve wozniak didn't care
-- See: http://www.woz.org/letters/general/91.html
"In an interview in the book What the Dormouse Said: How the 60s Counterculture Shaped the Personal Computer, Markoff gets Apple CEO Steve Jobs on the record talking about how taking LSD was one of the most important influences in his life"
The sentence doesn't even have puncuation, and I really do not think it belongs in the article.
I fixed it and added the reference. He's stated repeatedly that his experiences have been extremely important influences on his life, so they're as deserving of inclusion of anything else. - zambaretzu
Steve Jobs was not fired, He quit after a power struggle with the board which in the end the board won and stripped him of most of his power and isolated him from much of the company. "In the documentary Triumph of the Nerds, the reaction to Jobs' famous firing from Apple by CEO John Sculley and the Apple Board of Directors was talked about by various people:"
Greeting all. A while ago there was a peer review request made for this article. Having done a fairly extensive review (Wikipedia:Peer_review/Steve_Jobs), I was disappointed not to see any responses to the review I conducted. I agree this article should be featured sometime and would like to know what has been done following the review. Thank you. -Fermion 09:16, 11 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I put back the Arab father bit because in fact he is periodically mentioned as an notable Arab-American, so the source of the Arab descent is relevant, plus not everybody in Egypt is Arab (could be Turkish or Nubian). Stan 05:30, 30 July 2005 (UTC)[reply]
- See note above under 'Father'.
- Steve Jobs' biological father's name is Abdulfattah John Jandali. He immigrated to the US from Syria in 1952 (he was born in 1931).
Fredric Alan Maxwell, author of Bad Boy Ballmer has written what he calls an "authorized bio" (see his post on: http://www.mac360.com/index.php/mac360/comments/back_from_the_brink_five_days_with_tera/) of Jobs.
He has announced that he e-mailed him (Steve Jobs) a proposed chapter comparing his mercurial character to Jandali's. Jobs replied "Are you a nut case?" signing the oneliner "steve." The author then hit back at Steve saying "are you?". (As only Maxwell would know how that email was signed, presumably he entered this prior sentence).
Maxwell says that Jandali's "identity was outed, albeit obscurely, by Jobs’ sister, Mona Simpson". (see: http://www.alwayson-network.com/comments.php?id=12575_0_4_0_C)
Vanity Fair Magazine was the first major publication ever to print the name of Jobs' birth father in October 2005. The strict US laws in respect to revealing details of the birth parents of adoptive children, resulting in many legal prosecutions in the fifties and the eighties, and still very much in effect in many states, were the main reason the name had not appeared in print in this connection before.
Adoption groups, where adult adopted children are still trying to loosen laws in order to discover their own birth parentage, have voiced their support for the magazine in printing just the name and not invading the privacy of the individual with further details.
But the name was out there. Lisa Brennan-Jobs, Steve's daughter, had published the patriarchal family name back in Fall 1999 in an article she wrote for the Harvard Advocate (though she spells it Jondali).
Enough.
I have changed the place of birth from Green Bay, Wisconsin to San Francisco, California (see: http://www.greenbaypressgazette.com/apps/pbcs.dll/article?AID=/20051204/GPG0101/512040591/1207/GPGnews).
His sister, Mona Simpson, was born in Green Bay. But not Jobs. - douga6
- I believe he wasn't born in Green Bay, but the article here on Wikipedia says he was. Which means either the [http:// news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/programmes/worlds_most_powerful/3284811.stm BBC], the book iCon ^pdf, this book, several others, and off course CNN are wrong OR he wasn't born in Green Bay like WikiFanatic states. I could probably find out somehow, maybe by checking out the necessary information from the California Office of Vital Records (like the mentioned article did). Either convince me that this man was born in Green Bay by using certifiable references (hereby proving all the previously mentioned sources forgot to do some serious fact-checking), or state that this man was born in freaking San Francisco like so many others seem to believe.
Oh and now suddenly nobody wants to pu(n)cture a hole in the universe? --Bruce 18:51, 10 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]
--California Office of Vital Records show he was indeed born in San Francisco in February, 1955. I corrected main article but someone changed it back to Green Bay. If you want it in his own words, see Smithsonian Oral History (http://americanhistory.si.edu/collections/comphist/sj1.html#tools) - douga6
The article says, "Jobs ran NeXT with an obsession for perfection at any cost. This eye for detail ultimately destroyed NeXT's hardware division (rest of sentence omitted here)." That's a pretty bold statement, and it doesn't sound neutral to me. Perhaps this assertion should be elaborated upon (by someone who knows NeXT better than me!), so that it doesn't give the appearance of bias. --Tachikoma 16:56, 13 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]
How would you all feel about changing the opening paragraph of Early Years?
For example:
“Steven Paul Jobs was born on February 24, 1955 in San Francisco, California. He was adopted shortly after birth by Paul & Clara Jobs of Mountain View, Santa Clara County, California.
Jobs went to Homestead High School “ etc.
In this way, we get out of the supermarket-tabloid type details which give the page a gossipy feel instead of what it should be – an overall picture of the man for an encyclopedia.
And yes, of course the details of his birth parents are relevant. But these can be covered in two lines at the bottom of the page, under Ancestry/Birth parentage.
eg:
“His biological birth parents were an American graduate student, Joanne Carole Schieble, and a Syrian grad student, Abdulfattah John Jandali. At the time of birth, both were students at the University of Wisconsin in Madison, WI.” Or something similar.
Sorry to rock the boat, but I think this could be an improvement.
It might also be worthwhile checking out the Peer Review by Fermion on the Discussion page (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Steve_Jobs).
He/she says: “The entire personal life section can be improved. I fear that it reads too much like a dirt file on Steve Jobs, however, I would hate to see this information being lost to the public.”
They have a point. But it's up to you.- douga6
I agree, but I will take it a step further. I think the anecdote about Jobs, Woz, and the $5000 adds nothing to the article. The preceeding point about India is also vague. Why was he disturbing the other Atari employees? JGorton 03:10, 22 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Something's up with the "Annual salary" field of his infobox. Currently it's: $1 USD (Apple), $52 USD (Pixar). I won't change it because I'm not sure what those values should be. --Spaceman85 15:07, 22 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]
"I'm sure Steve Job's salary isn't 1 dollar." was posted at the top of the page before the infoboxes. Moving it to here. 207.145.133.34 00:52, 28 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I took it upon myself to follow the Be Bold mantra and slice a chunk off from the "Early Years." It was poorly written and offered little to nothing to the article as a whole, IMHO. If I'm out of line its revertable. :-) JGorton 00:58, 24 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Where's the $7.5 billion net worth figure from? It must be reverted to the last one if a reference cannot be found for this new figure. — Wackymacs 08:06, 24 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]
-- The figure is 4.4 billion according to 2006 Forbes list. See: http://www.forbes.com/lists/2006/10/HEDB.html - douga6
-- A year later, the figure is 4.9 billion according to 2007 Forbes list. See: http://www.forbes.com/lists/2006/54/biz_06rich400_Steven-Paul-Jobs_HEDB.html - douga6
Steve Jobs -
The general idea that hovers around the Steve Jobs image is that he is almost a God. He is the most omnipotent benevolent geek (even though he isnt strictly a Bill Gates geek) one could find... I contend that this is not true. The book iCon is very clear about this.
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I wish to focus on the last one. In no way does he rightly deserve any praise particulary for any of the products that come out Apple. (And also in terms of Pixar i think its even clearer that he is in no way the innovator there.) Yes he can see what is viable, can help to perfect them in his own rude way. And yes he is an excellent face for Apple. But in no way is he the major innovator we all perceive him to be.
The article does a great job of his life, very objective (though laking in a few places) but not of him.... I feel that the controvosy section could be lengthened, and/or a section explaining the above matters could be included...
But i still hold that Steve Jobs is a great iCon - Crampy20
"Jobs then travelled to India. He returned with his head shaved and wearing traditional Indian clothing. He also returned to his previous job at Atari, but he could only come to work when all the other designers had gone home, so that he didn't disturb the other employees."
Is this vandalism? It doesn't make much sense. Gazpacho 23:01, 25 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Why is the Disney, Co box at the bottom of the page? Yes, Jobs will sometime this year become a major shareholder, perhaps a Board member, and at that time it may contribute significantly to his net worth. But why not simply list the information on the page, link to Disney, and leave the box there? -- Gnetwerker 00:58, 2 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]
"Jobs' entanglement and connection to Apple's computer's long history of racism and harassment against minorities, or outright denial of employment was revealed on October 23 of 2001, when he made a corporate-wide live announcement to Apple Computer's employees claiming that there would be "No Layoffs for the next 2 years", ironically on the same day as the iPod announcement. However, less then a week later, dozens of ethnic minorities, many of East Asian, West Asian, and South Asian decent among others were retroactively terminated - many of whom had been harassed and isolated against federal laws. While Jobs' knowledge of this event was well known, he never explained his motivations for this action, which also involved people that worked directly for him. Later, during an Intel-sponsored conference, Mr. Jobs, who was present at the conference, uttered a racial slur directed at Asians in response to Intel's announcement of planned expansion of its Research and Development into Asia - claiming that Asians will simply use the opportunity to steal designs and trade secrets."
The information presented here is known by thousands of people - of course they will not actually come forward because they will be retaliated against. I am one of a brave few who will expose this. Apple's awyers already know who I am and they obviously won't do anything about it because these are Facts. Let me put it this way: Wikipedia is maintained by many apple employees, who create biographical articles about themselves and apple products, i guarantee that none of them will proclaim this info as false. --User:RememberOctober29 20:12, 22 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]
You need to go to a newspaper reporter, and not Wikipedia. Wikipedia does not publish original research, nor is it a tool or outlet for investigative journalism. To do so woudl remove any claim it has on being an encyclopedia and turn it into just another blog. If your accusations are true, your best venue is the public media, and not here. Once your charges are published -- even alleged -- in a reputable newspaper, they might have some claim to be here. Until then, you will need to find another vehicle. -- Gnetwerker 06:46, 23 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Curious bystander here - what on earth is "West Asian" supposed to mean? Bwithh 05:51, 24 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]
You don't know what West Asian is? Some basic lessons in Geography might help. Reading a book would also be helpful. I have added the exceprt again which was removed by one of the vandals. I do not see most of the other points mentioned in the article being varifiable with any given sources. I'd say this is racism and "layoffs" section is the most accurate and indisputable section in the article -- User:RememberOctober29 12:25, 28 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I strongly question the motivations of several of the Moderators, not to mention editors on Wikipedia - while you claim that "facts must be backed up by sources" to everyone that posts something that your Gang does not want written here. Your behavior is indeed very gang-like and it tarnishes the reputation of Wikipedia as universal and impartial source of info. Reverted vandalism by "Gnetwerker" and his friends. User:LotsOfPProblems 0:55, 11 April 2006 (UTC)
I only just added my name to the Project Mac list, so I hesitate to pontificate, but... jeez-o-flip!, this article needs more direct citations! The article is long enough to generate one of those "longer than is preferable" warnings, yet there are only six direct citations (not counting the uncited references). I urge everyone who has contributed to the article to go back and add a reference to back up whatever information they've contributed, using footnote form and the appropriate templates. -- Muffuletta 21:28, 25 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Am I right in presuming that any facts in the info box, on the upper right hand side of the main Jobs page, are absolutely correct. And because of their prominent position they would not be there unless they had been thoroughly checked out?
I ask this because I am writing a paper on Jobs and I can't afford to make an error about his birth place and where he grew up. All the text references I can find, including four different books, plus the vital records office in San Francisco, show that he was born in that city (San Francisco). And that he moved at the age of 4 or 5, with his adopted parents, to Santa Clara County and grew up in what is now known as Silicon Valley.
However in the info box on the main page it says just the opposite. The earlier "Born in San Francisco, California" has been deleted. And in its place is: "Grew up in San Francisco" - and I can not find anything at all that supports this statement. Will someone please give me the citations/references that were examined before this was put in the info box? As I say, I can't afford to make a mistake about this. Many thanks, Wallnut
-See No. 15, "Place of Birth" above. Plus the two citations, one from a cousin of Jobs, one in Jobs' own words: http://www.greenbaypressgazette.com/apps/pbcs.dll/article?AID=/20051204/GPG0101/512040591/1207/GPGnews http://americanhistory.si.edu/collections/comphist/sj1.html#tools It is the info box that needs to be fixed, not the (correct) facts in the article. chumleyk
Someone recently changed the description of Steve's biological father, Abdulfattah John Jandali, from "politcal science professor" to "graduate student who later became a political science professor." Perhaps whoever made that edit could provide a source, because this Guardian article (not necessarily Gospel) describes him as a political science professor who went to San Francisco," and whose "relationship with student Joanne Carole Schieble" produced Steve. -- Muffuletta 14:16, 31 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]
--I wasn't the one who made that change, but the edit was correct. Jandali was a graduate student at that time (1955) studying for his doctorate. To quote from Jobs' biological cousin in a Green Bay article, December 2005:
"The biological mother was 23-year-old Joanne Schieble, Giese's aunt, whose family owned a mink farm at what's now the site of the east-side Wal-Mart on the Bellevue-Green Bay border. Jobs' father was Abdulfattah Jandali, a native of Syria and also 23.
Schieble and Jandali were students at the University of Wisconsin in Madison at the time, and with society as it was in 1955, they had gone to California to secretly have the baby — unknown to the family, Giese said."
You can read the whole article at: http://www.greenbaypressgazette.com/apps/pbcs.dll/article?AID=/20051204/GPG0101/512040591/1207/GPGnews). -- Wallnut
I'm not sure right now how to re-write the section about the PARC influence, because clearly there was some, but according to Raskin himself the base concepts were actually there before PARC started their work. clacke 12:33, 7 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]
There is substantial difference of opinion on that whole subject between Apple folks (Raskin has something of a conflict of interest I would say), and PARC folks. John Markoff's What the Dormouse Said and Michael Hiltzik's Dealers of Lightning are the best secondary sources here. In any case you will find that most of the concepts date to Douglas Engelbart and the "Augment" project at SRI. Most people think that PARC got the ideas somewhat legitimately, but differ on how legitimate Jobs' exploitation of them was. -- Gnetwerker 18:33, 7 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I think I recognize the sentence, "Baez and Jobs presumably remain friends, as evidenced by her mention of him in the acknowledgements of her 1987 memoir And A Voice To Sing With." from the biographyThe Second Coming of Steve Jobs - I don't have a copy of the book any longer, but I do remember it has an index. Can someone check whether this is the exact sentence used in the book? TDS (talk • contribs) 20:23, 13 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]
- I checked "The Second Coming" and it isn't in there. But it does sound familiar. The history shows that this one sentence was added on Nov.28, 2005 by anonymous 64.46.138.28.
It could be from another book or a magazine article. But it really doesn't add anything anyway. A mention on the acknowledgement page of a 20 year old book does not constitute evidence that a friendship has endured to the present day. (In fact it has and there are much more recent references to Baez being a family friend - including "The Second Coming"). If there is doubt about the provenance, maybe the sentence could be changed to read simply: "Baez included Jobs in the acknowledgements of her 1987 memoir" - or something similar. Wallnut
Aside from the warning the page is generating, the article is too long. We're having a hard time separating Steve Jobs from Apple Computer. Consider the paragraph on the Apple I for example: it talks more about Woz than Jobs.
How should we rectify this? JGorton 21:35, 4 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I'm currently doing a spech on Steve Jobs and Apple for class and while I was reading the section about Apple's beginnings, it states they made the Apple I, and then the next May, they made the Apple III. Where on earth did the Apple II, the better of the 3, go? The only mentioning of the Apple II was at the bottom of the section saying the success of the Macintosh line eventually led Apple to abandon the Apple II. Why is this the only mentioning of one of the greatest computers to ever come out of Apple in their early stages?
Sk8.4.Life June 6, 2006 - 1:20 PM
Does anyone have confirmation that's really his? Resume section looks like a rant.
I highly doubt that its his, but there's no wayt to prove otherwise. Darkyoshi 00:51, 16 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I wanted to review the less than reliable sources used as citations for this section:
None of these sources have editorial review as is the case with real news articles. Columnist opinion, Blog Posts, Slashdot threads, are sources just not reliable ones.
WP:BLP States『Biographies of living persons should be sourced with particular care, for legal and moral reasons. All negative material about living persons must be sourced to a reliable source. Do not wait for another editor to request a source. If you find unsourced or poorly sourced negative material about a living person — whether in an article or on a talk page — remove it immediately. Do not leave it in the article and ask for a source. Do not move it to the talk page. This applies whether the material is in a biography or any other article.』
Reliable sources in wikipedia are defined here: Wikipedia:Reliable_sources#Evaluating_sources of note is the following:
Evaluate the reliability of online sources just as you would print or other more traditional sources. Neither online nor print sources deserve an automatic assumption of reliability by virtue of the medium they are printed in. All reports must be evaluated according to the processes and people that created them.
Publications with teams of fact-checkers, reporters, editors, lawyers, and managers — like the New York Times or The Times of London — are likely to be reliable, and are regarded as reputable sources for the purposes of Wikipedia. At the other end of the reliability scale lie personal websites, blogs, bulletin boards, and Usenet posts, which are typically not acceptable as sources.
thanks, ---Paul E. Ester 17:04, 9 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Although I'm not a Windows fan, I do respect Bill Gates for the generous donations he and his wife and given to charity. Just wondering if there are any reports of Steve Jobs doing the same? He's definetely one of the richest people in America right now. Mentaka 21:02, 18 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Hello everyone. I'm new to this, so please excuse my lack of general knowledge about how things are done around here. But here are some things about this article that should be changed: Can someone please proofread the first paragraph? The word 'vernacular' does not really have the sense that it is used for and should be removed in favor of a more apt word. There are semicolons when there should be periods. The word 'aesthetics' is used incorrectly as well - or at least it is not used in a very meaningful way. "Aesthetics" can't really comprise more than 'outward appearances alone' - that's exactly what aesthetics is concerned with. The sentence should maybe be rewritten: "understanding aesthetics to be a crucial factor in product appeal ' or something to that effect - I suppose that's what you were trying to get at. - jclyons
am i reading this right or is this a typo,his salary is one USD?
That is correct, US$1 a year. However, that's just the salary and does not include stock options, bonuses, etc.--Marty Goldberg 22:32, 13 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]
i would take the salary portion off because it's so deceiving Bobguy89 22:39, 11 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]
It looks funny! it looks like it was like, faked made or vandals, but its true! :D oops forgot to sign Numanumaguy 03:06, 22 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
A GA reviewer will have trouble passing this article because of the presence of unsourced statements. Every {{fact}} tag needs to be replaced with an inline citation from a reliable source. Thank you. -Fsotrain09 22:30, 5 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I only came across one statement with a {{fact}}, which I have now corrected and then referenced. Were there more? --Marty Goldberg 22:52, 5 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Nope. Thanks for addressing that. -Fsotrain09 22:59, 5 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]
This article will be put on hold (for 7 days) until these minor adjustments can be made :
Additional comments :
This article is thoroughly well written but needs more citations at mentioned places I have requested (some more would be needed but book references are given to find the material). Fixing these minor adjustments will probably be easy so the editors should drop me a message once the work has been carried out. Lincher 02:12, 12 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Is there any source / citation for the following: "Even though he was the founder and the inspiration behind the original company, Steve Jobs was gradually pushed out of Apple Computer Co. for his aggressive and underhanded tactics" at the end of the "Beginnings of Apple Computer" section? [maven] 13:06, 13 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]
If you read the article at http://www.woz.org/letters/general/91.html, Steve Wozniak at no point confirms that Atari paid Steve Jobs $5000. Wozniak mentions that the writer is correct on the Pong issue, but that's it. The fact that he says "maybe it didn't happen, and maybe the Atari people that said it and wrote it were wrong in their own memories" means that he is uncertain over whether or not Jobs was actually paid $5,000. I don't know how you could take a direct quote from Wozniak himself of the words "maybe it didn't happen" and then present it as a concrete fact. So even if you can present other verifiable sources to back this claim up (not news based on wiki articles, not op-ed pieces, not message board posts, but a major publication), how valid can it be if Steve Wozniak himself isn't willing to give complete validation of the claim (he doesn't even specify how he heard the rumor, just that he heard it). Wozniak says on his own site that its possible that never happened, case closed.
Wozniak was not an employee of Atari. He has no direct bearing, and is only going by what he was told. Alcorn was project manager and in charge of all expenses. Matter is documented and sources were provided already. --Marty Goldberg 17:21, 20 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]
(Resetting the indentation) If he's got sources, and they look fine to me, there's nothing you (the anon) can do to stop him unless you come of with equally "accurate" sources supporting your view. Wongfu, go ahead and add it back in. Though it was a complicated issue at first, superior sources prevail. Always.--HereToHelp 23:26, 22 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]
The article mainly fails the GA criterion of stability for it is changing at a crazy pace whether it is vandalism or additions. Thus GA cannot be awarded. Lincher 12:08, 23 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I could not find a source anywhere that says steve jobs was born into a jewish family. I'm removing it until someone finds something that confirms it. Justinmeister 21:11, 27 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Does anyone know if Jobs is left or right handed? --ipodracer 07:19, 4 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Should there be a paragraph/section added about the recent developments about Jobs having unauthorized stock options? ([[2]]) I'm not really familiar with the story, and I'm not even sure how important it's going to turn out to be, so there's not much I can do. 69.128.165.102 14:49, 28 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I went ahead and added a very short line about this, and I see that someone tagged it as a current event for me. Someone may wish to extend or clarify it. Bradkoch2007 01:23, 30 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
In the box in the bottom of the article i says that Steve was CEO fram 1977-1985, and from 1997 - untill today. It is incorrect Jobs was not CEO before his comeback in 1997, yes he was the co-founder and an important person in the company, but he never worked as a CEO in apple. Wikipedia also contradict themself on this mather because other article tells about other Apple CEOs in the years 1977-1985. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Modin (talk • contribs) 01:08, 1 February 2007 (UTC).[reply]
Apple CEO Steve Jobs stunned the tech and music industries Tuesday with a surprising challenge to the music industry to allow online stores — such as Apple's iTunes and Napster — to sell digital music files without the so-called digital-rights management (DRM) anti-piracy controls. www.foxnews.com/story/0,2933,250576,00.html Crocoite 01:44, 7 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Also, http://www.apple.com/hotnews/thoughtsonmusic/ his original letter, should be in main page, because his impact on the online music industry...
Is Steve Jobs' biological mother, Joanne Simpson, still alive? There used to be occasional mentions of her (usually saying "no comment" when asked about her son) when she lived in Beverly Hills, but nothing for the last year or so. Seb17 15:04, 16 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Can someone change Steve's Net Worth? He is not worth 20 billion dollars. I know someone got that info from an article in the Barron magazine, but that article states Steve is worth 20 billion to Apple in market capitalization. His net worth is 4.9 billion dollars according for Forbes.com 67.167.53.86 03:01, 29 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Apparently this guy makes $1 every year. That makes me richer than him, yet I'm not listed in Forbes...
Is this vandalism or did I miss something?--Surfaced 04:56, 27 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
According to the article, Steve Job's wealth is measured at 4.9 billon. This is based of Forbes' "400 Richest Americans" list (posted 9/21/06). However, Forbes has also another list, "World's Billionaries," which places Job's wealth at 5.7 billion. This latter list is more accurate because it was posted 03/08/07, and has a slightly more updated short bio (http://www.forbes.com/lists/2007/10/07billionaires_Steven-Jobs_HEDB.html). The apparent contradiction might be explained in that the people at Forbes has not yet revised all the content on their website, which allows for old information to remain in-- a particularly bothersome problem, especially since many of the same people appear in more than one list. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 24.26.127.34 (talk) 17:30, 28 April 2007 (UTC).[reply]
I am having difficulty verifying the following sentence:
I could not find a reference to Streisand in either The Second ComingoriCon or through Google and Lexis/Nexis searches. Can anyone else verify this? Otherwise I'll remove it. GabrielF 14:22, 2 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Presumably, Steve Jobs can't be legally allowed to not have a plate. "Exceptions"? Puh-leaze. The article linked to doesn't say anything about Steve Jobs' Mercedes more than explaining the fact that he owns it. I'm going to take out the part explaining that he's exempt, because the car looks pretty new. --Lightdifference 06:47, 12 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]
hello, I have a question. Is http://fakesteve.blogspot.com/2007/06/confession-i-use-firefox.html the real blog of steve or is it a spoof ?
I removed some non-free images that didn't have a fair use rationale for this article. I found two interesting free images that maybe could be used for this article: Steve Jobs alone and together with Bill Gates. I think the first image would make a good portrait for the infobox, when cropped. – Ilse@ 00:15, 19 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]
No mention of the fact that he seems to wear the exact same type of clothes and sneakers every day? That seems at least noteworthy. Maybe I'm the only one who finds it intriguing (especially the irony of monotony from a company whose motto is/was Think Different), but it's a large part of his persona, and seems appropriate for inclusion. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 192.231.128.67 (talk) 21:26, 5 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]
I strongly agree.--Gosox5555 (talk) 13:43, 17 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]
In the infobox instead of putting the number of children Jobs has why not just put their names? His spouse's name is there, it'd be like taking her name out and putting "1" in its place. - Throw 00:57, 17 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Acording to the article, Jobs is Disney's largest shareholder. In fact, he is at best Disney's largest individual shareholder. The source cited says he was due to become Disney's largest shareholder upon completion of the Pixar deal. However http://biz.yahoo.com/t/18/4013.html says that Jobs currently holds just 3(!) Disney shares. It showns an acquisition of 138,000,004 shares, followed by a statement of ownership of 3 shares, both dated 5-May-06. 81.76.107.126 20:09, 22 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Wouldn't it be a good idea to add all the steve's best quotes in the article, he really has legendary one liners. It'll be a nice addition to the profle. Check the quotations here Randhirreddy 16:52, 29 September 2007 (UTC)
The introductory section states that Jobs returned to Apple when NeXT was bought out in 1997 and that he was CEO from then on. However, the "Return to Apple" section states that NeXT was acquired in 1996, and Steve became CEO in 1997. These two sections need to be harmonized and one needs to be corrected, obviously. Canjecricketer 18:26, 2 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Hi. I'm not quite sure who the special individual was that wrote this sentence:
"...it would solve a lot of the problems that "personal" computing had come up against. Jobs had been criticized for not including built-in networking features on the original Macintosh (calling it an "umbilical cord to the company"), and he was determined not to repeat the mistake. "
But the very first Macintosh in fact was very much designed around networking. The serial ports were designed to act both as serial ports, and also as appletalk interfaces (http://www.mac512.com/macwebpages/128k.htm). I'm surprised no one caught this one. My editing recommendation is to remove the sentence, especially since its not backed up by any sources.
oblivionboy 00:56, 6th October 2007 (UTC)
Template:Steve Jobs has been nominated for deletion. You are invited to comment on the discussion at the template's entry on the Templates for Deletion page. Thank you. szyslak 08:18, 13 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]