curprev19:2719:27, 8 May 2024 H-b-gtalkcontribs 18,018 bytes−50 →Plot: Raymond comprehensively changed to Shaw, to be consistent with Marco being called Marco. Don't talk to me about Rosie. I think it's important to standardise in this way.undo
curprev20:2620:26, 15 October 2023 Szagorytalkcontribs 18,072 bytes+75 Made Washington's name full in my previous edit (just "Washington" in parentheses might be misleading), Changed "in Gulf War" to "during" (sounds better). Changed "3" to "three" (same reason).undo
curprev20:0720:07, 15 October 2023 Szagorytalkcontribs 17,997 bytes+1,411 Numerous corrections after watching film online: unit wasn't "famed", medal wasn't awarded for "role in the war", replaced "shy" with "aloof" (Raymond doesn't come across as shy). Marco's dreams didn't include memories of South African captor. Second implant (missing in previous revision), its analysis and conclusions were all mixed up -. other things were also muddled up (too numerous to mention). Methohexital is mentioned in the film as "methohexitol" (significant in connection with ECT).undo