curprev10:0910:09, 8 October 2023 Safes007talkcontribs 61,304 bytes−1,051 This is a breach of NPOV by characterising the longer version as the 'complete version' despite other sources set out in the length section disputing this. The length of the document isn't that important to the core content of the document so I think it's best to leave it in the section belowundoTags: Reverted2017 wikitext editor
curprev09:5609:56, 8 October 2023 Safes007talkcontribs 62,355 bytes+423 Returned to previous intro, as the new one doesn't mention Voice, Treaty and Truth. Also it calls Noel Pearson, Megan Davis and Pat Anderson the 'principle authors' while this isn't supported by the source citedundoTags: Reverted2017 wikitext editor