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January 2023

• Larry Hankin - general clean up, formatting in film tables (italic titles, etc), other fixes needed. Tinton5 (talk) 07:47, 28 January 2023 (UTC)

   Partly donebyWikieditor019 Wikieditor019 (talk) 18:19, 28 January 2023 (UTC)

• COVID-19 pandemic in Russia - Under the confirmed deaths per day there are just strings of numbers that are either unrelated to the graph or formulated improperly, but I'm not sure. Pianolettuce (talk) 15:09, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
• Dietrich Grunewald – Reference with bare URL, and the article needs to be deorphaned. — WILDSTAR^TALK 02:41, 16 January 2023 (UTC)

 Partly donebyLeomk0403. — WILDSTAR^TALK 14:21, 16 January 2023 (UTC)

• Starmus Festival - Heavy overlinking (namedropping), promotional, uncited OR. Grorp (talk) 04:53, 2 January 2023 (UTC)

   Partly done... PJvanMill)talk( 20:28, 2 February 2024 (UTC)

February 2023

• Iu Mien people -- Needs major cleanup with grammar, style, formatting, basically everything --Zhen Zhen (talk) 21:33, 14 February 2023 (UTC)
• Daniil Konstantinov - Needs general cleanup with wording and formatting Pianolettuce (talk) 14:36, 14 February 2023 (UTC)

April 2023

• Davie504 - I tried transcribing his name on IPA based on this YouTube video of his as source. I only used IPA characters present in Help:IPA/Italian. I would like the accuracy of my transcription to be verified or improved. Thank you. Kyleroo (talk) 00:39, 30 April 2023 (UTC)
• Identity and language learning - written like an essay, with no lead section and an oversized "further reading" section, among several other major issues in this article. DM5 ^(talk) 21:31, 29 April 2023 (UTC)
• Tatar confederation - same statements (e.g. "From the 10th to 13th centuries, Shatuo Turks joined Tatar confederation and became known as White Tatars branch of the Tatars.") repeated in multiple sections (e.g. in both "Name and origin" and "History") even though the article is relatively short.Erminwin (talk) 16:50, 28 April 2023 (UTC)
• Jay Hickman - slight formatting issues in credit tables. Lacon432 (talk) 05:03, 18 April 2023 (UTC)
• Indian Premier League - The article have lots of triva and outdated material, it should be removed or moved in history section.Rock Stone Gold Castle (talk) 18:48, 3 April 2023 (UTC)
  • According to mass stats, this page got over a million page views per day in April, the highest among all articles currently tagged for cleanup. -- Beland (talk) 17:50, 16 May 2023 (UTC)
• Solar Electric Light Fund Too much reliance on the subject's self-published webpage as a source. Sounds like an advertisment. The talk page has a detailed list of To-Do items and a list of better sources. BruceThomson (talk) 09:00, 22 April 2023 (UTC)

•  Partly done: Most problems fixed, but needs to have more sources added. A good source list is on the talk page. BruceThomson (talk) 22:08, 5 May 2023 (UTC)

May 2023

• Calvin Levels, Paul Benjamin, Len Lesser, Christopher Cazenove, David Ackroyd, Jo Anderson, Jade Yorker, Ingrid Torrance, Art Evans, J. Don Ferguson, Clint Walker, Tonea Stewart, Ramon Bieri, Lloyd Gough, Bill Nunn - filmography should be split between film credits and television credits. Lacon432 (talk) 01:47, 26 May 2023 (UTC)

 Comment: I have struck entries above that have since been addressed after this was posted. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 14:34, 22 April 2024 (UTC)

• British Overseas Territories citizen - A lot of content has been introduced into the article which is not WP:POV. A lot of sections may not be relevant to BOTCs, or even off-topic. I propose the moderators remove non-POV passages, then check the passages in boxes, until the community have had a chance to discuss them. They look like they’ve been copied across from other British and Irish nationality articles. (Kreb (talk) 07:06, 8 May 2023 (UTC))

Just to add to my earlier comment, it’s worth remembering that most British Overseas Territories are located in the Caribbean islands, and are much smaller than other former British colonies, which is why they haven’t become independent yet. There’s not much commonality between them and other colonies e.g. in Africa. So any passages relating to Ireland/Kenya/Uganda/India are simply not relevant. The Commonwealth Immigrants Act 1962 is only loosely relevant: whilst it did lay down conditions on people from the territories entering the UK, it was not specifically aimed at them. (Kreb (talk) 07:12, 8 May 2023 (UTC))

• All the articles tagged for cleanup in April 2010 have been resolved, yay! Based on how quickly folks took care of those (many just needed the tag removed), I think we could probably accelerate resolution of end-of-queue articles from the current speed (about one month per year) to one month per month, which would mean the backlog wait time would stop growing. In that spirit, here are all the remaining articles that were tagged in May 2010:

August 2023

• Tina Peters - edited by one editor and too much of one source that is biased. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Teenyplayspop (talk • contribs) 04:22, 22 August 2023 (UTC)

 Comment: - Hi! Please specify which Tina Peters you mean from the disambiguation page. Justanotherinternetguy ε=ε=ε=ε=┌(;￣▽￣)┘ talk 08:45, 24 August 2023 (UTC)

 Comment: Striking at this time. It's unclear which article is being referred to here. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 14:23, 22 April 2024 (UTC)

September 2023

• Bobby Edner – filmography should be in tables and organized better than as is. Lacon432 (talk) 04:15, 21 September 2023 (UTC)

   Partly done I added tables for the "Television series guest-starring roles" and "Voice work sections". Didn't have enough information to make a table for "Television Commercials" though. TizA35 (talk) 02:39, 4 October 2023 (UTC)

 Comment: Comparing revisions between the time this was posted and now, it appears that this has been addressed. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 14:17, 22 April 2024 (UTC)

• University of New Brunswick – Absolute mess of an article; thorough cleanup needed, full of primary sources. B3251 (talk) 03:04, 7 September 2023 (UTC)

 Comment: Comparing revisions between the time this was posted and now, it appears that this has been addressed. Note that some primary sources are allowed to be used in Wikipedia articles (WP:PRIMARY), and that this project does not accept requests for additional sources or citations to be added to articles. For requests to improve references in articles, please consider posting at WP:GOCER. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 14:21, 22 April 2024 (UTC)

List

• John Cameron Mitchell - filmography needs to somewhat be cleaned up. The actor's acting work should be separated by film and television, also neatened out. Lacon432 (talk) 03:22, 23 November 2023 (UTC)

   Done Should be better now JohnLaurensAnthonyRamos333 (correct me if I'm wrong) 08:32, 15 January 2024 (UTC)

• George Aguilar - filmography should be separated between film and television appearances. Lacon432 (talk) 03:12, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

   Done Jeraxmoira (talk) 05:10, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

• African Americans in New Jersey - a few bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 04:28, 20 November 2023 (UTC)

   Fixed Jeraxmoira (talk) 06:48, 20 November 2023 (UTC)

• Halsey Street (Newark) - some bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 04:05, 20 November 2023 (UTC)

  Done. Moonlight2006 (talk) 04:15, 18 January 2024 (UTC)

• Presidency of the League of Communists of Yugoslavia - Minor copyediting issues, currently on hold for GA review until remediated. — FenrisAureus ▲ (she/they) (talk) 19:38, 19 November 2023 (UTC)

   Done — FenrisAureus ▲ (she/they) (talk) 07:16, 20 November 2023 (UTC)

• John Thaw - filmography is distorted. Tables and whatnot are needed to fix it. Lacon432 (talk) 18:04, 19 November 2023 (UTC)

   Partly done Added a table for television series. TizA35 (talk) TizA35 (talk) 05:36, 19 December 2023 (UTC)

   Done JohnLaurensAnthonyRamos333 (correct me if I'm wrong) 07:17, 17 January 2024 (UTC)

• Campaign Cartographer - tagged for cleanup since August 2022. BOZ (talk) 06:58, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

   Done by multiple editors. PJvanMill)talk( 19:52, 2 February 2024 (UTC)

• Riverbend (Hudson County) - bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 07:24, 5 November 2023 (UTC)

 Fixed Jeraxmoira (talk) 13:06, 5 November 2023 (UTC)

• List of cities and towns in Romania needs resorting after an update. Respublik (talk) 18:03, 23 June 2023 (UTC)

 Fixed myself. Respublik (talk) 06:58, 24 November 2023 (UTC)

• Beyond Vision - Needs all unencyclopedic and promotional tone removed; also, the post topic needs somewhat of a clean-up to align more with notable sources. nsbfrank (talk) 09:59, 5 December 2023 (UTC)

•  Not done The link you provided doesn't seem to be working, so it's unclear which article needs clean-up. JohnLaurensAnthonyRamos333 (correct me if I'm wrong) 07:36, 15 January 2024 (UTC)
• Struck the above entry. No article exists, and no log page for it exists. There's nothing under this name that ever existed. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 14:37, 9 March 2024 (UTC)

• Austin Lane - bare URL in references. Tinton5 (talk) 09:07, 15 December 2023 (UTC)

   Done Jeraxmoira (talk) 09:20, 15 December 2023 (UTC)

• Marc Johnstone - bare URL in references. Tinton5 (talk) 08:50, 15 December 2023 (UTC)

   Done Jeraxmoira (talk) 05:29, 18 December 2023 (UTC)

• Petrochemical industry in Romania – general cleanup required. --Hildeoc (talk) 04:23, 3 January 2024 (UTC)

   Done Moonlight2006 (talk) 04:20, 4 January 2024 (UTC)

• James H. Coleman (judge) - bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 22:52, 16 February 2024 (UTC)

   Done Fixed bare urls - 00101984hjw (talk) 02:56, 19 February 2024 (UTC)

• Pierre de Beaumont - bare URLs Lizardcreator (talk) 23:39, 30 October 2023 (UTC)

 ResolvedbyJeraxmoira — WILDSTAR^TALK 20:54, 3 November 2023 (UTC)

I guess I have partially fixed it. I am not able to create citations or verify the other bare references on that article Jeraxmoira (talk) 21:12, 3 November 2023 (UTC)

 Done. The article presently has no bare urls. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 14:43, 9 March 2024 (UTC)

• Barry Livingston - Just like Bobby Elder's filmography section that is in progress of being done, this should be in tables and possibly also organized better. Pahiy (talk) 00:14, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

   Done JohnLaurensAnthonyRamos333 (correct me if I'm wrong) 22:16, 11 March 2024 (UTC)

• Orange Jackets - Full of puffery, blatant promotion, and undue weight in the lead. In addition, the citations are a mess; they're all grouped together on the bottom and aren't inline. Grumpylawnchair (talk) 04:17, 22 August 2023 (UTC)

  Update: I have fixed the citations and have also added more refs for the alumnae section. Jeraxmoira (talk) 08:24, 5 October 2023 (UTC)

N Deleted. The article was soft deleted per its AfD discussion. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 14:50, 9 March 2024 (UTC)

• Keli Price - career and general page needs to be improved. It looks kinda bad. Lacon432 (talk)

   Note: Nominating this for deletion. Seems like pretty obvious promo to me. Catalyzzt (talk) 19:23, 6 February 2024 (UTC)

• Struck this entry. The article was retained per its AfD discussion, and the article has received significant editing that appears to have addressed the cleanup matter presented here. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 14:58, 9 March 2024 (UTC)

•  FixedISRO. Theknowhowman (talk) 06:21, 12 June 2023 (UTC)

  The page has typos, spelling and grammar issues Theknowhowman (talk) 05:36, 17 June 2023 (UTC)

• Talk:Scrotum - This talk page contains the same topic about the image again and again, it's a huge mess. Wallby (talk) 11:50, 17 December 2023 (UTC)

 Comment: Striking this entry at this time. I removed some unnecessary white space from the talk page to make it neater, but that's about all that can really be done relative to the purview of this project. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 09:58, 19 April 2024 (UTC)

• Arthur J. Wilson - general layout fixes and date errors in references TaxGalPDX2 (talk) 00:00, 19 November 2023 (UTC)

   Fixed the reference date error—singular—that I found (all others were correct), no formatting errors found. DaZyzzos✉️ 22:07, 6 May 2024 (UTC)

• Fading Suns - tagged for cleanup since August 2022. BOZ (talk) 06:58, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

 Fixed – Filled in 1 bare reference(s) with reFill 2 and fixed one bare url in Ext links section manually. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 10:36, 19 April 2024 (UTC)

• Goldtree Engine - tagged for cleanup since August 2022. BOZ (talk) 06:58, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

 Fixed – Cleaned up bare urls and fixed formatting errors. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 10:30, 19 April 2024 (UTC)

• Immortal: The Invisible War - tagged for cleanup since August 2022. BOZ (talk) 06:58, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

 Comment: – Struck, issues have been fixed since. QuietCicada chirp 13:52, 22 April 2024 (UTC)

• Numenera - tagged for cleanup since August 2022. BOZ (talk) 06:58, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

•  Comment: The article presently has no cleanup tags present. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 15:21, 22 April 2024 (UTC)

• The Kingdoms of Kalamar - tagged for cleanup since June 2020. BOZ (talk) 06:58, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

 Comment: Struck. No cleanup tag exists on the article at this time. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 10:01, 19 April 2024 (UTC)

• Time & Time Again - tagged for cleanup since August 2022. BOZ (talk) 06:58, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

 Comment: Struck. No cleanup tag exists on the article at this time. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 10:00, 19 April 2024 (UTC)

• Nextbook – formal revision required, chiefly as to references (notation, formatting). --Hildeoc (talk) 16:39, 28 October 2023 (UTC)

 Comment: Comparing revisions between the time this was posted and now, it appears that this has been addressed. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 14:09, 22 April 2024 (UTC)

• Elaine Bernstein Partnow – especially external links in main text. --Hildeoc (talk) 16:39, 28 October 2023 (UTC)

 Comment: Comparing revisions between the time this was posted and now, it appears that this was addressed by Jeraxmoira. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 14:12, 22 April 2024 (UTC)

Ah, I forgot to strike this off. Thank you Jeraxmoira🐉 (talk) 14:34, 22 April 2024 (UTC)

• 1990s is seemingly in its way to include all athletes, musicians and other people in the world. Thinker78 (talk) 00:56, 28 October 2023 (UTC)

 Resolved

• Dharga Town is a mess. Horrid grammar, bad spelling, and is nigh incomprehensible at points. Needs a near total rewrite and much better sourcing. Grumpylawnchair (talk) 21:16, 23 October 2023 (UTC)

 Partly done Fixed some issues but article still needs clarification. - 00101984hjw (talk) 02:37, 18 January 2024 (UTC)

 Comment: Struck the above. In comparing revisions between the time this was posted and now, it appears that this has since been addressed by users such as Grumpylawnchair and Moonlight2006, amongst others. Additionally, this project does not accept requests for additional sources or citations to be added to articles. See the header atop this page for more information. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 16:09, 22 April 2024 (UTC)

• DJ Tocadisco - discography is very disorganized. Needs some organization. Lacon432 (talk) 15:45, 11 October 2023 (UTC)

 Comment: Comparing revisions between the time this was posted and now, it appears that this has been addressed. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 14:15, 22 April 2024 (UTC)

• Recognition of same-sex unions in India needs a rewrite for multiple issues, some of which I have raised in the talk page, along with sources and explanations. Some of the issues are as follows:

Factual accuracy: For instance, the article inaccurately presents every same-sex wedding ceremony as common-law marriage. This is false, because "common-law marriage" is applicable only to those qualified to enter into a legal marriage and presently, same-sex couples are not qualified to enter into a legal marriage.

Neutrality: For instance, the article extensively discusses every protection order and habeas corpus case ruled in favour of the same-sex couple, contributing to the depth of detail and the quantity of text leading to undue weight.

Relevance of content: For instance, the article discusses almost every same-sex wedding ceremony reported in the news, which is neither legally recognised nor a party to the ongoing same-sex marriage case.

Wiki6995 (talk) 11:18, 3 October 2023 (UTC)

Done Moonlight2006 (talk) 04:09, 12 January 2024 (UTC)

 Comment: @Wiki6995 and Moonlight2006: Striking this entry at this time. This is a complex case, and the amount of research required to address the matter, along with reaching a consensus about the article's content on the article's Talk page, where extensive discussion has occurred essentially, places this matter outside of the purview of this project. Please consider posting this at WP:GOCER if you'd like, which is focused upon addressing more complex and extensive copy editing matters such as this. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 16:01, 22 April 2024 (UTC)

• Elarica Johnson - needs tables for filmography and general cleanup. Lacon432 (talk) 17:55, 27 April 2024 (UTC)

   Done Jeraxmoira🐉 (talk) 19:34, 27 April 2024 (UTC)

• Killings of Raju Pargai and Amit Arya - Needs phrasing and grammar cleanup. Kingsmasher678 (talk) 16:10, 24 April 2024 (UTC)

   Done ZyphorianNexus (talk) 00:26, 28 April 2024 (UTC)

• Yukari Oshima - finish putting films in the tables. Lacon432 (talk) 04:42, 23 April 2024 (UTC)

   DonebyZyphorianNexus (talk) 18:11, 28 April 2024 (UTC)

• Richard Simmons - A couple of bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 01:45, 22 April 2024 (UTC)

 FixedbyNorth America¹⁰⁰⁰ 06:03, 22 April 2024 (UTC)

• Lucky Bisht - Needs to be cleaned up for phrasing. Appears to be a poorly translated article. Oliver Dattilo (talk) 15:49, 16 April 2024 (UTC)

   DonebyZyphorianNexus (talk) 00:03, 28 April 2024 (UTC)

• Miroslav Táborský - filmography needs to be put in tables, more organized, etc. Lacon432 (talk) 04:48, 8 April 2024 (UTC)

   DonebyZyphorianNexus (talk) 21:57, 29 April 2024 (UTC)

• The Amanda Show - bare URL/reference clean up. Tinton5 (talk) 03:36, 24 March 2024 (UTC)

 DonebyPaper Luigi Less Unless (talk) 12:38, 29 March 2024 (UTC)

• Rahway River - Some bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 02:48, 11 March 2024 (UTC)

 FixedbyLess Unless (diff). North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 14:06, 22 April 2024 (UTC)

• Patsho - this does seem to be a real place, but the article has numerous issues. Theknightwho (talk) 07:37, 24 January 2024 (UTC)

 Comment: – Struck. The article has received numerous edits after the above post was created, and it presently has no cleanup tags on it. As such, it seems to not have numerous issues at this time. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 11:46, 19 April 2024 (UTC)

• Morgan Berry - tables are still a mess; dates and italics need to be implemented for better organization. Lacon432 (talk) 01:47, 26 May 2023 (UTC)

   Partly done. I organized them by year and italicized titles. I couldn't implement dates. Grumpylawnchair (talk) 22:16, 24 June 2023 (UTC)

 Comment: Comparing revisions between the time this was posted and now, it appears that this has since been addressed. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 14:36, 22 April 2024 (UTC)

• Ruby Dee and Ossie Davis - there should be a table for her television credits and stage credits. For Ossie, a table for his credits should be done. Lacon432 (talk) 01:47, 26 May 2023 (UTC)

 Comment:: Comparing revisions between the time this was posted and now for both articles, it appears that these matters have since been addressed for both articles. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 14:29, 22 April 2024 (UTC)

• Kira Vincent-Davis - dates are out-of-order in tables. Lacon432 (talk) 05:03, 18 April 2023 (UTC)

   Partly done - tables are now sorted by year, but I was unable to find actual dates for most so I have not sorted within each year at all. Tollens (talk) 11:04, 21 April 2023 (UTC)

 Comment: Striking at this time. The dates are now in order, and in my view it's optional to create subsections in the table to then sort entries by each year. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 14:55, 22 April 2024 (UTC)

• List of supermarket chains in Oceania - Incorrect grammar and formatting. Doctorkaufman (talk) 14:41, 4 April 2023 (UTC)

   Done DaZyzzogetonsGotDaLastWord (talk) 20:25, 4 May 2024 (UTC)

• Spike Spencer - filmography needs to be put in tables, more organized, etc. Lacon432 (talk) 04:48, 8 April 2024 (UTC)

   Done 00101984hjw (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2024 (UTC)