Generally what needs doing to the article, but also, should Criticism be kept on the article? I maintain that, like Christianity, Islam has been criticised so much it needs one, but Bhaisaab says other religions don't have one so Islam shouldn't either. Dev920 (Mind voting here?) 07:07, 14 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]
See my review of Computer for my thoughts on Wikipedia articles covering broad concepts.
In general this article suffers from the same lack of balance that plagues every Wikipedia article on general concepts that I have seen. You do not want to give undue weight to subjects that people have contributed a lot about at the expense of other subjects that are equally important but not fun to write about. Try moving useful but overly detailed contributions to child articles while creating stub sections to invite editors to contribute more of what is needed. --Ideogram 13:27, 19 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]