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A pleasant read with a lot of personality! Some nit-picks:
her relationship with her father and his death — "her relationship with [...] his death" is a bit odd, perhaps: "with her late father", or, later on: "and her feelings about his death".
A lot of good sources! Looking at the ones of unknown reliability, their about pages, publishers, and what they cite, seem satisfactory. This is a bit silly from WERRRK.com, but yes, they were selected for archive by the Library of Congress, and WP:PLOTCITE also partially applies.
Compounded with the blockquote, I sense a bit of over-quoting in the "Reception" section. They're part of every sentence! Of course, it shouldn't be too difficult to make some tweaks and work your magic.
I'll be lenient towards the "guest judge" and "special guest", but perhaps find a ref for the Emmy, as it's outside the Drag Race franchise. Looks good otherwise.
Many hits on Google Scholar and TWL, but upon checking, none of them discuss the episode in any detail, it just seems to be a catchy tagline. Looking through news articles and websites, I can safely say that this article is quite broad.
I agree that it's an overall benefit, but the 110 words of background on Cameron is a bit distracting. Perhaps the list of episodes could be summarized.
I've trimmed a bit. I had hoped to include the relevant episode titles, but perhaps that's too much detail? I should note two of the episodes are later mentioned re: Cayne. ---Another Believer(Talk)04:02, 24 April 2024 (UTC)Reply
Could you clarify The Guardian's stance on Pearl's and Chachki's outfits? It seems to be positive considering statements like: "...give people a reason to root for you other than the fact that [you wear] corsets tighter than Miss Scarlett herself", and "...so I, like Michelle Visage, applaud [...] all efforts to channel Madonna (now two weeks running!)." Whatever you think works best!
Also, to segue from their shady first statement about Chachki, would any of their commentary on the contestants' personas, relationships, or exit interviews be worth a mention? Some of it isn't too tied to the episode as a whole, but I'd be interested in your opinion.
Images are CC licensed from Flickr, own works, VRT confirmed, or public domain. They are quite lovely, I like the Madonna and Sally Bowles pictures for reference. However:
Consider filling out the "non replacable" paramater in the infobox image.
@Averageuntitleduser: I've tried to address your concerns. You'll notice I just created a subsection for Fashion under Production, to follow-up on some of my above comments. Please let me know if any concerns remain. Thanks! ---Another Believer(Talk)15:59, 28 April 2024 (UTC)Reply
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Removed ---Another Believer (Talk) 15:47, 28 April 2024 (UTC)Reply
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