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I'm layering in content, a step at a time, following the article on GTRI as a model. My "Cite" function is currently broken, so I know I've left things in a somewhat dirty state. Working entirely from first sources at this point. Thanks -- ResearcherQ (talk) 00:49, 26 April 2013 (UTC)Reply
Article on science: http://www.buckinstitute.org/ourScience
Article on employees and budget: http://www.buckinstitute.org/news
Articles on facilities: http://www.buckinstitute.org/architecture http://www.pcf-p.com/a/p/8906/s.html
Another good model is SRI International -- ResearcherQ (talk) 17:35, 26 April 2013 (UTC)Reply
Hi, full disclosure — I work for the organization as a staff member, and I wanted to add content to the article that are accurate (using external references, not just self-sourcing). I have made some edits before, which all got deleted due to a potential conflict of interest although the additions were accurate. What is the best way to bring back those additions? Or am I not allowed to make any changes because of my employment status? Thank you! Irenepark89 (talk) 21:15, 6 December 2018 (UTC)Reply
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Hi—I'm a staff science writer at the Institute (see my user page), and I have made some changes a couple of months ago that were deleted due to a potential COI conflict. I wanted to see if it seems fit to undo some of the recent deletions? In particular, I wanted to see if we could return the article to this version: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Buck_Institute_for_Research_on_Aging&oldid=869874466. I will make sure to change some of the sources so they do not link to the institute's website since information itself I have added in the past is accurate. Thank you so much. Looking forward to working with you on this! Irenepark89 (talk) 18:07, 3 January 2019 (UTC)Reply
Here are the unbiased, outside sources for some of the citations instead of sourcing the Buck news:
11. https://www.bizjournals.com/sanfrancisco/news/2018/11/01/buck-institute-donor-fertility-research.html
15. https://www.bizjournals.com/sanfrancisco/news/2018/04/06/unity-biotechnology-ipo-anti-aging-senescence.html
19. https://www.northbaybusinessjournal.com/csp/mediapool/sites/NBBJ/IndustryNews/story.csp?cid=4173085&sid=778&fid=181. We will need to delete the bit about Touro University since I cannot find an independent source outside press releases and the school's websites.
Need to delete "The institute's Learning Center offers summer camps, internships, and field trips for students; education programs for teachers; and lifelong learning program on aging biology for older adults" for now since no unbiased sources can be found. Irenepark89 (talk) 23:07, 14 January 2019 (UTC)Reply
When ready to proceed with a draft version, please open a new edit request at your earliest convenience. Regards, Spintendo 07:19, 15 January 2019 (UTC)Reply
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Hello, thank you so much for the suggestion. I have drafted my proposed changes in my sandbox (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Irenepark89/sandbox). For the "History" section, I would like to add a couple of sentences to the section rather than rewriting it myself. For the other sections, I am proposing to replace what is in the current version with what I wrote in the draft. Also, I noticed that the last editor who deleted large parts of this wiki article also got rid of photos, and is there any way those could be restored? I did not upload those photos. Please look over the draft and let me know if there are any issues/concerns. Thank you. Irenepark89 (talk) 00:50, 17 January 2019 (UTC)Reply
Regards, Spintendo 01:40, 17 January 2019 (UTC)Reply
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Hi, could you clarify the SPECIFIC places where the citations are unacceptable? Out of references I have cited, only one directly leads to the institute's website. The others are news articles from local and national outlets or from other institution's websites, which have no reason to promote the institution. If you have problems with the outlets I have cited, I am not sure what to tell you. I would say outlets like SFGate and Forbes are reputable. These kind of general comments are really not helpful for users like us, and if my status completely prevents me from editing this page, please let me know (Several editors have previously told me that although my status may pose some problems, I can still edit the wiki). I'm getting mixed, vague comments from different editors. Also for the photos, they are all photos of the institute (as they should be), but they are showing different parts of the institute, and they are not of the same building. They do have contextual captions too, so I don't understand what the exact problem is. Irenepark89 (talk) 20:10, 17 January 2019 (UTC)Reply
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Can we remove "In 2014, Ultragenyx" at the end of "Laboratories" section? It's an incomplete sentence. Irenepark89 (talk) 21:10, 30 January 2019 (UTC)Reply
Edit request implemented Spintendo 21:59, 30 January 2019 (UTC)Reply
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Hello — I was wondering what are the necessary steps to remove the "This article may have been created or edited in return for undisclosed payments"? As I disclosed on my user page, I do work for the institution, but my suggested edits have been reviewed by neutral Wikipedia editors. Irenepark89 (talk) 21:29, 30 January 2019 (UTC)Reply
Please consult assigning editor
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The original plan called for 130 apartments built on-site, for lower-paid employees, per https://www.sfgate.com/bayarea/article/Asking-age-old-questions-At-Buck-Institute-in-2600926.php . I haven't found anything to indicate that these were built - http://www.nfh.org/mixed-use_project.html?id=9 implies that they were "pending" as of 2010. Can anyone provide links to articles that discuss these, even if only voter resistance, financial difficulties, etc.? -- John Broughton (♫♫) 18:30, 17 May 2019 (UTC)Reply