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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 22:28, 25 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
Looks interesting, I will take this. Posting my comments in a week. Cheers, Sainsf (knock knock · am I there?) 22:28, 25 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
for his work in the peace movement, he was a joint winner of the Nobel Peace Prize in 1901"for his work in the peace movement" should probably come later in the line and not at the start for better flow
after a period of illness and incapacitationI have not read the rest of the article yet to learn more about the illness but it would be good to say "a brief" or "a long" period if possible, just gives a better picture.
More to come. Cheers, Sainsf (knock knock · am I there?) 08:28, 30 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
Continuing,
recevuer general des financesShould this also not be in title case like the English version?
Le Courrier InternationalTranslate
La Démocratie et l’instructionTranslate. Plus this work isn't discussed in the text, so include some description in the caption or somewhere
its six hundred membersshould be 600 per the MOS (digits for numbers above ten). Also
Subscription rates for its six hundred members; Thirteen different nations were present
Despite Passy's objections, Cooper notesWho is Cooper?
their 20-year-old daughter Mathilde PaulianIt's not immediately clear who her parents are from the earlier line. Also unclear for Another daughter, Alix
Passy's mother died in 1827Sort of randomly placed after talking about his children and grandchildren. This probably belongs in the family part of Early life. Which convinces me Family needs a new section ideally placed at the bottom with a tree.
I think that should be it. Well-written and interesting read :) Cheers, Sainsf (knock knock · am I there?) 21:26, 1 May 2020 (UTC)Reply
@PotentPotables: Hi, I think you are busy IRL. I will keep this open one more week as work on the review comments had begun, but I am afraid this will be failed if there is no activity for another week. Sainsf · (How ya doin'?) 16:20, 14 May 2020 (UTC)Reply
The result was: promotedbyDannyS712 (talk) 14:10, 1 June 2020 (UTC)Reply
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Improved to Good Article status by PotentPotables (talk). Self-nominated at 17:48, 27 May 2020 (UTC).Reply
All good, as expected from a GA pass. Hooks are fine, I find the main more interesting than the ALT. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 02:34, 28 May 2020 (UTC)Reply
