Talk:Franc affair/GA1

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 01:18, 21 April 2021 (UTC)Reply

I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:18, 21 April 2021 (UTC)Reply

• No DABs, external links OK
• Images appropriately licensed
• More later.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:44, 30 April 2021 (UTC)Reply
• Tell the reader that Ludendorff was a former general in the Prussian Army.

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• • Move that to the lede.

  Done

• partition Austria-Hungaryof

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• French prime minister Georges Clemenceau in particular awkward. Suggest "in particular, French prime..."

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• in favor of Kingdom of Romania, the Kingdom of Serbs, Croats and Slovenes, First Czechoslovak Republic "the Kingdom" "and the"

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• You have a real problem in this article with forgetting to use articles like "the", "of", etc. Please do a thorough re-read and add all these sorts of missing words. Ping me when you're done and I'll continue the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:17, 30 April 2021 (UTC)Reply

@Sturmvogel 66: I am ashamed to admit that you are right. It should be a tad better now.--Catlemur (talk) 19:16, 30 April 2021 (UTC)Reply

• Hungarian society experienced a rise in the popularity of nationalism and revanchism Briefly explain why this happened in the lede

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• Link franc in the lede

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• Capitalize Admiral

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• Post-war Hungary experienced diplomatic isolation and economic hardship reads awkwardly to me, perhaps: "... suffered economic hardship and was isolated diplomatically"?

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• convert 93,000km

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• Hyphenate long established, French occupied, left over, oath swearing, brother in law,

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• spell out dollars

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• however they forgot "but" --Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:57, 30 April 2021 (UTC)Reply

  Done

@Sturmvogel 66: All done.--Catlemur (talk) 16:45, 1 May 2021 (UTC)Reply