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Reviewer: Kavyansh.Singh (talk · contribs) 17:56, 1 January 2022 (UTC)Reply
Nominator: Eddie891 (talk · contribs) at 02:33, 21 December 2021 (UTC)Reply
Will take a look soon. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 17:56, 1 January 2022 (UTC)Reply
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to his death→ "till his death"
"as his 'big brother' and was his 'admiring satellite'."— We'll need a citation immediately after the quote.
Manhattan's Columbia Grammar & Preparatory School— pipe " 's " out of the link
at the Columbia College of Columbia University— (1) this takes a definite article, while "Columbia University" does not (2) Our article calls 'Columbia College of Columbia University' just Columbia College (New York)
with honors in New York City in 1859— link NYC here: on its first instance in the prose.
at the New-York Chronicle— according to our Wikipedia article, it is The New York Chronicle ("The" is capitalized and italicized)
the journalist Charles Anderson Dana— I'd remove 'the'
He and his wife lived there until 1890. He had no children.— Well, "They had no children."
In this version:
""His Art Alone Endures""— quotes inside quotes take single quotation mark.
Retrieved October 29, 2007.— inconsistent date format.
Detroit, Mich.(state written in short form) v.
Berkeley, California
Putting on hold. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 09:57, 2 January 2022 (UTC)Reply
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