Talk:It Gets Better Project

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I found the Lead section of this article to be well-written. It provides a clear understanding of what the "It Gets Better Project" is along with a meaningful overview and key statistics. I thought the Structure of the article was logical. I felt that the "History" section was a bit short compared to the relative importance/length of the other sections in the article. I liked how the "Contributors" section was minimized as to not take up an unnecessary amount of space unless the reader wants. I thought there were a solid number of countries listed, but feel that some countries could use more information about them (like Italy which only has one sentence about it. The article was extremely well-cited, with 333 Sources that appeared to be reliable. The Grammar/Spelling seemed accurate to the best of my knowledge. Andrewmcfar (talk) 00:27, 21 October 2017 (UTC)Reply

Lead Section: Good lead that is concise and includes major points regarding the topic

Content: good content, explains origins and importance of movement

Tone and Balance: this is a neutral tone

Sources and References: Mostly uses news coverage, could use more peer-reviewed content, though the topic may be too recent

Organization and Writing Quality: starts with origins of movement, clear writing, but missing some up-to-date information, what has happened recently with the movement

Images and Media: Only one media clip of Obama, nothing from the organization or of the founders

Jakeforbes22 (talk) 16:23, 3 February 2022 (UTC)Reply