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Reviewer: DCI2026 (talk · contribs) 01:48, 4 September 2012 (UTC) I'll begin reviewing this article at some point this week, hopefully sooner rather than later. dci | TALK 01:48, 4 September 2012 (UTC)Reply
Re: "He grew up on the 235 acres (95 ha) family farm", it is traditional to refer to the "acres" in the singular when attached to an object such as "farm", eg. "the 200 acre farm". Downsize43 (talk) 01:22, 5 September 2012 (UTC)Reply
Last para. The sentence "The American Expeditionary Force Siberia was withdrawn in April 1920." should be the last one in the para, not the first. Downsize43 (talk) 01:43, 5 September 2012 (UTC)Reply
The review is incredibly late; throughout my readings of the article I found no egregious or even remotely notable errors.