Wikipedia:Peer review/List of York City F.C. players/archive1

I've just done some more work on this list, and I'm wandering what else should be done to help get it to FL status. However, I can only use league appearances for the players on the list, as I cannot get all competitions data from the period 1990-1996. Thanks, Mattythewhite 23:25, 13 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

• Two minor points:

1. the last two sentences in the lead should be rewritten, as starting a sentence with "although" in that manner is incorrect. Maybe try "Appearances in non-league football from 2004 to the present are included, however, as a source is available for this."

•   Done Rewritten. Mattythewhite 15:11, 15 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

1. You have both "An asterisk (*) next to a name denotes that the player had more than one spell at the club." and "An asterisk (*) next to a name denotes that the players stats account for the league." - which is correct?

•   Done I've removed the latter - this should have been removed before, as it applied to the old format I used. Mattythewhite 15:09, 15 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Can't see any problems other than that. allfootballers.com will have the missing cup data but you have to pay to subscribe - personally I think the list is OK without the cup data...... ChrisTheDude 15:04, 15 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

• Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR _t 13:47, 16 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]