curprev19:4719:47, 16 July 2024 Smuckolatalkcontribs 34,690 bytes−315 copy editing for concision and readability, with consideration of suggestions from Meta AI which will be so happy to hear that it helpedundo
curprev03:2403:24, 11 December 2023 Smuckolatalkcontribs 34,491 bytes−8,130 Ok I found it. I'm continuing to delete the walls of WP:ORWP:FANCRUFT essays written by one particular IP editor in September 2019, gallingly described as an increased balance and reduced POV lol, along with bitchy and wrong {{cn}} comments for other people! This particular deluge is blinding within this overall blizzard of a violating article, and I keep missing it with every review, so I am reviewing the direct perpetrator to locate it. Wikipedia's notification system doesn't work.undo
curprev18:5818:58, 10 December 2023 Guy Harristalkcontribs 47,193 bytes+42 The Alto is just an example of a non-mass-market personal computer with a GUI; other examples either were not from Xerox (e.g., the PERQ), and obviously not made for Xerox, or were from Xerox but sold as high-end workstations, e.g. the Star and successors. Restructure that claim; this may also further prevent people from thinking this paragraph is claiming that the Lisa was the first machine with a GUI.undo
curprev07:3007:30, 10 November 2023 104.184.182.119talk 46,994 bytes−7 →Name: "Lisa" and "LISA" are the same thing, which the sentence already states is an acronym for Locally Integrated Software Architecture. you don't need it twiceundo
curprev05:1605:16, 31 October 2023 Smuckolatalkcontribs 47,154 bytes−1,970 the name is *not* "Apple Lisa", but that is wikipedia culture's fetishization of corporate branding of its articles in a misguided attempt at disambiguation; speaking of which, delete one of the most exceptionally glaringly bizarre and pointless essays of WP:OR ever but which does make the bizarrely stated but accidentally quasi-relevant point "Combining unintuitive names with company names is especially popular today"; script-assisted date audit and style fixesundo
