curprev18:0818:08, 19 December 2014 RPSidcuptalkcontribs m15,978 bytes−47 Quite a lot of minor wording and punctuation changes to make it read better. (One or two spellings changed from US to British English as well, since the theme is British).undo
curprev02:0302:03, 19 December 2014 Jerzytalkcontribs 15,764 bytes−21 While single quotes are an established UK convention, they've been found too misreading-prone in Wikipedia usage. Ditto "smart quotes.undo
curprev01:4901:49, 19 December 2014 Jerzytalkcontribs 15,785 bytes+36 →top: + needed commas & fix clumsy syntax; "today" always becomes unfounded within 24 hours; "Aage" is presumably wp-editor typo until marked "[sic]", and that "sic" must be based on reliable evidence, but cited source requires login)undo
curprev01:1401:14, 19 December 2014 Jerzytalkcontribs 15,749 bytes+2 →top: "then" goes w/o saying, but raises the question "then as opposed to when?". "Second" provides the answer without the raising silly questions.undo
