curprev11:1611:16, 27 June 2024 Maplestriptalkcontribs 119,160 bytes−5 →Recreation and sports: Removing "also"; unclear purpose here. The past two sections have been about negative impact of ice, not about uses of ice. There's no equivalent subject it could be referring to here, like "winter arts" or somesuch.
curprev23:4223:42, 21 May 2024 Johnjbartontalkcontribs 106,534 bytes−66 →top: Reword. The previous text implied that only the solar system has ice one h as if this was some mystery. I'm not happy with the result however.
curprev20:1420:14, 21 May 2024 EMsmiletalkcontribs 106,600 bytes−619 removed 3 citations that seemed to me ill-fitting. But I would suggest to add some high quality citations throughout the lead, taking some of the same citations that are used for the main text? See also talk page.Tag: Visual edit