curprev18:4418:44, 17 March 2021 Mikalratalkcontribs 13,154 bytes−325 Not in citation: https://web.archive.org/web/20140413125124/http://www2.tbo.com/business/breaking-news-business/2009/oct/22/equal-pay-crusader-says-shell-always-be-second-cla-ar-60881/undo
curprev09:1209:12, 16 June 2020 Drevolttalkcontribs 13,659 bytes+345 Clearer general explanation of events in lead based on body of article; fixed ambiguous use of past tense; wording tweaksundo