curprev07:2607:26, 27 November 2023 LBAX118talkcontribs 33,507 bytes+535 Pretty much re-wrote the entire section. There were some confusing terms used, such as "pots" which I can only assume is a short-hand for "potholes", which is usually a term used only for situations involving asphalt. There was also a confusing use of "PreRunner" that made it seem as if Pre-Runners were the exact same thing as Trophy Trucks, which is false. Honestly, I think I may go edit the entire Trophy Truck page, because that thing is a gold-mine of misinformation and missing information.undoTags: RevertedVisual editMobile editMobile web editNewcomer taskNewcomer task: copyedit
curprev06:2506:25, 27 November 2023 LBAX118talkcontribs m32,972 bytes+64 I added a more specific description of the vehicle pictured. I also fixed a bit of grammar that felt uncomfortable to read. Finally, I added a hyper-link to "ATVs", using the same hyperlink used previously for another mention of ATVs. It may seem redundant to hyper-link the main-article multiple times, but this was in a different section, and the reader may want to visit the main-article for ATVs without recalling the previous hyperlink. Ease-of-use is beneficial to the view count of Wikipedia.undoTags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editNewcomer taskNewcomer task: copyedit
curprev06:0606:06, 27 November 2023 LBAX118talkcontribs m32,908 bytes−6 I removed an unnecessary explanation of skid plates (main article already hyper-linked) in the middle of a parallel list. I also changed the sentence before the parallel list to help the reader understand that while those vehicles are all off-road vehicles, they fit ONLY into the "designed for off-road driving" sub-category, and NOT into the "capable of off-road driving" sub-category, which is the other half of the broader definition, according to this very article.undoTags: Visual editMobile editMobile web editNewcomer taskNewcomer task: copyedit
curprev08:5508:55, 19 November 2023 Sanzhar Abdikerimtalkcontribs m33,266 bytes−18 In the revised sentences, i made a minor adjustment to enhance clarity and flow. Specifically, i added a comma after "unpaved surfaces" to create a clearer pause and separation between the introductory phrase and the list of examples. This helps the reader better distinguish the different types of surfaces. I separated the second sentence from the first to make it a standalone statement. This contributes to a more concise and organized presentation of information, making it easier for the readundoTags: RevertedVisual editMobile editMobile web edit