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I created [[:Category:Pertussis]]. At the time, this article had the title "Pertussis", so i used said category title. However, now that the article title has been moved, i think the category should also be retitled "Whooping cough", for consistency.--[[User:Solomonfromfinland|Solomonfromfinland]] ([[User talk:Solomonfromfinland|talk]]) 16:00, 7 October 2018 (UTC) |
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== Foundations 2 2019, Group 3C Goals == |
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1. Addition of global statistics of pertussis outbreaks |
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2. Addition of the difference between clinical presentation of pertussis in "Signs and Symptoms" portion. |
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3. Find information regarding the use of counter medication such as cough suppressants/lozenges with whooping cough in "Treatment" |
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== Foundations 2 2019, Group 3B Peer Review == |
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Respond to peer review prompts on the ARTICLE talk page, following the statement made the group about its planned edits. |
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1. All group members should respond to the following prompts, with specific examples: |
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''· Do the group’s edits improve the article as described in the Wikipedia peer review “Guiding framework”?'' |
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-- Yes, Kim's addition of statistics about India and other countries helps to add validity and expands on the gravity and prevalence of whooping cough in the world despite the fact that there is an existing vaccine. --[[User:Dannymrowr|Dannymrowr]] ([[User talk:Dannymrowr|talk]]) 20:44, 5 August 2019 (UTC) |
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-- The group's edits improve the article by providing more recent and accurate information about the prevalence of whooping cough in several countries.--[[User:Mparagas18|Mparagas18]] ([[User talk:Mparagas18|talk]]) 21:29, 5 August 2019 (UTC) |
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-- Improved article by adding in statistics for Germany, China, and India from a reliable secondary source. Language is neutral and edits are balanced with respect to the overall structure of the article. --[[User:Alexuang|Alexuang]] ([[User talk:Alexuang|talk]]) 16:52, 6 August 2019 (UTC) |
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''· Has the group achieved its overall goals for improvement? '' |
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-- Yes, I believe group 3c's goal of adding statistics to the page was achieved --[[User:Dannymrowr|Dannymrowr]] ([[User talk:Dannymrowr|talk]]) 20:47, 5 August 2019 (UTC) |
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-- Yes, the group achieved their goal of adding accurate, relevant statistics about whooping cough prevalence.--[[User:Mparagas18|Mparagas18]] ([[User talk:Mparagas18|talk]]) 21:29, 5 August 2019 (UTC) |
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-- Global statistics added in for three countries. U.S. statistics already present in the article. Treatment section only contains information on prescription medications. --[[User:Alexuang|Alexuang]] ([[User talk:Alexuang|talk]]) 16:56, 6 August 2019 (UTC) |
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2. Each group should divide up the prompts below so that a different person responds to each question. Please sign your comments with your name and account name so that you receive credit. |
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· Person A: Does the draft submission reflect a neutral point of view? If not, specify… |
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-- Yes it does, the statistics are cited and straightforward with no opinion attached. It is simply the statistic of the prevalence of whooping cough. --[[User:Dannymrowr|Dannymrowr]] ([[User talk:Dannymrowr|talk]]) 20:44, 5 August 2019 (UTC) |
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· Person B: Are the points included verifiable with cited secondary sources that are freely available? If not, specify… |
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--Overall yes. Fixed statistic for China (10340 -> 10390). Good review article. --[[User:Alexuang|Alexuang]] ([[User talk:Alexuang|talk]]) 21:44, 5 August 2019 (UTC) |
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· Person C. Are the edits formatted consistent with Wikipedia’s manual of style? If not, specify… |
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-- Yes, the edits are formatted consistent with Wikipedia's manual of style.-- [[User:Brendado425|Brendado425]] ([[User talk:Brendado425|talk]]) 21:09, 5 August 2019 (UTC) |
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· Person D. Is there any evidence of plagiarism or copyright violation? If yes, specify… |
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==chin cough== |
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-- No, the statistics Kim added are appropriately cited and do not show any evidence of plagiarism or copyright.--[[User:Mparagas18|Mparagas18]] ([[User talk:Mparagas18|talk]]) 21:03, 5 August 2019 (UTC) |
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and chink cough should be mentioned here as historical terms for the illness. <nowiki>{{citation |last= |first= |contribution=chincough, ''n.'' |contribution-url=https://www.oed.com/view/Entry/31760 |date=2022 |title=Oxford English Dictionary |ref={{harvp|''OED''|2022}} |url=http://www.oed.com |location=Oxford |publisher=Oxford University Press }}.</nowiki> — [[User talk:LlywelynII|<span style="text-shadow:#BBBBBB 0.1em 0.1em 0.1em; class=texhtml">Llywelyn<span style="color: Gold;">II</span></span>]] 16:26, 18 December 2022 (UTC) |
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== Outbreaks in Epidemiology section == |
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==Airborne versus droplet== |
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Per https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC3501154/ may be airborne. [[User:Doc James|<span style="color:#0000f1">'''Doc James'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Doc James|talk]] · [[Special:Contributions/Doc James|contribs]] · [[Special:EmailUser/Doc James|email]]) 00:15, 20 November 2019 (UTC) |
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The section has accumulated a random list of outbreaks. This should be replaced with a paragraph on global prevalence and trends, currently missing. |
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== Health education == |
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[[WP:NOTEVERYTHING]] [[User:Robertpedley|Bob]] ([[User talk:Robertpedley|talk]]) 21:56, 21 March 2024 (UTC) |
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Tetanus meanning transletion to khasi [[Special:Contributions/2409:4066:113:DF2E:8518:718F:AEBB:D55B|2409:4066:113:DF2E:8518:718F:AEBB:D55B]] ([[User talk:2409:4066:113:DF2E:8518:718F:AEBB:D55B|talk]]) 13:58, 9 December 2021 (UTC) |
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and chink cough should be mentioned here as historical terms for the illness. {{citation |last= |first= |contribution=chincough, ''n.'' |contribution-url=https://www.oed.com/view/Entry/31760 |date=2022 |title=Oxford English Dictionary |ref={{harvp|''OED''|2022}} |url=http://www.oed.com |location=Oxford |publisher=Oxford University Press }}. — LlywelynII 16:26, 18 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]
The section has accumulated a random list of outbreaks. This should be replaced with a paragraph on global prevalence and trends, currently missing.
WP:NOTEVERYTHING Bob (talk) 21:56, 21 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
