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"The 1945 Homestead hurricane was one of the most intense tropical cyclones to strike the U.S. state of Florida since 1935." to "The 1945 Homestead hurricane was the most intense tropical cyclones to strike the U.S. state of Florida since 1935." (assuming it was the most itnesne TC to strike FL of course). YEPacificHurricane12:55, 7 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]
"The storm made another landfall near the Georgia-South Carolina state line later on September 17." change "the storm" to "the cyclone", since you say the phrase "the storm" in the previous sentence. YEPacificHurricane12:55, 7 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]
"The storm caused significant impact in the Turks and Caicos Islands and the Bahamas, with severe damage on some islands and 22 deaths reported." to "The storm caused significant damage and 22 deaths in the Turks and Caicos Islands and the Bahamas." YEPacificHurricane12:55, 7 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]
" Most of city of Homestead was destroyed, while at the Richmond Naval Air Station, a fire ignited during the storm burned down three hangers worth $3 million (1945 USD) each. " change "of city of" to "the city of" :P YEPacificHurricane12:55, 7 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]
"The origins of the hurricane are uncertain" per whom? Honestly, I'd just delete this and start off "The hurricane was first observed on September 12 about 235 mi (380 km) east-northeast of Barbuda in the Lesser Antilles. ". YEPacificHurricane12:55, 7 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]
"The observation suggested a landfall pressure of 949 mbar (28.0 inHg), and based on the small size, suggested landfall and peak winds of 130 mph (215 km/h); this is a Category 4 on the current Saffir-Simpson scale." a few issues. Firstly, cut out "suggest landfall". Also, change "based on the small size" to "based on its small size". Thirdly, since I hate the word "this" and you should spell out SSHWS, I am going to suggest changing the last part to ", equivalent to a Category 4 on the current Saffir-Simpson hurricane wind scale.". YEPacificHurricane12:55, 7 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]
"In advance of the storm, aircraft were evacuated from the Naval Air Station in Miami, Florida.[3] In total, hundreds of planes left vulnerable locations.[4]" combine these two sentences sir. `YEPacificHurricane12:55, 7 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]
"200 people were injured at the Richmond Naval Air Station.[10] when a fire ignited during the storm, affecting three hangars worth $3 million each and destroying 25 blimps, 366 planes, and 150 automobiles. " axe the period and possible replace it with a comma. 12:55, 7 April 2014 (UTC)
"Damages to that area was estimated at $40 million.[6]" you just said it was $9 mil above! if "that area" means the entire FL/Miami area, mention it when the information ends. YEPacificHurricane12:55, 7 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]
"More than 1,000 Red Cross workers were activated in response to the cyclone.[11]" this is aftermath, not impact. (I have a solution if you keep reading). YEPacificHurricane12:55, 7 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]
I created an aftermath sentence but it would be awkward to add that sentence without any supporting information, so I kept it the same. Secretaccount16:24, 7 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]
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