Glad to take a look. The article seems to be in pretty good shape, which means my comments will probably consist mainly of nitpicks or suggestions that you can feel free to disregard. For the record, I don't know the first thing about snooker, so bear with me. (Hopefully I'll learn something!) Comments are below, in no particular order. Cheers, Extraordinary Writ (talk) 06:34, 15 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Crucible Almanac – is this reliable? It seems to be self-published: is the author "an established subject-matter expert, whose work in the relevant field has previously been published by reliable, independent publications"?
The event was sponsored by sports betting company Betfred – this would seem to fit better in the next paragraph, since at this point the 2012 championship hasn't even been mentioned yet.
as well as a qualifying draw that was played at the Pontin's, Prestatyn Sands, from 6 to 11 January. – not seeing this in the cited source. Also, might be worth linking Pontins.
Jones was also the lowest ranked player to win a second round match; ranked world number 36 – the source says he was #36, but I don't see where it says that he was the lowest ranked. Perhaps I'm missing something?
just 55 days older than Dennis Taylor and since 45-year-old Ray Reardon in 1978 – the 55-day figure doesn't seem to be in the body of the article, nor does the reference to Reardon. I also noticed that this source says that Taylor was only 40 days younger. (You could also consider removing the Taylor mention altogether: I'm not sure it's quite lead-worthy.)
announced he would take a six months sabatical – might be worth saying why, if the sources permit it.
so there is a few different reasons, O'Sullivan has commented a few reasons, the main one being burnout, but sources are pretty contradictory on the deal, and contemporary sources don't have much info on it, so I left blank. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski(talk • contribs)12:00, 22 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I'm running out of things to nitpick, so I'll put this on hold. Again, most of these points aren't critical for purposes of GA promotion, so feel free to ignore them if you like. Cheers, Extraordinary Writ (talk) 03:52, 21 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]