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Under "EVA-3":
"The Rover TV camera was having problems. Any attempt to pan up or down would cause it to flop down, leaving it pointing uselessly at the ground and requiring an astronaut to repoint it. Laster analysis would find this was from higher than expected"
Looks like something got truncated. -Mr.Logic 20:34, 17 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]
And "later" was spelt wrong, but I've corrected that, along with about 40 other errors -- Gurch 17:19, 27 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I am reluctant to be too critical of such a wonderful entry, but I think this sentence should be rewritten:
" Not only did they have to prepare Falcon, but had to don their space suits."
Would be better written as "Not only did they have to prepare Falcon, but they also had to don their space suits." chuckhawley 05:38, 17 March 2009 (UTC)
OK, here is another one:
"About seven minutes after Scott stepped outside Irwin is on the surface."
Would be better written as "About seven minutes after Scott stepped outside, Irwin reached the surface." chuckhawley Chuck Hawley (talk) 05:40, 17 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]