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This article is awful. It contradicts itself repeatedly. It says in the intro that you keep your head out of the water all the time, but then later tells you never to do that because it's bad for the spine. It says in the intro that it's the most common recreational stroke, but then goes on to talk about it as if the only people who really care about it are competitive swimmers, with constant references to FINA rules. It says you use the frog kick but then describes the whip kick. Then later it refers to the whip kick without ever defining it. Someone who knows what they're talking about should go through the whole thing and consistentize it. And all that FINA stuff should be put in its own section, since the article is supposed to be about the breaststroke, not the breaststroke in competition. Lots of people are just interested in the stroke for recreational swimming. Me, I just came to see if the current thinking advocated the frog kick or the whip kick. The article failed.
In the intro, it says that you can keep your head out of water all the time. Being a breastsroker, this is not true. While you can do it in recreiational swimming, you cannot (for speed resaons) in competiton. I was wondering how that could be worded in the intro and in the article? Thanks ----Jimktrains 21:35, 29 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]
This is going to be a running area for new world records as they come out. If a world record is announced, add a listing below for the new record and a link to the results page of the time (if you don't know what I mean, someone will find it for you!) –Pakman044 01:23, 2 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]
LCM=Long Course Meters SCM=Short Course Meters
Tatiana 03:00 Ntombezinhle (talk) 20:30, 3 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Is it called out or down? Why is it scattered throughout the article? Arnero 08:22, 12 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
It's called a pull out, but that refers to the entire action: arm pull, kicks and glides. I think that the author who wrote pull down was trying to distinguish between the pull itself and the total action.76.171.1.21 22:36, 20 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]
A pull down is the part of a pull out when you move you hands from a streamline to your side.
For as much as I hate that picture, the caption "novice level flawed breaststroke technique" sounded a little extreme. I changed it to "Recreational Breaststroke". For those on the swimming project, I have some great pics from a past meet which will be presented shortly. Tingalex 19:41, 14 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]
I think "recreational breaststroke technique" is misleading since it is infact a flawed novice level breaststroke. The current caption gives undue legitimacy to the stroke being performed.
Breastroke is considered the most efficient style. Compare this to Butterfly, which states that the butterfly style uses more energy per stroke, though is faster.
Something like this: http://www.gatorswimteam.org/2004/5/breaststroke4.jpg or this: http://www.gatorswimteam.org/2004/5/breaststroke2.jpg . Or even an animation. --Rajah (talk) 22:52, 16 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I found the detailed written descriptions of the several variants of this stroke nearly impossible to visualise.
The best way I can think of to improve them would be for the article to include videos of exemplary exponents of the breaststroke performing its variants, keyed by subtitles to numbered descriptive text paragraphs. It would also be useful to be able to slow down the videos to make it easier to analyse each component of the strokes being depicted.
Also helpful would be some accompanying diagrams showing both lateral and dorsal views of each successive stage of the variants of the stroke, likewise keyed to the descriptive text.
I believe that people wishing to learn more about the stroke and its variants and/or improve their technique would find such visual representations of the elements of the stroke far more useful than the written descriptions (though the latter clearly have their place as well, especially in explaining the physics of how the stroke works).
The internet makes it possible to present sophisticated visual aids in an easily-accessible form, and Wikipedia ought to be in the forefront in applying them...
68.102.50.219 (talk) 07:27, 3 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
This article possibly needs a diagram or animation of some sort to demonstrate the turns and possibly the minute differences between the styles of breaststroke, since it would be hard for a non-swimmer or poor swimmer to imagine how it would actually look. A description of the flat and the undulating styles of breaststroke would also be nice to supplement the animations mentioned above. Pham2 (talk) 18:46, 5 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
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I have demoted the article to "C" class, because of lack of citations, and several unresolved issues in this talk page. It is a wonderful world (talk) 22:47, 17 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
This article is one of the four competitive strokes. It is seen in every major swimming competition, linked in 100s if not 1000s of pages on wikipedia and external sites. Therefore, I have upgraded it's importance to Top. It is a wonderful world (talk) 22:48, 17 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
