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I do have some concerns regarding some bias in this article. While the information is fairly accurate for the most part, there are areas that have a very positive tone overall.
While I would not want a negative tone either, I do think it must be considered that a lot of information regarding the school is obtained from information Cal Poly SLO itself puts out, or from the 86 percent of students who are affluent that the article discusses.
One of the most stand-out areas is in relation to housing. The section on the residence halls seems very positive. It is not until several sections later that housing issues are discussed.
Considering how long the article is and how much it praises the school, it's a bit odd that the controveries are so glazed-over. This is not to say that the school is terrible, just to point out that, even if unintentionally, the article feels like it is intentionally glazing over issues and casting things in a sunny light.
Something that might help is significant reordering of sections. Instead of including race and class issues in just a couple of small areas, if the information were scattered around the article more it may give a better picture of what the school is like (for example, when dicussing future employment benefits, also discuss the L.A. Times article that says『was ranked one of the nation’s worst serving institutions for Latino student success.』Charlie Teuthis (talk) 00:37, 12 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]
San Luis Obispo along with many other places in California has issues with housing. Despite this it seems a bit unbalanced and indeed a bit slanted to blame the school for the issue. Though of course there is some exacerbated issue of supply due to a large population the issues, as ever, are due to lack of supply of affordable housing and other stock in the city rather than the student's fault. 73.70.101.72 (talk) 04:15, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The correct use of the california polytechnic state university or cal poly name is important as it creates confusion between universities. I have attached the official university branding guidelines. [1]. The title of the article also has the incorrect name, which should follow university branding guidelines and should be corrected later.Mikecurry1 (talk)
