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Maxim Lott (February 18, 2021). "Inside Wikipedia's leftist bias: socialism pages whitewashed, communist atrocities buried". Fox News. Retrieved February 18, 2021. The two main pages for "Socialism" and "Communism" span a massive 28,000 words, and yet they contain no discussion of the genocides committed by socialist and communist regimes, in which tens of millions of people were murdered and starved. "The omission of large-scale mass murder, slave labor, and man-made famines is negligent and deeply misleading," economics professor Bryan Caplan, who has studied the history of communism, told Fox News.
Hi @The History Wizard of Cambridge, I notice you recently added five images to the lead section. Images are often the first thing readers look at in articles. For that reason I prefer having no lede images in broad topic articles, such as communism is. Could you explain how you chose the current picks? There is a demonstration, a revolution, an anti-fascist victory, a Marxist–Leninist leader visiting another Marxist–Leninist ruled country, and a propaganda poster for Marxism–Leninism–Maoism. No libertarian tendency represented. –Vipz (talk) 07:05, 2 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Hello, well my 2 cents are there is no need for a lede images in broad and wide topic articles and this is exactly one of that articles. Cheers 79.101.141.7 (talk) 05:12, 3 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I apologise for my late reply to you @User:viz. I chose photographs on a basis of how iconic and recognisable they were, coupled with their effects upon history and real world events.
Communist parade (6297059793).jpg - Modern India because this represents the largest communist movement outside of a communist country active today.
Fidel Castro and his men in the Sierra Maestra.jpg - Cuban revolution. Cuba is among the longest lasting communist governments, as well as one of the few remaining, and the only one in the Americas, with Fidel Castro being one of the most easily identifiable communists in history.
Raising a flag over the Reichstag 2.jpg - The Soviet victory over Nazism. In my opinion this is the most iconic photograph ever created by communists. The only other images representing communism that are as easily recognisable are the hammer and sickle (which is in this photograph), and Che Guevara shirts which are already somewhat represented by the Cuban revolution image.
Bundesarchiv Bild 183-48550-0036, Besuch Ho Chi Minhs bei Pionieren, bei Berlin.jpg - Ho Chi Minh in East Germany. This one I was on the fence for but I wanted to find an example of both an iconic communist practitioner, who also had a large effect on real world events, and represented some form of interaction between different communists.
Marxismo Leninismo Pensamiento Maotsetung.jpgArtistic poster of marx, engels, lenin, stalin, and Mao. As the five communists whose theories and actions have had the most influence upon real world events, this needs little explanation, though I also wanted to include an image I felt was typical of communist art and culture, hence why I chose an art piece.
Over-representation ?
You mentioned that there are "no libertarian tendency" represented in the images, and that Marxist-Leninists are over-represented. This is likely because Marxist-Leninist communists are responsible for the vast majority of communist revolutions and governments, while "libertarian communist" have had relatively little noticeable effect on real world events. While Marxist-Leninists had military, scientific, and economic superpowers, libertarian communists don't appear to have made much of an impact on world history. That is not a comment on which ideology is supposedly more correct, that's just how it looks from a historical viewpoint. The History Wizard of Cambridge (talk) 18:22, 5 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I didn't think much of an explanation or debate is even needed to explain why those images were inappropriate, especially for such a diverse political topic. However I will partially explain my reasoning for removing these images specifically.
The reasoning for the inclusion of these images you've provided doesn't justify inclusion. The first image you suggested certainly couldn't be described as major or important, the only justification given is because it is modern and therefore relevant. The size of a "communist movement" isn't just defined by party membership to begin with so even the very claim itself that it is the largest movement outside of a communist country is doubtful.
The main issue with including the image of the Cuban revolution is that revolutions aren't really the focus of this article and this article doesn't really focus on Cuba and no reason is given as to why this revolution is of special importance. It is also factually incorrect to say that it was the only Communist government to have existed in the Americas.
The Reichstag flag image is iconic but it isn't really associated with Communism so much as it is associated with the Soviet Union and WW2 which is why it generally appears in articles and books on those topics as opposed to ones on Communism. The facts that it includes a hammer and sickle or that it is an iconic image created by communists are not justifications for including the image in the lead.
The Ho Chi Minh image also has issues but since you were "on the fence" for this image it seems unnecessary to explain my reasoning for removing it.
"Artistic poster of marx, engels, lenin, stalin, and Mao" is a charitable way of describing a propaganda poster of which there are countless. The inclusion of propaganda posters isn't necessarily an issue but in what way is this poster representative of Communist art and culture? Communism encompassed multiple different countries and billions of people over a century since the October Revolution which literally cannot be represented by one poster. By chosing one poster that isn't really very notable it can appear as if you are suggesting that one country or viewpoint is more important or correct than another.
There are many, many more issues with these images but fundamentaly the main issue is that images were included in the lead in the first place, not what the images are. Much of the criteria you've laid out feels arbitrary(why do forms of interaction between different communists need to be included?) and self contradicting. Regardless of how "correct" Communism is it is often associated with economic backwardness and starvation. It is also often associated with massive military and technological development, cults of personality and liberatarianism among other things. This is a "High-importance" article on Liberatarianism after all. Originalcola (talk) 19:33, 8 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
So I saw the Bozoki para was removed. I didn't remove it myself because whether it should be included depends on two questions:
1) Is his (rather confused and likely incorrect) opinion regarding the history of communism WP:DUE2) If it is WP:DUE was the statement accredited to him accurately recorded or was it garbled? Let's discuss.
I'll note I'm not particularly familiar with Bozoki. I'm not impressed with what I see here but my level of impression isn't a criterion for inclusion or exclusion on Wikipedia (alas). Simonm223 (talk) 12:03, 16 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I removed it because the very long-winded and jumbled paragraph contradicted itself, and tried to create very blanket statements. For example, it said that a bonus of communism was greater rights for women but a negative was "less freedom", as if to imply women having equal rights isn't freedom. It also said that communist movements created xenophobia, which is extremely bizarre when you consider that most communist parties were a century ahead of most other movements when it came to race relations.
Because of widespread usual primary use and relevance of this word,
I think that Communism should rather be primarily defined as a mode of government that is justified with an ideology wherein the state would ultimately wither away, rather than primarily as the apparently practically irrelevant ideal of that ideology. 2A02:3038:413:E801:1:0:4F77:A487 (talk) 04:33, 1 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I think there is quite a lack of balance surrounding opinions in this section, with approximately two thirds of loaded (i.e., opinions) statements somewhat defensive of communism, and the remaining third critical. (about 70% and 30% respectively). Here's my breakdown of most of the section. I shall use blue as those defensive of communism / critical of anti-communism, and red for those critical of communism.
Anti-communism developed as soon as communism became a conscious political movement in the 19th century, and anti-communist mass killings have been reported against alleged communists, or their alleged supporters, which were committed by anti-communists and political organizations or governments opposed to communism. The communist movement has faced opposition since it was founded and the opposition to it has often been organized and violent. Many of these anti-communist mass killing campaigns, primarily during the Cold War,[270][271] were supported by the United States and its Western Bloc allies,[272][273] including those who were formally part of the Non-Aligned Movement, such as the Indonesian mass killings of 1965–66 and Operation Condor in South America.[274][275]
The higher estimates have been criticized by several scholars as ideologically motivated and inflated; they are also criticized for being inaccurate due to incomplete data, inflated by counting any excess death, making an unwarranted link to communism, and the grouping and body-counting itself.
Higher estimates are criticized for being based on sparse and incomplete data when significant errors are inevitable, skewed to higher possible values, and that victims of civil wars, the Holodomor and other famines, and war-related events should not be included.
These scholars state that most Communist states did not engage in mass killings
Opponents of this view argue that these killings were aberrations caused by specific authoritarian regimes, and not caused by communism itself, and point to mass deaths in wars and famines that they argue were caused by colonialism, capitalism, and anti-communism as a counterpoint to those killings.[303][304] According to Dovid Katz and other historians, a historical revisionist view of the double genocide theory,[305][306] equating mass deaths under Communist states with the Holocaust, is popular in Eastern European countries and the Baltic states, and their approaches of history have been incorporated in the European Union agenda,[307] among them the Prague Declaration in June 2008 and the European Day of Remembrance for Victims of Stalinism and Nazism, which was proclaimed by the European Parliament in August 2008 and endorsed by the OSCE in Europe in July 2009. Among many scholars in Western Europe, the comparison of the two regimes and equivalence of their crimes has been, and still is, widely rejected
Defenders of communism on the political left say that the deaths were caused by specific authoritarian regimes and not communism as an ideology, while also pointing to anti-communist mass killings and deaths in wars that they argue were caused by capitalism and anti-communism as a counterpoint to the deaths under Communist states.[271][48][301]
The "victims of Communism" concept,[311] has become accepted scholarship, as part of the double genocide theory, in Eastern Europe and among anti-communists in general;[312] it is rejected by some Western European[307] and other scholars, especially when it is used to equate Communism and Nazism, which is seen by scholars as a long-discredited perspective.[313] The narrative posits that famines and mass deaths by Communist states can be attributed to a single cause and that communism, as "the deadliest ideology in history", or in the words of Jonathan Rauch as "the deadliest fantasy in human history",[314] represents the greatest threat to humanity.[301] Proponents posit an alleged link between communism, left-wing politics, and socialism with genocide, mass killing, and totalitarianism,[315] with some authors, such as George Watson, advocating a common history stretching from Marx to Adolf Hitler.[298] Some right-wing authors allege that Marx was responsible for Nazism and the Holocaust.[316]
Most experts agree there was a significant increase in mortality rates following the years 1989 and 1991, including a 2014 World Health Organization report which concluded that the "health of people in the former Soviet countries deteriorated dramatically after the collapse of the Soviet Union."[324] Post-Communist Russia during the IMF-backed economic reforms of Boris Yeltsin experienced surging economic inequality and poverty as unemployment reached double digits by the early to mid 1990s.[325][326] By contrast, the Central European states of the former Eastern Bloc–Czech Republic, Hungary, Poland, and Slovakia–showed healthy increases in life expectancy from the 1990s onward, compared to nearly thirty years of stagnation under Communism.[327] Bulgaria and Romania followed this trend after the introduction of more serious economic reforms in the late 1990s.[328][329] The economies of Eastern Bloc countries had previously experienced stagnation in the 1980s under Communism.[330] A common expression throughout Eastern Europe after 1989 was "everything they told us about communism was a lie, but everything they told us about capitalism was true."[324]: 192
The average post-Communist country had returned to 1989 levels of per-capita GDP by 2005.[332] However, Branko Milanović wrote in 2015 that following the end of the Cold War, many of those countries' economies declined to such an extent during the transition to capitalism that they have yet to return to the point they were prior to the collapse of communism.[333] Several scholars state that the negative economic developments in post-Communist countries after the fall of Communism led to increased nationalist sentiment and nostalgia for the Communist era.[48][334][335] In 2011, The Guardian published an analysis of the former Soviet countries twenty years after the fall of the USSR. They found that "GDP fell as much as 50 percent in the 1990s in some republics... as capital flight, industrial collapse, hyperinflation and tax avoidance took their toll", but that there was a rebound in the 2000s, and by 2010 "some economies were five times as big as they were in 1991." Life expectancy has grown since 1991 in some of the countries, but fallen in others; likewise, some held free and fair elections, while others remained authoritarian.[336] By 2019, the majority of people in most Eastern European countries approved of the shift to multiparty democracy and a market economy, with approval being highest among residents of Poland and residents in the territory of what was once East Germany, and disapproval being the highest among residents of Russia and Ukraine. In addition, 61 percent said that standards of living were now higher than they had been under Communism, while only 31 percent said that they were worse, with the remaining 8 percent saying that they did not know or that standards of living had not changed.[337]
Political theorist and professor Jodi Dean argues that this limits the scope of discussion around political alternatives to capitalism and neoliberalism. Dean argues that, when people think of capitalism, they do not consider what are its worst results (climate change, economic inequality, hyperinflation, the Great Depression, the Great Recession, the robber barons, and unemployment) because the history of capitalism is viewed as dynamic and nuanced; the history of communism is not considered dynamic or nuanced, and there is a fixed historical narrative of communism that emphasizes authoritarianism, the gulag, starvation, and violence.[339][340] Ghodsee,[i] along with the historians Gary Gerstle and Walter Scheidel, suggest that the rise and fall of communism had a significant impact on the development and decline of labor movements and social welfare states in the United States and other Western societies. Gerstle argues that organized labor in the United States was strongest when the threat of communism reached its peak, and the decline of both organized labor and the welfare state coincided with the collapse of communism. Both Gerstle and Scheidel posit that as economic elites in the West became more fearful of possible communist revolutions in their own societies, especially as the tyranny and violence associated with communist governments became more apparent, the more willing they were to compromise with the working class, and much less so once the threat waned.[341][342]
Total: 1240 words
The right-libertarian think tank Cato Institute has stated that the analyses done of post-communist countries in the 1990s were "premature" and "that early and rapid reformers by far outperformed gradual reformers" on GDP per capita, the United Nations Human Development Index and political freedom, in addition to developing better institutions. The institute also stated that the process of privatization in Russia was "deeply flawed" due to Russia's reforms being "far less rapid" than those of Central Europe and the Baltic states.[331]
In contrast, Austrian-American economist Ludwig von Mises argued that by abolishing free markets, communist officials would not have the price system necessary to guide their planned production.[269]
Many authors have written about excess deaths under Communist states and mortality rates,[note 5] such as excess mortality in the Soviet Union under Joseph Stalin.[note 6] Some authors posit that there is a Communist death toll, whose death estimates vary widely, depending on the definitions of the deaths that are included in them, ranging from lows of 10–20 million to highs over 100 million.
Others have argued that, while certain estimates may not be accurate, "quibbling about numbers is unseemly. What matters is that many, many people were killed by communist regimes."[48]
Benjamin Valentino proposes the category of Communist mass killing, alongside colonial, counter-guerrilla, and ethnic mass killing, as a subtype of dispossessive mass killing to distinguish it from coercive mass killing
Some authors, such as John Gray,[294] Daniel Goldhagen,[295] and Richard Pipes,[296] consider the ideology of communism to be a significant causative factor in mass killings. Some connect killings in Joseph Stalin's Soviet Union, Mao Zedong's China, and Pol Pot's Cambodia on the basis that Stalin influenced Mao, who influenced Pol Pot; in all cases, scholars say killings were carried out as part of a policy of an unbalanced modernization process of rapid industrialization.[56][note 12]
Some authors and politicians, such as George G. Watson, allege that genocide was dictated in otherwise forgotten works of Karl Marx.[298][299] Many commentators on the political right point to the mass deaths under Communist states, claiming them as an indictment of communism.[300][301][302]
Critics of communism on the political right point to the excess deaths under Communist states as an indictment of communism as an ideology.[300][301][302]
Some authors, as Stéphane Courtois, propose a theory of equivalence between class and racial genocide.[317] It is supported by the Victims of Communism Memorial Foundation, with 100 million being the most common estimate used from The Black Book of Communism despite some of the authors of the book distancing themselves from the estimates made by Stephen Courtois.[48] Various museums and monuments have been constructed in remembrance of the victims of Communism, with support of the European Union and various governments in Canada, Eastern Europe, and the United States.[66][67] Works such as The Black Book of Communism and Bloodlands legitimized debates on the comparison of Nazism and Stalinism,[317][318] and by extension communism, and the former work in particular was important in the criminalization of communism.[66][67] According to Freedom House, Communism is "considered one of the two great totalitarian movements of the 20th century", the other being Nazism, but added that "there is an important difference in how the world has treated these two execrable phenomena.":[319]
The failure of Communist governments to live up to the ideal of a communist society, their general trend towards increasing authoritarianism, their bureaucracy, and the inherent inefficiencies in their economies have been linked to the decline of communism in the late 20th century.[1][44][45] Walter Scheidel stated that despite wide-reaching government actions, Communist states failed to achieve long-term economic, social, and political success.[320] The experience of the dissolution of the Soviet Union, the North Korean famine, and alleged economic underperformance when compared to developed free market systems are cited as examples of Communist states failing to build a successful state while relying entirely on what they view as orthodox Marxism.[321][322][page needed]
Conservatives, liberals, and social democrats generally view 20th-century Communist states as unqualified failures.
Total: 658 words
My rationale for these highlights: language emphasising the violence of anti-communism, the notion that some right-wingers describe Marx as responsible for the Holocaust, emphasis on rejection of the "100 million" made-up statistic - or rejection of the "Victims of Communism" concept -, and on the notion that state-sanctioned violence under "socialist" states were aberrations - these are all clearly defensive to varying degrees, either in defence of communism or criticism of the opposition to communism (colored in red). I have nothing wrong with the majority of the cited material here. Please note that these highlightings are entirely my own opinion; please write if you disagree my assessment of imbalance.
So, by sheer A) word count, it certainly does appear significantly tilted to one side. But that skew is not necessarily bad in itself, only that it would require the academic and reliable-source consensus to be so skewed. But is that the case? I am not sure, but let's look at two more things: firstly, B) structure, and I will conclude not by merely saying that this article is unfixable, nor a great wrong (as many conspiratorial IP editors have done for years), but by writing C) other topics which are vastly sourced in relation to the topic of the analysis and reception of communism, and are more relevant than some of the arguments present - both on the critical and defensive sides.
STRUCTURE
Reception
For the reception section, there is Paczkowski's statement about how hopeful communism seemed to many, followed by Mises' clear rejection of communism due to lack of price signals.
Then, an entire paragraph - which fills half of the "reception" section - focuses on anti-communism. The entirety of this paragraph focuses not on anti-communist intellectuals or critical opinion, but solely of organised, violent repression, such as mass killings during the Cold War.
From this section as "reception", it 1) summarises virtually nothing about how communists, socialists, and various other sympathetic groups have received communism itself. That should indeed be commented on briefly, both a small summary of how a) some view the regimes in history as aberrations, b) some moved to the right (an example would perhaps be the Social Democratic Party of Germany, and c) some view the regimes as a success to some degree, as Ther writes later. 2) It describes anti-communism only in relation to organised mass killings and violence; that absolutely must be mentioned, but to shorten "anti-communism" under the reception section to solely that is clearly misguided; there is a vast amount of anti-communist material that can be sourced - I have linked some under "other topics".
Excess mortality in Communist states
The first paragraph describes the "death toll", from lows of about 20 million, to highs of approx. 100 million. The following sentence criticises the higher estimates, methodology, and the "unwarranted" links with communism. This is excessive focus on the "100 million" figure, which is a figure supported by very few historians, including anti-communists - incl. Courtois' co-authors, like Werth and Margolin. The counter-critique to the mention of the death toll is not to acknowledge that tens of millions died under "socialist" regimes, but solely to criticise the upper estimates. While I absolutely agree that the fact that some historians like Courtois have had agendas and dubious estimates against communism, this does not need to be mentioned as a sort-of rebuttal per se to the very fact that millions died. The very fact is that millions died, and indeed Ghodsee and Sehon's quote acknowledges this.
Furthermore, the critique of those pointing out excess mortality says this: the suggestion that "victims of civil wars, the Holodomor and other famines, and war-related events should not be included". That is outright obnoxious; the subject is "excess mortality" - and then it is suggested that famines, wars, etc. shouldn't be included? They perhaps wouldn't be relevant for a section on "mass killing", but this is completely different; there was historically undeniable high excess mortality during periods throughout e.g., the USSR and China's histories, the vast vast majority of such excess mortality being directly related to war and famine. That is undeniable, and thus an argument is incorrectly inferred from these sources to "not include" them. Someone probably this copy-pasted from the Mass killings article, which is a different topic than "excess mortality".
In my opnion, the next paragraph is mostly fine, describing notions of "genocide", "classicide", and related terms, with opnions from both "most Communist states did not engage in mass killings" and Gray et. al's opinion that communist ideology played a role.
The next paragraph is completely unbalanced. The opinion, "Many commentators on the political right point to the mass deaths under Communist states, claiming them as an indictment of communism" is presented, (of 21 words), followed by a 158-word outright rejection of this notion, including: what is frankly whataboutism† of mass killings under capitalist regimes (a completely different topic that may be only tangentially relevant): Katz's rejection of the "double genocide theory" as a response seems like a strawman† [a], as this is the only opinion presented regarding comparisons with Nazism (some academics and historians, for instance compare Stalinism and Nazism, some don't - the former isn't mentioned). The section closes with the notion that comparisons are widely rejected in Western Europe. Regarding structure, this is a particularly egregious example of an anti-communist opinion that supports an "indictment" of communism being met by entirely tangential whataboutist and strawman responses; such opinions in that 158-word rejection are not inherently bad, only that they must be in response to something - there are no opinions of academics such as Snyder, Nolte, Brzezinski (and more which I will get to) are presented that do compare Communist regimes and Nazism. Furthermore, there is Katz's mention of the "double genocide theory" associated with the support of far-right conspiracy theorists, such as in the Baltics. Therefore, anti-communist opinions are ignored from academics, and mentions of them are supposedly relevant when considering far-right extremists; this paragraph clearly reads like a dismissal of anti-communism in its entirety as un-academic or extremist in some way.
Mermory and legacy
The first paragraph commits to the same structure: at first, a critical (of communism) opinion of 23 words, describing the aforementioned "indictment" of communism as an ideology, followed by a 52-word defensive rebuttal that describes excess deaths as due not to communism, with the repeated notion of deaths under capitalism as a "counterpoint". Because both the critical and defensive rebuttals are entirely repeated here from the last two paragraphs of Excess mortality in Communist states, I suggest removing this paragraph from "Critics of communism on the political right..." onwards.
I am mostly fine with the second paragraph; it clearly presents the defensive (of communist) view as "Victims of Communism" often relating to the "double genocide theory", rejecting comparisons of Nazism and Communism. I support this relevant mention, although this statement onwards describes a clearly widespread view among anti-communists, "Proponents posit an alleged link between communism, left-wing politics, and socialism with genocide, mass killing, and totalitarianism", followed by a clearly fringe view, "Some right-wing authors allege that Marx was responsible for Nazism and the Holocaust" - Again, this suggests a degree of absurdity in anti-communist arguments, by employing the motte-and-bailey fallacy to say that "some anti-communists even believe X!"; we should be focused on what anti-communists generally believe.
The next paragraph presents the critical (of communism) view, with various mentions of the criminalization of communism in the public sphere to give a degree of balance. I support this paragraph, and the next one, which describes both the communist's supposed failure to live up to their proposed society, while also mentioning Ther's acknowledgement that live had in some ways improved.
The next two paragraphs - 501 words - describe the quality of life dropping after communist regimes had fell in the 1990s. I think that this material should be merged into one paragraph. Should the "legacy" of communism be focused on how bad the aftermath of it was? I think that 1990s capitalist tyranny which caused potentially millions of excess deaths should be mentioned, but "legacy" certainly also the legacy of history long before the 1990s, such as the legacy of Stalin, or indeed outside Europe, such as Mao, who isn't even mentioned at all in this section.
The final paragraph definitely is unbalanced. A 13-word quotation "...as unqualified failures" is presented, followed by a 225-word section from the other side, firstly by Dean, then by Ghodsee, Scheidel, et. al. The description of "failure of communist regimes" as "unqualified" to be met by a 20x-larger critique that starts by saying "this limits the scope of discussion around political alternatives to capitalism and neoliberalism" is clearly very unbalanced. I agree with the mention of these 225 words, but it seriously feels like only one side is being presented. I have some suggestions below for further quotes to be used.
C) OTHER TOPICS
So, here are topics I think are relevant to add, regarding reception and analysis, and many of these I think are much more relevant than arguments I mentioned under (C). Many of these are already sourced and mentioned in articles such as Mass killings under communist regimes (an article which I think shouldn't exist as SYNTH, only with some of its contents included in this article), and Comparison of Nazism and Stalinism.
In 2005, professor Benjamin Valentino stated that the number of non-combatants killed by communist regimes in the Soviet Union, China, and Cambodia alone ranged from a low of 21 million to a high of 70 million.[2]
Political scientist Rudolph Rummel and historian Mark Bradley have written that, while the exact numbers have been in dispute, the order of magnitude is not.[3][4]
According to historian Klas-Göran Karlsson, discussions of the number of victims of communist regimes have been "extremely extensive and ideologically biased."[5] - this quotation seems relevant for the first paragraph, instead of the unquoted source that begins "The higher estimates have been criticized by several scholars..."
Daniel Goldhagen argues that 20th century communist regimes "have killed more people than any other regime type."[6] - This could be a relevant quote, as this section merely mentions Goldhagen, Pipes et. al, without providing any of their quotations.
Benjamin Valentino writes: "Although not all the deaths due to famine in these cases were intentional, communist leaders directed the worst effects of famine against their suspected enemies and used hunger as a weapon to force millions of people to conform to the directives of the state."[7] - this could be a good quotation for the first paragraph, as it addresses the slight ambiguity surrounding famines; famines were not necessarily unintentional.
For Memory and legacy:
The European Parliament has designated August 23 as the Black Ribbon Day, a Europe-wide day of remembrance for victims of the 20th-century totalitarian and authoritarian regimes.[8]
Mention of legacy outside Europe and former-USSR
Mention of the totalitarian model (debate) and its critics
Other general potential areas:
The effects of collectivization in Communist states
Comparisons with anti-communist mass killings
Examples of communist terrorism (so long as they are adequately sourced in relation to "reception", "excess mortality" or "memory and legacy")
Anarchist opposition to communism (under "reception" section)
Anti-communist former communists, e.g., writers of The God that Failed, and Kolakowski's Main Currents of Marxism
"Historical Legacy of the Communist Party of the Soviet Union and Inequality" - Evidence from Post-Communist Regionshttps://digital.csic.es/bitstream/10261/201912/3/Libman_Obydenkova_Inequality.pdf
Removed "Higher estimates are criticized for being based on sparse and incomplete data when significant errors are inevitable, skewed to higher possible values, and that victims of civil wars, the Holodomor and other famines, and war-related events should not be included."
Added just two quotations:
Daniel Goldhagen argues that 20th century communist regimes "have killed more people than any other regime type."[6] to the second paragraph of "Excess mortality"
Political scientist Rudolph Rummel and historian Mark Bradley have written that, while the exact numbers have been in dispute, the order of magnitude is not.[3][4] - to the end of the first paragraph of "Excess mortality".
I hope some of my further criticisms above will be taken account into further proposed changes, as I think that this section of the article is very tedious, like any "reception" and "legacy" section.
^†P.S. My criticisms of "strawmen" and "whataboutism" does not mean the content I referred to should be removed; such content acting like sorts of "strawman" and "whataboutism" is because no opposing view is provided at all.
Balabce doesn't mean that we provide equivalence to pro and anti-communist positions, but that we provide weight appropriate to the literature. There are actually three positions here, in order to weight in reliable sources: mainstream, communist and anti-communist. They could be described respectively as majority, minority and fringe.
Articles for example do not give equal weight to opinions expressed in the Washington Times and in the Washington Post. TFD (talk) 16:47, 29 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
"could be described respectively as majority, minority and fringe"; one could say that, but like I said, I don't know if it's the case that there is such a scew. The impetus of my post was that I have seen eschewed historical context and sources, such as "reception" consisting almost entirely of the brutality of anti-communism. That's why I have added additional sources, but I still think much more needs changed. Zilch-nada (talk) 22:31, 29 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
In order to determine the weight of the material in the article, you need to look at books about communism. The article is already skewed toward a fringe perspective that makes it read like something written in the 50s. Mises and Goldhagen for example are not experts on communism so there's no reason to provide their opinions.
Richard Pipes was an expert of sorts, but much of his interpretation turned out to be false. The Soviet Union for example was not leading the arms race and was not a threat to th U.S. in the 1980s. TFD (talk) 22:46, 29 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
"was not a threat to the US" is quite subjective, especially given that the USSR was engaged in imperialist warfare in Afghanistan; detente wasn't so clear at all. Zilch-nada (talk) 23:15, 29 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I don't understand how Soviet warfare in Afghanistan was a threat to the U.S., considering that if Kabul is 7,000 miles away from Washington. A lot of dominoes would have to fall before it became a problem with Georgetown homeowners.
Pipes falsely claimed that the Soviets had submarines so sophisticated that the U.S. could not detect them. He knew they were sophisticated because the U.S. could not detect them. Of course, this was irrational circular paranoid reasoning. Why should opinions of people who made claims that had no credibility even when they were made be given any weight?
I agree that the experts used on mass killings under Communist regimes have little relevance to the topic. But mass killings has little relevance to the topic, based on the literature about communism. It's more a reflection of what some editors consider important. Notice for example that the article on Nazism spends far less space on their genocide and responsibility for WWII. TFD (talk) 04:21, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Regarding the skew in the "Reception" sections, we have a significant issue in the lack of a WP:Global perspective in this area. It is a failure of due weight that we do not yet have perspectives of Chinese Marxists (consider that the CPC is one of the largest political parties in the world, and China's is the longest tenured socialist government in history). I understand of course editors' language limitations but we are quite parochial at the moment. JArthur1984 (talk) 15:25, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, I did mention the potential inclusion of Mao in the "legacy" section. But you strangely insist on Chinese Marxists, not academic commentary on China in general. Why? Zilch-nada (talk) 16:37, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Odd response. It reads as though you think it is a "Gotcha!" of some sort. First, I haven't "insisted" on anything. Second, I already explained my rationale in the parenthetical already. To phrase it another way, we are missing a major school of analysis on the subject. JArthur1984 (talk) 02:27, 31 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
We're not just missing a "major school" covering China, but any coverage of China whatsoever. Seriously note WP:NPOV, regarding not only any inclusion of China but the insistence on a specific "major school". We need to find sources covering China first, regarding "analysis" of communism. Zilch-nada (talk) 09:23, 31 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The weight of different aspects must be determined by coverage in the literature. For example, what degree of coverage would a standard textbook on communism give to China or to mass killing or to socialist realism art? Before complaining about balance in the article, you need to establish this. See Wikipedia:Neutral point of view and for more information. An American who sleeps with his guns in his bomb shelter at night will have a different perspective than an unemployed villager in a third world country about to be hired by the Belt and Road initiative. TFD (talk) 22:27, 30 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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