I will be picking up the review of this one - both for the Wiki Cup and the GA cup as well. I will be making my review comments over the next couple of days.
"studying medicine he began working" should have a comma after the introduction so "studying medicine, he began working"
Y
"in around 1999" can be simplified to "around 1999"
Y
This part confuses me " (including as the and US President Barack Obama's visit to Australia in November 2011." not as well written as the rest of the article, please reword this.
Y Done, oops.
The "Africa Branch" section really does not have enough info in it to warrant it's own section, can you add some details or perhaps merge it with the previous section?
How's what I did? Can always merge it into another section if you think tha
It's a pretty short article, 606 words of "written prose" (excluding info boxes etc.) but it's not so short I would automatically fail it for not being broad enough.
Since the criteria is "broad" and not comprehensive this is broad enough Y
@Callanecc: - So that's my complete review, pretty quick since it's a short article. I am going to put this on hold for 7 days to allow for improvements to be made. Let me know when you're ready for me to review again. MPJ-US04:47, 11 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]