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Review Comment
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1. Well-written:
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1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.
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The prose is of good quality
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.
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MOS guidelines mostly followed. The lead section could be expanded to better summarize the article contents. Mention of D. texanus in the lead is confusing. I am happy with the improvements made.
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2. Verifiable with no original research:
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2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.
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References are well formatted.
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2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
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Article is well referenced.
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2c. it contains no original research.
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Not that I can see.
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3. Broad in its coverage:
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3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.
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Article has been expanded along the lines of my previous comment.
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3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).
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It stays focussed.
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
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Not a problem.
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
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Article was created by nominator 10 months ago and has only received minor modifications since.
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6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
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6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.
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Images are appropriately licensed.
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6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.
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Images are relevant and well-captioned. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:02, 1 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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7. Overall assessment.
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All criteria now met. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 14:25, 2 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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