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Talk:Harold Agnew/GA1
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< Talk:Harold Agnew
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Reviewer: Seattle (talk · contribs) 13:30, 26 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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I'll review this soon. Seattle (talk) 13:30, 26 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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No DAB links, no dead links. The source url for the badge images, the infobox image, and the "30 years of service" image is not specific enough.
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They've just been taken down at the original site. Fortunately, we archived them on Commons. Added link to archive site.
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Ref 26 needs an ndash. Ref 1 needs a page range ndash.
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Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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The PDF file references could use a "|format=PDF" parameter.
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Why? They have the PDF icon. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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Can you justify the reliability of the "Nuclear Diner" reference?
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It's just about where his ashes are. The site is a blog, run by three women who have worked at LASL. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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"Cockcroft-Walton" needs an ndash.
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Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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"From 1961 to 1964" watch caps
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Corrected. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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Nothing on his death in the lead?
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It's right there in the first sentence.
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A sentence on his death would be beneficial to summarize the "later life" section and give closure to the lead. Seattle (talk) 10:48, 28 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:40, 28 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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"He witnessing the" past here
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Correct. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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Can you link "telemetering" somewhere, or explain what it is?
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Yes, there is an article on it. Linked. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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"Fellow postgraduate student" plural here
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Corrected. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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I would like to hear more on when he served as a Senator for New Mexico. Certainly there's more on what he supported and his actions in the Senate.
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So would I. Got a source? Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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Have you looked for sources? Seattle (talk) 10:48, 28 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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Yes. That's where I got the rest of the article from. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:40, 28 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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I could not find much, but I added what little I had. Hawkeye7 (talk) 08:30, 29 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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Can you link "Eastern bloc" somewhere?
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Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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Wall Street Journal needs italics
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Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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"illegal means.". double period.
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Corrected. Hawkeye7 (talk) 03:29, 28 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Other than the Senator issue, most concerns are minor and fixable. I will re-look when these issues are responded to. Seattle (talk) 13:52, 27 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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