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Henry IV, part 1 → TBD – The "P" in "Part" should definitely be capitalized. I'd like to see the consensus on Roman versus Arabic numerals and comma versus no comma before moving the page, though; hence {{moveoptions}}. — Quuxplusone 02:05, 30 July 2005 (UTC)[reply]
Are the ideas of "ideal king" and Machiavel neccessarily mutually exclusive? Arguably Hal became the ideal Machiavellian king? Without any more detail about what is meant by "ideal king" the section is a bit unclear; would the author care to expand upon their concept of ideal king? --Trithemius 00:55, 5 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]
There are several factual errors in the "Plot" section:
Moreover, "drowsy and pudgy" hardly describes Falstaff -- "fat, vital, and clownish" comes closer.-- Jrmccall 00:01, 5 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]
In "Themes and Interpretations" the phrase "prolix inventions" is not useful -- it has no referent, either in Wikipedia or on Google. Moreover, while it is true that several of the characters are prolix -- Hal, Falstaff, Hotspur, even old Henry Bolingbroke (let's face it, Shakespeare usually gives lots of words to his major characters!) -- and much may be revealed thereby, yet they are not, in general, re-inventing themselves -- or if they are, it is not through prolixity (Bolingbroke, of course, reinvented himself in Richard II as a king). And Falstaff, who exhales falsehood, rarely expects to be believed. Others tell truth (lubricated by the usual lies of social life), or cautiously evade it. In Part 2, Justice Shallow is an old fabricator, or may just be deluded about his supposed wild youth. But the most outrageous liar in Part 2, Prince John of Lancaster, is hardly prolix, and his treacherous lie more reveals than re-invents him.
So I feel that sentence to be more confusing than enlightening, and am removing it. -- Jrmccall 15:27, 5 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]
It is completely untrue that there is a widespread consensus Part II is worse than Part I. To many Part II is considered the better play and it is rare, even in Shakespeare, to find more profound and moving scenes than Henry IV on his deathbed. The reason Hal and Falstaff meet sporadically is to show that Falstaff is losing touch with Henry and Henry is completing his transition into a worthy heir.It demonstrates that their relationship is coming to an end and Falstaff is no longer worthy of a place in the Prince's life. Matt_Wilk
The section on "Oldcastle Controversy" contains a sentence which appears to have been copied from somewhere else, because it inappropriately refers to Part 1 as a previous play: "The name was changed to "Falstaff", based on Sir John Fastolf, an historical person with a reputation for cowardice at the Battle of Patay, and whom Shakespeare had previously represented in Henry VI, Part 1". I'm not sure if we should just remove that last clause or whether the author had another, similar phrase in mind. GCL (talk) 16:14, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Again, the section on the Oldcastle Controversy -- is there any reason that the link to Sir John Oldcastle links to the play titled "Sir John Oldcastle" versus the historical figure's page ("John Oldcastle," without the Sir)? Looks to me like the text is talking about the person, not the play. Ministry of Silly Walks (talk) 14:52, 3 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
reading the linked article on the meaning of this latin term suggests the wrong term was used here. Apparently, it should either be terminus post quem (date after which) or terminus a quo. The phrase given apparently refers to "latest possible date" of composition of an uncertain text, rather than "earliest possible date". PaulHammond (talk) 20:52, 9 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
The cast list remarks that Henry IV is sometimes referred to as Bolingbroke or Lancaster, his lesser titles. Perhaps it should be added that referring to the King this way is a subtle insult, implying that he does not deserve the title of king and is "really" just the Duke of Lancaster or Mr. Bolingbroke. CharlesTheBold (talk) 03:57, 20 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]
The synopsis section needs to be edited for grammar, punctuation, and clarity. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2604:2000:EEE3:1900:C5BC:48AC:C665:8C68 (talk) 21:47, 19 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Does anyone know what the Auden reference in the "Themes and Interpretations" section (to which I just added "better source needed") is a reference to? His『Lectures on Shakespeare (1946–47, reconstructed and ed. by Arthur Kirsch, Princeton, 2001)』maybe? Dingsuntil (talk) 12:00, 1 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Not sure how to work this in, but given the forthcoming publication of a new Oxford edition that says Marlowe co-wrote it, he clearly needs to be mentioned in this article. Telegraph article announcing the ascription. --Haruo (talk) 14:44, 24 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]