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< Talk:Hydrus

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sasata (talk · contribs) 21:08, 30 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I usually review these at FAC anyways, so might as well get my nitpicks out of the way. Comments in a couple of days. Sasata (talk) 21:08, 30 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

god-damn, I'll remember that one of these days....linked Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 04:31, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
tweaked Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 04:31, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
tweaked Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 04:31, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
capped Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 05:32, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
hyphenated Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 05:32, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
capped Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 05:32, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
tweaked Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 05:32, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
linked Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 05:32, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Hydrus' tail. He reduced the size of it to make a new constellation in the night sky. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 05:32, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I don't either - that is where the constellation material was placed. Weird. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 05:32, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
twaeked Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 05:32, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
chest, then. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 05:32, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I tried this essentially he called three pairs of stars - Eta1 and Eta2, Pi1 and Pi2, and Tau1 and Tau2...clearer? Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:48, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
hyphenated and linked at first instance Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:55, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
done Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:55, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
hydrogen - added Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:55, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
done Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:55, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
just means nearby our sun. I could write "near the sun" but might be a bit repetitive. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 14:09, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I have removed the second sentence as it is subjective...actually they both are. "bright" in this case I suspect means anything of magnitude 3 and brighter, which is a very small minority of visible stars. The south celestial pole region is otherwise populated by very faint stars... Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 14:09, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
done Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:00, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
done Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 13:54, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
done - though supereruption is for volcanoes... Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 13:54, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
yes Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:00, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
correct - would a "once" slipped in help clarify that here? Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:00, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
done Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:00, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
done Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:10, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
done Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 13:44, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
done Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:10, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
added Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 13:44, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
removed Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:10, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
delinked Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:10, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
none - this is a recently defined fairly faint south polar constellation..... Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:55, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
no real point linking that anywhere as it is unclear which snake it'd be anyway, hence delinked Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 13:44, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
added Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 02:32, 17 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
damn, overlooked that -added Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 02:32, 17 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
tweaked Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 02:32, 17 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
de-pronouned Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 02:34, 17 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I took it out as there is almost nothing written on it. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 13:08, 17 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
that page is not visible to my location, but sounds like a good thing to add. I can either try by proxy or hope that some US-based person adds it... Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 06:44, 17 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I sent you a screen capture of the Google Books page. Sasata (talk) 15:58, 17 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
added now, thanks Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 00:19, 19 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I have added it as it adds some colour and engagingness to the characteristics section. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 06:51, 17 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Given Hydrus' far southern location and invisibility to most of the Northern Hemisphere, I can't believe this...and it appears to be the only source for the claim (i.e. not cited in other texts) Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 02:44, 17 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
added Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 03:46, 17 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
tweaked Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 00:19, 19 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I think my work is done here. Both images are appropriately licensed, and all of the other GA criteria are met. Promoting now... Sasata (talk) 15:58, 17 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

thx :) Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 19:41, 17 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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