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1 Requested move 15 October 2023  
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2 "Per the Gaza Health Ministry"  
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3 Add it as Part of Israel - Iran Proxy war  
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4 Trimming the article's excesses  
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5 Assassination of Omar Daraghmeh  
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6 Reaction: Arab world  
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7 Photos Thus Far -- Balanced and Concise?  
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8 Jewish diaspora  
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9 Reports of several pro Iranian militias deploying themselves on the disputed Golan heights border  
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Requested move 15 October 2023

The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

The result of the move request was: no consensus. Arguments spanned along a few lines:

Editors clearly weighed WP:COMMONNAME as the most important criteria for determining the title of this article. Both sides generally failed to convince the other that theirs was the common name as reflected in reliable sources. The accuracy arguments were reasonable, and in a more established and stable article I may be more inclined to turn to those as decisive in the case of no consensus on the common name question. However, I note both the recency and of the war and ongoing changes in how reliable sources refer to the event. Due to these factors, I think it is better to allow reliable sources to converge on a name and this discussion to take place again after an appropriate time period, as it's very possible a clear consensus among editors will emerge. ProcrastinatingReader (talk) 23:42, 23 October 2023 (UTC)


2023 Israel–Hamas war2023 Gaza–Israel war – This page should move back to a descriptive title both consistent with the WP:NCE guidelines and consistent, per WP:CONSISTENT, with Wikipedia's huge existing body of content on the Gaza–Israel conflict. In the rapidly evolving news, both『Gaza–Israel』(e.g. [1], [2], [3]) and『Israel–Hamas』are clearly extant variants. In this context it is reasonable for Wikipedia to refer back to its own naming policies, such as WP:NCE and WP:CONSISTENT, in making a choice. Speaking to WP:NCE, the guidelines call for the title to be composed of "when, where, what", and, in line with this,『Gaza–Israel』is a "where", while, by contrast,『Israel–Hamas』is not a "where" at all, but a hybridized "place–participant", and so lacks internal consistency, let alone functional adherence to WP:NCE. In terms of the naming discussion that brought us here, it is worth noting that in that discussion there was a considerable voting preference for "Gaza–Israel", but the RM went in a different direction that was less consistent with WP:NCE or consistent, per WP:CONSISTENT, with Wikipedia's existing content on the topic - unlike the prior title of "October 2023 Gaza–Israel conflict", which was consistent. There was also a second, snow-closed RM that presented no new arguments and was snow-closed for the obvious reason that it was one-sided in its proposed "where"/geography. See my vote below for further considerations excluded here for brevity. Iskandar323 (talk) 15:00, 15 October 2023 (UTC)

  • No, the Israeli government is a political entity, Israel is a country. Hamas is the government of territory known as Gaza. You dont have IDF-Hamas war either, your argument here is nonsensical. nableezy - 15:12, 15 October 2023 (UTC)
    I almost brought up that IDF–Hamas would be the like-for-like equivalent, but dropped it, again for brevity. But yes, Israel is a territory, like Gaza, the IDF, like Hamas, is doing the fighting. Iskandar323 (talk) 19:56, 15 October 2023 (UTC)
At the moment, this descriptive title is also the WP:COMMONNAME, and I'm not seeing any sufficiently strong justifications for ignoring the common name. BilledMammal (talk) 17:19, 15 October 2023 (UTC)
[Oppose] on two accounts: that (1) throughout the course of events Hamas is the primary actor in the majority of attacks, with other militant groups playing a supportive role, and (2) Hamas being the only belligerent named as the enemy belligerent in most sources' descriptions of the Israeli declaration of war, e.g. [4] [5]. This would not be the first military conflict on Wikipedia after only the two major parties of several involved (e.g. Russo-Georgian War not including unrecognised states South Ossetia or Abkhazia, or the Iran-Iraq War not including the variety of militant groups of various nationalities), and it would not be unreasonable to follow that convention rather than incorrectly imply that, for example, Palestinian Islamic Jihad had anywhere near as much authority or influence over the attacks as Hamas.
The argument applies in the exact same way for the exact same reasons now, among which are arguments for its consistency with other wars named in a similar manner. A "geographical" descriptor identifying Gaza has its own issues: a Lebanese and Syrian front is also active and there are ongoing events in the West Bank. And above all that, there is BilledMammal's WP:COMMONNAME argument above, which serves as an ideal tiebreaker for all of the descriptive titles on offer which, by necessity, all fail to completely describe the war. Benjitheijneb (talk) 18:07, 15 October 2023 (UTC)
https://www.wsj.com/livecoverage/israel-hamas-war-gaza-conflict
https://edition.cnn.com/middleeast/live-news/israel-news-hamas-war-10-16-23/index.html Homerethegreat (talk) 08:19, 16 October 2023 (UTC)
Si Gam (talk) 13:58, 23 October 2023 (UTC)

References

  • ^ https://www.npr.org/2023/10/15/1205950932/israeli-troops-have-killed-several-dozen-palestinians-in-the-occupied-west-bank
  • ^ https://www.dci-palestine.org/israeli_forces_fatally_shoot_seven_palestinian_boys_in_the_occupied_west_bank
  • @WillowCity's comment below is also really good. I'm backing it up as an EC user. eduardog3000 (talk) 17:01, 16 October 2023 (UTC)
    Just noting that I have removed that comment per WP:ARBECR, along with all the other ones. Levivich (talk) 17:22, 16 October 2023 (UTC)
    The comment in question. I completely agree with it:
    The WP:COMMONNAME argument is a red herring. The actual policy provides:
    "...Neutrality is also considered; see § Neutrality in article titles, below. Article titles should be neither vulgar (unless unavoidable) nor pedantic. When there are multiple names for a subject, all of which are fairly common, and the most common has problems, it is perfectly reasonable to choose one of the others."
    Per the above, "Israel-Gaza War" is in common use. The current name has problems as outlined above. The current title is also pedantic, being based on the formalistic argument that "well, Israel says it's at war with Hamas". eduardog3000 (talk) 18:00, 16 October 2023 (UTC)
    Worth noting that sources that have switched to using Gaza instead of Hamas are all using the form Israel-Gaza, not Gaza-Israel, so 2023 Israel-Gaza war. eduardog3000 (talk) 17:11, 16 October 2023 (UTC)
    The war is not exclusively limited to fighting between Israel and Hamas. Israeli state is fighting multiple Palestinian factions. There are also skirmishes with Hezbollah in the Lebanese border.
    Also see the article Hamas government of October 2016: "The Hamas government of October 2016 is a faction of the Palestinian government based in Gaza and is effectively the third Hamas dominated government in the Gaza Strip.."
    The Israeli state is waging a war against the government of Gaza. Multiple Palestinian armed groups are fighting alongside Hamas. Shadowwarrior8 (talk) 17:41, 16 October 2023 (UTC)
    Merlinsorca 22:06, 16 October 2023 (UTC)
    .
    Aeonx (talk) 03:11, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
    Cortador: FYI, Al Jazeera has switched and is calling it "Israel-Gaza war" on its banner and front page, while the BBC has been using it for a while. Iskandar323 (talk) 12:22, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
    No, they haven't. That one article may use the term "Israel-Gaza War", but the news category says "Israel-Hamas War" right there. Cortador (talk) 07:29, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
    The main geographic areas involved are also uncontrovertible. It is generally agreed that there was an incursion by militants into Israel and IDF forces are responding in Gaza in kind.
    Whereas, names of belligerents are less helpful in article titles for conflicts due to their number (there are SIX militant groups fighting on one side in this war), any uncertainty of responsibility (which may develop) and ontological difficulties (e.g. Israel, IDF and Shin Bett, Netanyahu, the Netanyahu/Israeli government).
    Llew Mawr (talk) 22:57, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
    Israel-Hamas: CNBC, CNN, Associated Press, Sky News, Axios, The Wall Street Journal, The Guardian, The New York Times, NBC News, CBS News, KPBS, Al-Jazeera, Council on Foreign Relations, Bloomberg, European Council on Foreign Relations, BBC, Foreign Policy, Center for Strategic & International Studies, Politico, Financial Times, Hindustan Times, The Economic Times, The Hindu, Time Magazine, Le Monde, CBC, Reuters, Euronews, Vox, Deutsche Welle, New York Magazine, NPR, Chatham House, Los Angeles Times, USA Today, ABC News, Yahoo! News, The Times of Israel, The Economist, The Hill, Haaretz, Boston Globe
    Israel-Gaza: Al-Jazeera, Washington Post, BBC News, The Independent, The New York Times, CNN, Carnegie Endowment for International Peace, South China Morning Post, ABC (Australia), Reuters, Sky News, Forward, Al-Arabiya, The Times
    StellarHalo (talk) 10:04, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
    Commenting that the names of the main sections covering this conflict on The New York Times and Reuters seem to call it “Israel-Hamas War” and
    Israel and Hamas at War”. Justanotherguy54 (talk) 02:24, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
    I wonder if the selection being mostly Western affects the balance. Middle East Eye referred to it as the "Israel-Gaza war" before switching to the "Israel-Palestine war" to include atrocities in the West Bank, a move also partly done by Al-Jazeera. Doctors Without Borders, Al-Arabiya, Zawya, the Kuwait Times, and The Daily Tribune of Bahrain refer to it as the "Israel-Gaza war."
    Some of the sources you cited for using "Israel-Hamas" seem to also use "Israel-Gaza," upon a quick search, as well (e.g., Foreign Policy, New York Times, CNN, AP).
    Either way, we should go with the name that is more common rather than the one we may think is more correct. 4kbw9Df3Tw (talk) 02:40, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
    Justanotherguy54 (talk) 02:16, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
    For consistency and because the appeals to COMMONNAME are not in keeping with our conventions for titles of events this soon after the beginning of the event, the page should be retitled 2023 Gaza–Israel war. --- C&C (Coffeeandcrumbs) 13:08, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
    Comment @Coffeeandcrumbs Having made this policy argument five days ago, I note that no one has argued why WP:IAR applies here or otherwise made a counterargument supporting the status quo. In fact, almost no one on either side has referenced policy at all.
    Llew Mawr (talk) 17:56, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
    Respectfully disagree for two reasons.
    One, WP:NCWWW clearly stipulates when this naming convention should be applied in the following terms: "If there is an established, common name for an event (such as the Great Depression, Cuban Missile Crisis or a "Bloody Sunday"), use that name. In the majority of cases, the title of the article should contain the following three descriptors [...]
    In another words, WP:COMMONNAME applies in priority to WP:NCWWW. Especially when there is an established common name to this topic. Here, Hamas-Israel War is an established common name, so is Gaza-Israel War, though to a lesser degree. Your proposed name can only be considered if there's no established common name, but there are.
    Second, even applying WP:NCWWW as you proposed (which I disagree with), the current title adequately satisfies this convention. The title『2023 Israel–Hamas war』addresses when, where and what. The title tells you that there is a war. It took place in 2023. And at least part of it took place in Israel, consistent with the following introduction in the lede:
    "The ongoing armed conflict between Palestinian militant groups led by Hamasand Israel began on 7 October 2023 with a coordinated surprise offensive on Israel." HollerithPunchCard (talk) 02:45, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    No names here are established names; we're two weeks in - we're far from knowing what this conflict will be called in the history books. This is all still just news at the moment, and Wikipedia is WP:NOTNEWS, which is one of the reasons why following our guidelines might be wise here. Iskandar323 (talk) 04:11, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    Thank you Iskandar, but if you look the number of sources using the current title, summarized by some of the editors above in this discussion - it's pretty well established to me. Some names are given by historians decades after the fact, some names gain vogue overnight.
    There's nothing requiring a name to be adopted in the history books, for that name to be established. For practical purposes, you'll be denying Wikipedia's ability to name an event using WP:COMMONNAME, while that event has yet to become history. HollerithPunchCard (talk) 12:33, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    In addition to what HollerithPunchCard has said, another applicable guideline for this is Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Military history which says that "An article should generally be placed at the most common name used to refer to the event". So, WP:COMMONNAME really takes precedent here as it should since Wikipedia's goal is to document what reliable sources say on a topic rather than leaving it up to users to decide which events and subject matters are similar to one another based on original research. StellarHalo (talk) 20:16, 23 October 2023 (UTC)

    The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

    "Per the Gaza Health Ministry"

    The Gaza Health Ministry is not an independent health organization or any kind of legitimate government branch. It's essentially just an office of Hamas, staffed by Hamas members (including its head). Our own page lists "Hamas authority" as its "parent agency." I feel like sourcing estimates from the Gaza Health Ministry in the infobox misleads people who don't know this (most Wikipedia readers are just looking for a general overview and are unlikely to go down source rabbit holes). Why the lair of obfuscation instead of being direct? Why not simply state "X killed [Hamas claim]" like so many other articles do concerning claims made by militant groups?--Nihlus1 (talk) 22:49, 22 October 2023 (UTC)

    Sure. Can't really trust anyone and most things should be attributed. If we believed in combatants and politicians, wed think we are winning in Vietnam. O3000, Ret. (talk) 23:09, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
    Of course Hamas is the authority, Hamas is the government of Gaza, of course Gazan ministries are subordinate to that like in literally any other place on the planet. We say it is the Ministry of Health number, we specify which ministry is saying what between Gaza and the West Bank. But why not just say "Hamas claim"? Because the sources dont do that. They report it as the number of deaths per the Ministry of Health. They dont cast doubt based on personal feeling with words like "claim", they simply say this is the number and this is who provided it. So do we. nableezy - 23:37, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
    The Times of Israel uses the nomenclature "the Hamas-run health ministry", not to put too fine a point on it. Specificity matters, but it doesn't have to be spelled out every single time as far as we're concerned. kencf0618 (talk) 01:56, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    Also recent AP attribute numbers : More than 4,100 people have been killed in Gaza, according to the Health Ministry run by Hamas. That includes a disputed number of people who died in a hospital explosion earlier this week. Infinity Knight (talk) 08:45, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    Clarity is helpful, and is supported by the sources; I would agree with using something like "the Hamas-run Gaza Health Ministry". I think it's important here, because the exact status of the health ministry in Gaza may be unclear to readers while that would not be the case in a regular country. BilledMammal (talk) 08:50, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    I wouldn't oppose such a clarification. It appears to be unbiased and in accordance with the terminology used by reputable sources. Infinity Knight (talk) 08:57, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    In the BBC’s reporting, they make it abundantly clear that the ministry is controlled by Hamas. BilledMammal (talk) 12:37, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    and in the newsbite immediately below, it says "We've had an update from the Palestinian health ministry in Gaza,..." Selfstudier (talk) 12:43, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    You should read the third paragraph of that same newsbite, which says As a reminder, the health ministry, like other government agencies in the Gaza Strip, is controlled by Hamas. BilledMammal (talk) 12:55, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    I would go along with "Hamas-run Health Ministry in Gaza" if it can be demonstrated that such qualifiers are consistently and widely used in news articles. OCHA in their flash reports simply say "According to the MoH in Gaza" and "Israeli official sources". Selfstudier (talk) 13:11, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    It is not, Washington Post: Gaza’s Health Ministry said Monday that the number of people killed in the enclave climbed by 436 in the past day, increasing the toll since the war began to 5,087. According to the update, the majority of the latest fatalities were in southern Gaza, where Israel previously urged more than a million Palestinians to flee to escape the brunt of its airstrikes.

    Al-Jazeera: About 40 percent of the 5,087 people killed are children, Gaza’s Ministry of Health said on Monday, the day when Israel’s army said it carried out more than 300 new air attacks within 24 hours. Palestinian officials said more than 400 people were killed in that period.

    UN: Latest media reports citing the Gaza Ministry of Health indicate that the number of people killed in Gaza since 7 October has risen to 5,087.

    Euronews At least 4,385 Palestinians have been killed in the Gaza Strip since the start of the war between Israel and Hamas on 7 October, the territory's Health Ministry has announced.

    Reuters: The death toll in Gaza rose to 4,385 dead with 13,651 injured since the conflict between Hamas and Israel escalated on Oct. 7, the Palestinian health ministry said. ... The dead include 1,756 children and 976 women, the health ministry added.

    The National (UAE): More than 5,000 Palestinians have been confirmed killed in Gaza, the enclave’s Health Ministry has said.

    Obviously Hamas runs the government ministries in Gaza, but we dont say the Likud government in Israel, or the Shas run Health Ministry, we only do these things for one side here. nableezy - 13:32, 23 October 2023 (UTC)

    Washington Post:
    1. ...killing hundreds of people, the Hamas-run Health Ministry said.
    2. The Hamas-run Health Ministry in Gaza says over 4,300 Palestinians have been killed.
    3. Five hospitals have stopped functioning because of fuel shortages and bombing damage, the Hamas-run Health Ministry said.
    Euronews:
    1. 4,385 Palestinians killed since the start of the war - Hamas Health Ministry (This article is actually the same one you shared)
    2. The Hamas-run Health Ministry in Gaza says an Israeli airstrike caused the blast...
    3. The Hamas-run Gaza Health Ministry said Friday that 4,137 Palestinians have been killed and more than 13,000 others wounded.
    Reuters:
    1. ...the Hamas-run government's health ministry said 16 were killed.
    2. The Hamas-run government's health ministry said in a statement that 16 Palestinian Christians were killed in the incident.
    3. Some 4,650 Palestinians have been killed in the bombardment according to the Hamas-run health authorities in the enclave...
    The National (UAE)
    1. Children have borne the brunt of Israel's intense bombardment, comprising 40 per cent of more than 4,600 people killed, according to the Hamas-run ministry.
    2. "...so far received 232 martyrs and 1,697 people with various injuries from the Israeli aggression," the Hamas-run ministry said in a statement.
    3. About 5,000 Palestinians, mainly civilians, have been killed in Gaza during Israeli bombardments in retaliation for the Hamas attacks on October 7, the Hamas-run Health Ministry said.
    Even most of the sources you presented usually clarify that the Health Ministry is run by Hamas; the only two that don't do so, as far as I can tell, are Al Jazeera (I could only find one source for them), and the UN. Two exceptions don't justify omitting this information, particularly not when the exceptions are those two - Al Jazeera is far from the least biased agency in this topic area, and reports from a supranational entity like the EU or the UN should be treated no differently to reports from a national entity like the US, Israel, or Saudi Arabia. BilledMammal (talk) 13:57, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    Uh we dont omit anything. The footnote says Hamas run Health Ministry. Euronews is not an EU platform, its just based in Brussels. The question was if it is consistently used, and it is not. nableezy - 14:16, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    The question was if it is consistently used, and it is not. I assume you are using the "always" definition of "consistently"; that definition isn't very useful here, when something doesn't have to be mentioned every time for us to need to mention it under WP:DUE.
    The evidence I have presented shows that it is used enough for us to mention it - and mention it prominently, rather than hiding it away in a footnote.
    Euronews is not an EU platform, its just based in Brussels I didn't say it was? BilledMammal (talk) 14:24, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    I suggest waiting for a while to see whether this becomes common practice, then revisit. Selfstudier (talk) 14:20, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    It appears like it already is common practice. BilledMammal (talk) 14:24, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    It may just turn out to be an overreaction to the hospital explosion and subsequent debate over the casualty figure. Selfstudier (talk) 14:27, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    I don't think we should be trying to predict that, per WP:CRYSTAL. Plus, at the moment such a mention is WP:DUE; that may change in the future, but if it does we can always relegate such a mention back to the footnote. BilledMammal (talk) 14:34, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    I don't agree that it is DUE. Selfstudier (talk) 14:42, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    Thats nonsense, because we dont attribute anything to Israel in text in the infobox either. Hell we dont even attribute it in the footnote despite the reporting attributing it to Israel. AFP More than 1,400 people have been killed in Israel since the attack unleashed last week by Hamas militants from the blockaded Gaza Strip, the Israeli prime minister's office said Sunday. WSJ: The Health Ministry in Gaza said Tuesday that about 3,000 had been killed and more than 12,500 wounded. In Israel, the death toll from the attacks has reached at least 1,400. Some 289 Israeli soldiers died on Oct. 7 and afterward, Israeli officials have said. The sources attribute both sets of numbers to either combatant, but you want to in text attribute to one and while the other isnt even attributed in the footnote? nableezy - 15:12, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    because we dont attribute anything to Israel in text in the infobox either Yes, we do - Inside Israel (Israeli claim). If you feel more attribution is needed then I encourage you to open a discussion and we can review the sources and consider it; reviewing the sources on this question shows that we need to include this attribution. BilledMammal (talk) 15:17, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    Not for any of the Israeli casualties. Or for captives, or civilians or soldier counts. All of that is according to Israel per the sources, and we dont even say anything in the footnote for it. We already include the attribution, only for one side, including in-text in the infobox for Gaza and not for Israel is a blatant NPOV violation. nableezy - 15:29, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    WP:FALSEBALANCE; just because we need to do it for one side doesn’t mean we need to do it for the other; as I said, please open another discussion and we can review the sources. BilledMammal (talk) 15:34, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    Sure we do, especially since it is a well known fact that one side tells porkies (guess which one), assuming that is what this is all about, the desire to throw shade at one side only. Selfstudier (talk) 15:39, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    I dont know what about sources attribute both sides stats to either side you dont get. So no, there is not a false balance, and this request that we not deal with both issues here reads as an attempt to impose a double standard without looking so blatant about it. Sources attribute to both sides their stats, and we should too, the same way they do. That is not by attributing in text to Hamas in the infobox and not at all even in a footnote to Israel. nableezy - 16:52, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    As far as I can tell, they don't. When I was producing the list below a couple of the sources reported on both Israeli and Palestinian casualties in the same sentence; they attributed the Palestinian casualties but put the Israeli casualties in their own voice.
    This is why we need a source evaluation; if you are convinced that reliable sources typically attribute Israeli casualties, then please open a discussion and we can review the sources. BilledMammal (talk) 23:12, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    You don't need to quote the political party in power every time you reference a ministry. In the US, you don't say the Democrat-run health ministry, and the in the UK, you don't say the Tory-run health ministry. All ministries are fundamentally run by bureaucrats. Iskandar323 (talk) 15:27, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    Unless reliable sources do so, in which case you do. Reliable sources don’t say Democrat-run health ministryorTory-run health ministry - but they do say Hamas-run health ministry. BilledMammal (talk) 15:34, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    Yeah, this is a pretty special case, and I agree with BilledMammal on this. Andre🚐 17:02, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    We already do that, what BilledMammal is arguing for is giving greater weight to the "Hamas-run" than reliable sources do versus attributing to Israel or Israeli agencies. They attribute all statistics to both sides consistently. BilledMammal is arguing we should be doing that in-text in the infobox for only one side. Thats what you agree with? Just making sure. nableezy - 17:05, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    Got a new reference from the freshly minted Gaza Health Ministry about the whole Hamas government setup: Following the 2007 Hamas takeover of Gaza, a month-long doctors' strike ensued due to political disputes. The new Gaza government, with Basem Naim as Health Minister, replaced Fatah-affiliated hospital directors and staff with Hamas loyalists. Jomaa Alsaqqa, a 20-year surgeon at al-Shifa Hospital, lost his job due to his Fatah support and faced arrests and assaults since the Hamas takeover.[1]
    Infinity Knight (talk) 17:08, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    There a point related to this discussion in that? nableezy - 17:12, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    I agree that the RS typically refer to it as the "Hamas-run Gaza health ministry" and I think this is a unique situation, so I'm OK with referring to them as the "Hamas-run Gaza health ministry." If the sources were refer to the "Netanyahu-run Israeli health ministry," I'd support that as well. Andre🚐 17:10, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    Ok, sure, we already do that. nableezy - 17:11, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    Great. We agree, then. And as far as the infobox goes, maybe we should start a new thread @BilledMammal on the infobox change. Since we have some agreement, we could end this 34 comment thread on that note and start a fresh new thread with fresh new ideas and attitudes. Want to try it? Andre🚐 17:14, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    This thread was about adding such a note to the infobox; I don't see much benefit of starting a new one. BilledMammal (talk) 23:12, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    Going through "generally reliable" news organizations listed at WP:RSP and where I am not blocked by a paywall:
    ABC news:
    1. The Hamas-run Health Ministry in Gaza says over 4,300 Palestinians have been killed.
    2. A massive blast rocked a Gaza City hospital packed with wounded and other Palestinians seeking shelter Tuesday, killing hundreds of people, the Hamas-run Health Ministry said
    3. The deadliest of the five Gaza wars, it has left more than 1,400 people in Israel dead, as well as more than 4,100 Palestinians, according to the Hamas-run Gaza Health Ministry.
    The Age
    1. The Hamas-run health ministry said at least 436 Palestinians, including 182 children, were killed in a 24-hour period, bringing the death toll in Gaza to 5087. More than 1400 Israelis were killed by Hamas terrorists on October 7.
    2. A massive blast has rocked a Gaza City hospital packed with wounded and other Palestinians seeking shelter, killing hundreds, the Hamas-run Health Ministry said.
    3. The Hamas-run health ministry said at least 436 Palestinians, including 182 children, were killed in a 24-hour period, bringing the death toll in Gaza to 5087.
    AFP
    1. More than 4,100 people have been killed in the Gaza Strip since Israel launched a ferocious air and artillery bombardment in response, according to the Hamas-controlled health ministry.
    2. The Hamas-run health ministry in the crowded Palestinian enclave says more than 3,785 Palestinians have been killed in the bombing.
    3. Gaza's Hamas-run health ministry said that upwards of 5,000 people have been killed, more than 2,000 of them children -- figures AFP has not been able to independently verify -- since Israel responded with a relentless bombing campaign.
    Associated Press
    1. The Hamas-run Health Ministry in Gaza says over 4,300 Palestinians have been killed.
    2. A massive blast rocked a Gaza City hospital packed with wounded and other Palestinians seeking shelter Tuesday, killing hundreds of people, the Hamas-run Health Ministry said.
    3. Meanwhile, Israeli airstrikes have killed more than 4,000 Palestinians, according to Gaza’s Hamas-run Health Ministry.
    The Australian
    1. Gaza's Hamas-run health ministry said Monday that more than 5,000 people had been killed...
    2. The Hamas-run Health Ministry in Gaza said the explosion was caused by an Israeli air strike.
    3. The bombing campaign has killed more than 4,300 Palestinians, mainly civilians, according to the Hamas-run health ministry...
    Axios (Axios has only mentioned the health ministry twice in the past week; every time they have mentioned it they have included "Hamas-run")
    1. ...the Hamas-run Health Ministry said killed 500 people.
    2. ...which the Hamas-run Health Ministry says killed at least 500 people.
    BBC
    1. ...officials from the Hamas-run health ministry say the overall death toll has risen to more than 4,300 people.
    2. The Hamas-run health ministry also said hundreds had been killed there in Israeli air strikes over the past day.
    3. The Hamas-run health ministry in Gaza says 55 more Palestinians in Gaza were killed in Israeli air strikes overnight and that more than 4,300 have been killed in total since 7 October, more than half of them women and children.
    CNN
    1. The Palestinian Health Ministry, which is controlled by Hamas...
    2. Some 436 people, including 182 children, were killed in overnight Israeli strikes on Gaza, the Hamas-controlled Palestinian Health Ministry said in a statement.
    3. The Hamas-run Palestinian Ministry of Health in Gaza reported that 17 people were killed in the Israeli airstrike on the church compound.
    The Telegraph
    1. The Hamas-run health ministry in Gaza has predicted the death toll in the al Ahli hospital could rise to 800.
    2. The Hamas-run health ministry said Israel’s retaliation had killed more than 4,300 Palestinians since it began.
    3. At least 5,087 Palestinians have been killed in Israeli strikes since October 7th, including 2,055 children, the Hamas-run health ministry has claimed.
    DW
    1. More than 5,000 people have been killed in Gaza, according to the Hamas-run Health Ministry
    2. The visit follows a blast at a Gaza hospital, which the Hamas-run health ministry said killed at least 500
    3. The number of Palestinians killed in Gaza since October 7 has risen to 4,385 dead and 13,651 wounded, according to the Hamas-run Health Ministry.
    The only reliable news sources which did not typically use "Health Ministry" are Al Jazeera (discussed above), Bellingcat (who has only published one story mentioning the health ministry in the past month, and so there isn't enough data to say whether they typically include or exclude it)
    A few sources also published no stories mentioning the health ministry in the past month; those were excluded.
    Given this source review, and the source review above, I think it is clear that we cannot put casualty estimates from the Health Ministry in WikiVoice; instead, we must attribute them to Hamas. BilledMammal (talk) 23:12, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    Yes, I agree with this. Andre🚐 23:13, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    The BBC not doing that Selfstudier (talk) 23:17, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    As I said, these sources typically attribute to the Hamas-run health ministry - "always" is not required for us to need to do it. BilledMammal (talk) 23:25, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    We don't need to do it at all. However, I see that it has been done anyway. Selfstudier (talk) 23:35, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    Reverted, sources give the same level of attribution to both sides for all numbers, you are not doing that. nableezy - 23:56, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    If true, and we need to provide attribution for the Israeli casualties as well, then the NOV-compliant solution is to provide such attribution, not to to remove attribution from elsewhere.
    However, you have presented no evidence of it being true, and while creating the above list I found the opposite was true - every time reliable sources reported in Israeli and Palestinian casualties in the same sentence, they attributed Palestinian but did not attribute Israeli. As such, please open a discussion and we can review the sources. BilledMammal (talk) 00:00, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
    That is just not true, I presented sources up above attributing the dead or the kidnapped or the wounded to the Israeli government (egMore than 1,400 people have been killed in Israel, including children, and more than 4,500 people have been injured, Israeli officials said. At least 32 of those killed in Israel are Americans, according to the U.S. State Department. You however ignored that to say we must only discuss numbers for Gazans here, and I responded that I see that is little more than attempt to impose a double standard without being so blatant about it. We do attribute the numbers, in the text explicitly and in the infobox with an endnote. nableezy - 00:02, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
    (edit conflict) You presented two sources; that isn't evidence that sources give the same level of attribution. Further, it ignores the fact that even when not looking for evidence I stumbled across several sources that in the same sentence attribute Palestinian casualties but not Israeli.
    I responded that I see that is little more than attempt to impose a double standard without being so blatant about it Please WP:AGF. Discussing whether to attribute one set of numbers is complicated enough; discussing two in the same discussion will make the discussion almost impossible to follow, particularly for the uninvolved editors whose opinions are needed. Please, open a new discussion where we can produce similarly extensive lists of sources, and we can consider the question there. BilledMammal (talk) 00:16, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
    I've opened a discussion on this topic at WP:NPOVN. BilledMammal (talk) 00:16, 24 October 2023 (UTC)

    References

    1. ^ Merav, Sarig (2007-11-03). "Striking medics in Gaza temporarily return to work after talks with Hamas". National Institutes of Health. Retrieved 2023-10-20.

    Add it as Part of Israel - Iran Proxy war

    The Suprise attack of hamas on Israel on 7 October was done with the support and guidence of Iran.

    Same can be said on Hizzbolla which is also an Iranian Proxy. 46.121.27.170 (talk) 00:45, 24 October 2023 (UTC)

    Trimming the article's excesses

    As noted above, the article could use some shortening if possible, most especially if there's anything extraneous. A good place to start would be the "Reactions" section. I've added a banner at the top of this talk page (under the "Other talk page banners" shell) which measures the length of each section in the article, and currently it shows that the "Reactions" section is quite long. At a glance, the details in the "Jewish diaspora" and "Palestinian diaspora" sub-sections are two of perhaps lesser importance. VintageVernacular (talk) 20:16, 18 October 2023 (UTC)

    Sounds good. I went ahead and trimmed the Economic Impact section that added essentially nothing. Seems reasonable to axe the Diaspora reactions. I'd also add another thing to do is that in these current events articles there's a tendency to add article after article and summarize the article so it starts to read like a series of headlines. It's a pain to do but going through and trying to reduce quotes and summarize can also trim a lot of unwanted fat. Look at the Historical Context section, this should be straight forward because it can use real secondary sources instead of newspapers, but it's just a long list of quotes from random people for FIVE paragraphs. What's particularly baffling is that it's followed by a "Background" section. We could probably just delete the entire Historical Context section and anything it has worth keeping can be added to Background. Alcibiades979 (talk) 06:01, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
    If the war is going to be a long one, the Russian invasion of Ukraine series of articles could serve as some inspiration for restructuring. They break the timeline up into multiple articles of their own. I'm not saying this should be done yet, but thinking ahead this may be necessary. VintageVernacular (talk) 22:56, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
    Why is this still not done? The entire "Events" and "Outside main conflict zone" sections should be directly moved to the Timeline of the 2023 Israel–Hamas war article where it belongs. There's no reason to have these duplicate sections at all. And why would they even be in separate sections, if they're both lists of "events"? The "Outside main conflict zone" should have been a sub-section of "Events". GMRE (talk) 13:54, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
    I like Russian invasion of Ukraine as an example. There is both a "Background" section and a "Prelude" section. Likewise, there should be a background section that contains the necessary historical context, and then a "prelude" section that contains events immediately before the war, Hamas preparations etc.VR talk 01:30, 24 October 2023 (UTC)

    Does this really need to be a standalone article? If not, where would the best redirection target be? Hemiauchenia (talk) 23:51, 23 October 2023 (UTC)

    I agree that may be a stretch for a standalone article, unless it generates major coverage. Resurfacing a suggestion I made above, I think Casualties of the 2023 Israel–Hamas war would be a useful article and, in this case, a good place to mention Daraghmeh's death. In the article as is, I'm not sure we can do better than #Casualties. --Jprg1966 (talk) 00:44, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
    I'm making Draft:Casualties of the 2023 Israel–Hamas war for anyone who wants to help. Then we can slim down the casualties section here. --Jprg1966 (talk) 01:51, 24 October 2023 (UTC)

    Reaction: Arab world

    A sentence reads: "Despite strong evidence that the cause of the explosion was a faulty Palestinian missile, many regional governments rushed to condemn Israel for fear of arousing popular anger with the truth about the rocket’s origin."

    The phrase "Despite strong evidence that the cause of the explosion was a faulty Palestinian missile" is a premature conclusion. The cause of the hospital explosion is under investigation, with reports still coming out. It also reads as opinionated.

    [27]https://www.aljazeera.com/news/2023/10/20/what-have-open-source-videos-revealed-about-the-gaza-hospital-explosion

    [28]https://www.channel4.com/news/human-rights-investigators-raise-new-questions-on-gaza-hospital-explosion

    Olgaman (talk) 23:41, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

    Addressed this concern. CarmenEsparzaAmoux (talk) 23:48, 20 October 2023 (UTC)
    The "Arab world" section is well worded now. My perspective is that it could be either edited down more or better referenced with additional reliable sources, since there are too many citations all from The Economist. I have an additional concern: I just noticed that yesterday an editor deleted entire sections on reactions from the "Jewish diaspora" and "Palestinian diaspora", saying in the edit summaries that it was "As per talk page" and "Per talk on trimming" respectively. There is now a section for reactions from the "Arab world" (mostly Arab Muslim world), but no section about reactions from the Jewish diaspora to balance that out. Also, Palestinian diaspora voices were removed and should be included in "Arab world" section. See edits below to compare what the sections said before they were removed: JJMM (talk) 01:47, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
    Additional note: The Reactions section has the following subsections:
    • Reactions in Israel
    • Reactions in Gaza
    • Reactions in the West Bank
    • Military aid to Israel
    • Arab world
    • Iran
    • Egypt
    • International
    JJMM (talk) 03:15, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
    The Arab world reaction is more focused on the geopolitical relations between the countries and less so twitter statements, so I'm not really sure if it needs balancing as such simply because that's not what it's really about. Also in regards to balancing, thing is that the Article is so long at this point I can't imagine anyone reading any of this who isn't a Wiki edittor. I mean just look at the quantity of entries above the Reaction section. Beyond that wiki recommends that we focus on what would be important in 10 years time and to avoid recentism. In this regard the reactions of the diaspora communities don't seem relevant in this article. I would say that the geopolitical machinations between Iran, Israel and Saudi Arabia and how this effects those is something that has real long term impacts. The reaction of the Jewish community in Buenos Aires, less so. If anything I'd boil down the diaspora section then add the Israeli diaspora parts to the Israeli domestic reaction and the Palestinian one to the Palestinian section. Alcibiades979 (talk) 07:38, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
    I understand what you are saying. Since you were the one that completely removed both the Jewish diaspora and Palestinian diaspora sections, it would be best if you made the edits you are thinking of to replace relevant text/refs, i.e.-"If anything I'd boil down the diaspora section then add the Israeli diaspora parts to the Israeli domestic reaction and the Palestinian one to the Palestinian section." JJMM (talk) 03:50, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
    Also, I suggest that if you keep reactions from the Jewish diaspora that were outside Israel, that you put them in the International subsection of Reactions. JJMM (talk) 03:53, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
    "Strong evidence" is a direct quote from The Economist. At this point I'd also say that "Strong evidence" is a bit of an understatement as AP, WSJ, Canada, France, CNN, the US and Israel, etc. etc. all say that it wasn't Israel. Also JJMM see here. Alcibiades979 (talk) 07:29, 22 October 2023 (UTC)

    Photos Thus Far -- Balanced and Concise?

    These are the photos we have in the article thus far. I would say there's very little in terms of fighting and far too much redundancy when it comes to Palestinian direct effects. How many photos of rubble, wounded kids, and wrecked ambulances on one side can you have before it becomes unintentionally NPOV? Also, do we need so many photos of pro-whatever rallies and politicians? I'm dubious. What are everyone's thoughts? -- Veggies (talk) 20:24, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

    I honestly had the same concern that there was some real redundancy with the photos of direct effects in Gaza. It's just difficult, because due to the electricity and internet blackout, the only images from Gaza have all come from the same day, even though the immediate and direct fighting has occurred in it for more than a week now. Definitely curious to hear others thoughts too though. CarmenEsparzaAmoux (talk) 20:51, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
    Agreed. How many more photos of rubble do we need exactly? Whereas a lot of editors seemed to be against including photos of bloody kitchens/destroyed Israeli towns. That being said; there's objectively been more deaths in Gaza now. So maybe fair enough. Chuckstablers (talk) 00:43, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
    Telling you all that some editor mass restored/reverted some pictures under a misleading edit summary that also wiped off info. Borgenland (talk) 17:05, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
    Yeah, I just got through fixing it and I gave the user a warning. Thank you. -- Veggies (talk) 17:33, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
    @Veggies I think you did a really good with trimming the photos, but I do think adding an additional one in the Healthcare section in the Humanitarian Situation would be really helpful. It's a long section (due to the sheer extent of the humanitarian "catastrophe"), but as a result, so much text with only one image is really hard on the eyes. CarmenEsparzaAmoux (talk) 00:43, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

    Updated the photos above to reflect the state of the article at 17:29, 21 October 2023 (UTC). -- Veggies (talk) 17:29, 21 October 2023 (UTC)

    Thank you for doing this Veggies. It really helps to see things more clearly. The photos are unbalanced again, so trimming might resolve that. In addition, the war crimes section only has one photo of "A mosque destroyed by an Israeli airstrike, Khan Younis, 8 October" (Gaza rubble #4 in your photos above). There seems to be a new war crimes article and the photos that had been in this article were moved there. I do think adding another photo of the Israeli attacks in this article's war crimes section would be helpful. JJMM (talk) 04:28, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
    I would suggest removing photos entirely from that section; two would be too many for the size of that section, but having a photo of only one side is an NPOV violation. BilledMammal (talk) 04:31, 24 October 2023 (UTC)
    Either way would be good. Yes, clearly it is a NPOV violation the way it is now. JJMM (talk) 04:40, 24 October 2023 (UTC)

    Jewish diaspora

    I think it's wise if this section is split up into two subsections — with one subsection on Jewish support for Israel and one on support for Palestine. The current section starts out with the pro Israel events and then goes to just some celebrities bernie sanders, so that I think creates a bias that the Jewish diaspora is by and large for Israel. I likewise didn't see any explicit discussion here on the role of the Jewish diaspora as *groups* who support Palestine AND attended the protests AND locked the White House and surrounded various US congress/senator offices (like Pelosi's). Hovsepig (talk) 09:18, 18 October 2023 (UTC)

    Protests on the 2023 Israel–Hamas war also likely needs sub-dividing. Iskandar323 (talk) 09:45, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
    Support for this. I think a summary of pro-Palestine responses from the Jewish diaspora is a good idea. XTheBedrockX (talk) 15:06, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
    And? (Tbh I'm just commenting here because I fear the archiving bot) Hovsepig (talk) 21:38, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
    See my comment below on deleted Jewish diaspora reactions in updated "Reaction: Arab world" Talk section. The article's Reaction section seems unbalanced now. JJMM (talk) 04:29, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
    yes that Jewish diaspora section is too relevant and should be brought back. Or perhaps move the reactions section to a separate page? Hovsepig (talk) 01:59, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    At least some of the text/refs from the Jewish diaspora subsection could be brought back and placed in the International subsection of Reactions. JJMM (talk) 04:45, 24 October 2023 (UTC)

    Reports of several pro Iranian militias deploying themselves on the disputed Golan heights border

    SOHR has reported that several Syrian, Iraqi, and Afghani militiamen (presumably under the Popular Mobilization Units, Liwa Fatemiyoun, and National Defense Forces banners) have deployed themselves to the Golan Heights border with Israel. If SOHR's reports are to be believed, they have placed themselves under the command of the Lebanese Hezbollah, and are allegedly acting against the orders of Syrian military officials.

    Should these accounts be added to this page?

    Source: https://www.syriahr.com/en/314883/ Randomuser335S (talk) 20:24, 23 October 2023 (UTC)

    Not yet. Two issues: I would want more than SOHR as a source to use this in the article. But also, it's not clear where it would belong in this article yet. This SOHR report does not allege that these militia fighters have participated in any fighting yet. --Jprg1966 (talk) 22:38, 23 October 2023 (UTC)
    This is actually reported in The Economist as well, I'll see if I can find the article. Alcibiades979 (talk) 08:10, 24 October 2023 (UTC)

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