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Talk:K-25/GA1

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 08:47, 20 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Rate	Attribute	Review Comment
1. Well-written:
	1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.	In the Organization section, the barriers are introduced without any explanation of why they were needed. Given this was the major obstacle to success, it should be explained at this point or earlier.
	1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.
2. Verifiable with no original research:
	2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.
	2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
	2c. it contains no original research.
	2d. it contains no copyright violationsorplagiarism.
3. Broad in its coverage:
	3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.
	3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).
	4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
	5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
	6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.
	6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.
	7. Overall assessment.	Placed on hold for one issue regarding the introduction of the issue of the barriers to be addressed. Otherwise, all good. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 08:51, 20 August 2016 (UTC)Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 00:10, 21 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

• I have changed the Gaseous diffusion section to introduce the term "barrier" earlier. Hawkeye7 (talk) 11:15, 20 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]