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I added this category to Kroger Babb for a few reasons. 1) He wrote fictional letters to advertise his movies. 2) He traveled from town to town faster than word of mouth could spread. 3) He employed numerous stand-ins to portray what he purported to be the same individual, including impersonating an Olympic Athlete. Banaticus19:02, 1 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Actually, it really was Jesse Owens, that's well-established. But as for the category, I do understand why it's there, although I feel it's a little misleading. Babb never sold anything as a hoax, things were often as they were described, simply sold amazingly well, and done over the top in a modern context. I'm not going to remove it, because I don't feel that strongly about it, but I'm not sure it's the best category, especially since he's the only one populating it. --badlydrawnjefftalk23:42, 1 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Wow! That's really the only word in my apparently limited vocabulary used to describe this article. While learning about Mr. Babb was great, I was truly amazed by the easily-accessible tone, the great pictures (all tagged appropriately), and meticulous references. This is the sort of article to which all others should aspire. Great work! hoopydinkConas tá tú?01:32, 24 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]
So I did reverse a few for accuracy, but left many alone. I don't agree with all of them, but I'm not interested in fighting small semantic battles when they don't change the tone of anything. I don't know much about what you changed in the middle, however, because your inline breaks messed up the history formatting, so I'm not sure there. --badlydrawnjefftalk16:11, 13 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, sorry about these inline breaks. But once these SGML comments are removed, it should be easy to compare "before" and "after". It's likely that, after further reflection, even I would think that some of my "corrections" are mistaken: no need to take them all so seriously. -- Hoary05:01, 21 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]
After redoing some of my research, I'm not convinced that it should be changed much. I'm not sure where it originated from, except that it was in Europe, so I'm going to change "Italian" to "European" barring anything that turns up in the future. The actors were verifiably speaking Italian, which is where I think I got the note from. --badlydrawnjefftalk02:08, 21 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]
The article has just got an "oppose" vote, for at least one good reason.
Wikipedia's reference system is an odd hybrid of references (in the normal sense of the word) and footnotes. Those for this article were formatted like neither; I rather arbitrarily chose to reformat them as footnotes rather than references but this work is not complete:
It would be much more helpful if page numbers were given for each footnote referencing a book. (However, this would require major reworking, with many more discrete footnotes.)
It's normal to add the place of publication in front of the publisher of a book: ("London: Hamish Hamilton, 1972", etc.).
Linking of a publisher, etc., from these notes seems to be overdoing it; I've cut many of these links.
Every note should end with a period.
It may be helpful to identify a periodical more precisely when it is little known and has a generic sort of name: thus not "Mirror" but (imagined example) "Mirror (Anaheim, Calif.)".
Better to go to the periodicals section of the library and identify the year of "Babb, 5 others" if at all possible.
I may have misunderstood the Turan note when I rearranged it. Check!
Shouldn't "Garland Press" be "Garland Publishing" or similar?
Not really infuriating, I'm more angry about another random "prose" issue with no specificity. As there's no consistency in cites and no real policy as to how to do them, I put them in so they would be easy to read. There are simply no good page numbers on a lot of these, given the different editions I used. The periodicals I've gotten all the information possible on, however, there is literally no more information I can get from them, and I've tried very hard. I have no problem taking a half hour and redoing the cites to something someone else likes, but without knowing what would pass muster, I'm not going to bother yet. --badlydrawnjefftalk16:18, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Quit moaning, start bothering! :-)
You're right in that there's no clear policy on citation style. There is a template for them, but I dislike the template and nobody has yet recommended its use in this article. (Perhaps I shouldn't have mentioned it.) But the successful FAs I've seen have both (i) followed a widely accepted style and (ii) been internally consistent. Till a couple of days ago, the notes for this article adhered to (ii), more or less, but not to (i); now they're getting there. Personally, I happen to think that for example preceding "Duke University Press" with "Durham, N.C.:" is merely a waste of typestrokes and bytes, but that's what the educated masses want (following the Chicago Manual of Style, etc etc) so let them have it. Also, if people want ISBNs and if provision of ISBNs is possible and doesn't have any obvious drawback, let them have their ISBNs: indeed, I've already provided most.
The periodicals I've gotten all the information possible on, however, there is literally no more information I can get from them, and I've tried very hard. But the periodicals didn't arrive from nowhere. I'm pretty sure that you encountered them via a secondary source. If so, say this. Imaginary example: "Los Angeles Examiner, n.d.; cited Schaefer, p.81."
Yes, but Jeff's a man with a mission: to insert a hero of John Waters in a prominent position of Wikipedia much more often devoted to the wholesome and soporific products of the US-Japanese entertainment oligopoly. -- Hoary
And now for style 'n' such. Tony and Sandy are demanding the best. OK, let's give it to them. Here's a list of things that I know I can't quickly fix. It will not be comforting reading.
Introduction: "sexual education–style dramas". The meaning isn't entirely clear; can we say "dramas purporting to be for sex education"?
Wecould, but that seems even more hokey than anything else.
Youth (which till I changed it just now was History): "Babb held a number of jobs.... He started out with jobs in sportswriting at a local newspaper in his 20s...." We learn nothing about his childhood or (coffee preference aside) his parents, but I guess he didn't go to university. Why didn't he have a job in his late teens? Or do you mean that he had a lot of short-term jobs at the very start and that the first job that he held for a significant period was in the local newspaper?
Unknown. What you see is what's available.
Then how about Babb held a number of jobs when young, at one point gaining a mention in Ripley's Believe It Or Not for refereeing a record number of youth sports matches. In his twenties he was sportswriting and reporting for a local newspaper, but....
I'm fine with that, honestly. I don't quite understand the difference, but it's more of a curiousity than anything else.
Youth: Did he devise the "stunts" for execution by others in the company, or did he do them himself? If the former (which I tentatively infer), why did "he" give bags of groceries?
In the Chakres-Warners, it's believed that he came up with and executed the stunts himself while working for the theaters.
Then perhaps devise and perform rather than create, though I'd sympathize with a claim that this "improvement" is just more wordy.
Up to you, then. If you feel the more wordy change is an improvement, I won't protest it.
Youth: Understanding this properly requires an understanding of medical reels. That's a redlink that needs to be blued.
Yeah, I don't know the proper target, though, I know we must have an article for it somewhere.
Then let's look for it, and fast. I'll try to do this a few hours from now, unless I see you've beaten me to it. ¶ Social guidance films "covered topics including ... drug use..." Are these what's meant? (If "medical reels" are instead for nursing school, etc., then they're not "social guidance" films.)
No, they're the latter, for medical training. I think I've found a useful workaround.
Film promotion: There's a problem in the organization of this long section. A paragraph within it that starts "Following the showing" is a bit confusing: is it still about Mom and Dad or is it instead about Babb's films in general? Actually it seems to be a transitional paragraph, but a rather awkward one. Suggestion: rewrite this paragraph (perhaps dividing it into two) and rearrange what are now the sections "Film promotion" and "Later films" into a single section, "Film production" with subsections on "Mom and Dad", "Other early films", and "Later films".
Well, that specifically is about Mom and Dad, but it became true of many of his later features.
Yes, agreed, but the organization could be bettered. This would not be a simple change and it's not one that I'm keen to make; I just have a gut feeling that it's necessary. Perhaps a third person could chime in here.
I'll take a second look in any case, but I'm not sure how to fix it. I'll have someone look at it.
Film promotion: Can "per-dollar returns" be rephrased?
I'm not opposed to it, but I'm not sure how. That's the proper term for it.
Then let's leave it. I know that I don't know this stuff (it's when friends talk of such delights of capitalism that I start to yawn and look at my wristwatch).
Later films: "made more money than any other film being played at the same theater would earn over a full run" is not so informative to dumbos like me who don't know what a "full run" would have meant. A tad more information, please.
On the correction and recorrection: Babb is best known for his presentation of exploitationlurid exploitation films.
I understand how "lurid" was wrong. But for me "exploitation" isn't good here because of the jingle of "tation, tation", because of the overuse of the word in this area of the article, and because it's a term that isn't yet explained. (It's particularly odd that it appears here without quotation marks shortly before it appears with quotation marks.)
By the end of the article, I'm still a bit puzzled over "exploitation films". I understand that they're usually new edits of pre-existing junky elements, or (less commonly) freshly made junk, and that they're desperately advertised for any sensational (and often salacious) appeal. Yes, "lurid" was wrong, but "presentation of exploitation films" suggests to me that these are films of the genre or class "exploitation" just waiting to be presented, whereas I thought that it was primarily the presentation itself that turned the (often anodyne) raw material into exploitation flicks.
I may simply be too close to it at this point to understand where you're coming from on this. You're not wrong - the presentation is often what put a bad film over the edge into exploitation territory, but Mom and Dad also ushered in an era where films were made specifically with this in mind. Now, the "jingle," as you put it, it still necessary - they are what they are, and I'm not sure how we can cut down on it much further. I did take a look at the part that was quoted in one place, however, and that was because the original was a direct quote, and it isn't any longer, so I've fixed that completely. Hopefully this helps a bit. --badlydrawnjefftalk00:51, 27 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the comments in the sections above, which I'll read more carefully rather later. In the meantime: There've been complaints about the possibly unfair overuse of "fair use" images in this article. If one image goes, I think this should be it. Yes, I suppose it shows some of the rhetorical devices, but you really have to click for the enlargement to see them; also, the caption is curiously tame ("A timely picture on a touchy subject!"). And while its appearance in the section preceding the one in which the film is discussed may be justifiable, it seems to scream "Poor organization!". I guess that you wanted to use a more obviously sleazy poster for a film with no redeeming qualities and couldn't find one; I suggest being patient in the hope that something will turn up later. -- Hoary01:02, 27 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I'm going to wait until I get some sort of legitimate response before zapping it, because I think it's properly illustrative of the idea. "Too many fair use" images is a very weak objection (need we look at KaDee StricklandorV for Vendetta (film) for much weaker uses?), and I'd rather figure out why before being aggressive on this point. --badlydrawnjefftalk01:04, 27 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]
All right, but consider the following very coolly: What are these "rhetorical devices"? Does this poster illustrate Babb's approach or does it rather illustrate a low-budget film of an era in which Babb was a bit outdated? Does the illustration belong where it now is within the article (rather than in the next section), and if so, how can this best be shown? -- Hoary 03:19, 27 November 2006 (UTC) ..... PS Image:MomAndDad.jpg is far better. -- Hoary03:49, 27 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I hear you. Late night here. I'm about to turn in. Good night, and when I look at this again twelve or so hours from now I want to see perfection! -- Hoary14:53, 26 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Ahh, hmmm... Google Maps is showing another Centerville (possibly an old village) at that location.... researching now... --- RockMFR01:41, 30 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, it's the latter. I believe we have the other one linked later in the article. Lees Creek is certainly his place of birth, i'll try to dig up something on the Centerville and get that reference for you right-quick. The burial at Lees Creek is absolutely correct, though, also from the gravestone photo. I'll be removing that tag, but leaving the birth one, as the grave reference at the end of that sentence is for the whole line. --badlydrawnjefftalk02:04, 30 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Well, without a decent atlas on-hand, it's really difficult to figure out the geography properly. As far as I can tell, the article is refering to a "Centerville Cemetery" [2] which may or may not be named after a hamlet in that particular area. --- RockMFR02:03, 30 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Alright, I'll leave this up to you. The first mention of Centerville in the Youth section was definitely incorrect. The burial location is really confusing. The engraving on the tombstone confuses me even more, as it says his life began in Centerville and ended in Lees Creek. --- RockMFR02:08, 30 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
The gravestone is confusing, yes, I agree. Perhaps the problem, however, is the "near" word? Because it's less than an hour away, both in Montgomery County? --badlydrawnjefftalk02:09, 30 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I'm very familar with the geography of the region. It is definitely not refering to the Centerville in Montgomery County. Wilmington, Lees Creek, and this "Centerville Cemetery" are all in Clinton County. Also, Google Maps is showing a Centerville (in place of Lees Creek) at certain zoom levels. --- RockMFR02:10, 30 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I'm from Massachusetts - an hour is half the state for me, haha. It's certainly the one near Wilmington, per two books - the Friedman and the Schaefer, and Lees Creek is at least in the Briggs and Turan pieces. --badlydrawnjefftalk02:15, 30 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
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