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< Talk:LW10

GA Review

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Reviewer: Figureskatingfan (talk · contribs) 07:15, 16 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I'd like to claim this article to review. I'll probably get to it tomorrow. Thanks. Christine (Figureskatingfan) (talk) 07:15, 16 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

What a cool article; informative and interesting. Thanks for teaching me about something I don't know a lot about. Already a strong article.

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a(prose): b(MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
    There are minor problems with the prose, with few typos. It's my practice to copyedit the GAs I review, and then explain what I've done, ask questions, and make suggestions. See below. Seems to follow MOS; this article follows the format of similar articles.
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a(reference section): b(citations to reliable sources): c(OR):
    Most of the refs are inaccessible, so I can't check them, but I'll AGF and trust that they're accurate. (I'm okay with that; sometimes it's necessary for comprehensiveness.) I did a spot check with several sources I was able to access, and I found no problems with close-paraphrasing. See below for the few issues I found.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a(major aspects): b(focused):
    Seems very comprehensive. I have a question about this, though. I realize that this article is about the classification and that it links to articles that discuss sit-skiing more generally, but would there be a place in this article for more background information about the sport? I'd also like information about individual athletes that have competed in this classification. If you assure me that it's not needed--that it's out of the scope of this article, though, I'll accept it and not insist upon it.
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a(images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b(appropriate use with suitable captions):
    No images, but that possibly can't be helped. Is there a free image of an LW10 athlete available? Or perhaps you could link a video?
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
    On hold for a week until the few issues are addressed. See below for more comments.

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No response to the review for a week, so I have to fail this GAN. If you address my feedback later and resubmit, let me know and I'll take another look at it. Christine (Figureskatingfan) (talk) 16:41, 23 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]


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