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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 06:00, 28 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Hi! From reading through this article, my guess is that you are working from Spanish in your head. I see a lot of word order items and other things that strike me as normal in Spanish but not in English. I am a non-native Spanish speaker and writer, but I hear the other side of this.
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There are a lot of copy changes; I have some concerns about close paraphrasing in translation and some gaps in sourcing. You have (roughly) 7 days to make the changes needed, and then the page will be passed or failed based on how it is at that time. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 00:50, 29 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Hay divergencias en cuanto al lugar de nacimiento de Leopoldo Salazar Viniegra. Mientras que en Protagonistas de la Medicina Científica Mexicana se dice que nace en el municipio de San Juan del Río, Durango, la Gaceta Médica de México dice que nace en el municipio de Pánuco de Coronado, Durango.
He published his research findings in several well-known academic journals, including the Gaceta Médica de Mexico, the journal of the Sociedad de Neurología y Psiquiatría de Mexico, the journal Manicomios, and Criminalia, a publication of the Academia en Ciencias Penales.to be way too similar. Close paraphrasing should be avoided, even in translation. Please spend a bit of time particularly with this source to de-CLOP it.
best known for his zealous pursuit of harsh drug penalties and his particular animus for marijuana users, it checks out.
The circa-1930 photograph is PD in Mexico and the US.
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