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Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk pageorWikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promotedbyAirshipJungleman29 talk 23:55, 24 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Created by TrademarkedTWOrantula (talk). Self-nominated at 07:37, 2 January 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be loggedatTemplate talk:Did you know nominations/Robbery Bob; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.[reply]

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  1. The hook is not in the article. There is no Angry Birds or Cut the Rope in the article. We will need to either add that information with the citation or come up with a new hook which is based in the real world WP:DYKFICTION.
  2. The Release section is just a few words and looks orphaned - can you combine it elsewhere?
  3. The sequel section is also too short to have a section - can you combine it elsewhere?
Combined sections. TWOrantulaTM (enter the web) 04:40, 2 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Just spitballing a hook idea.
I like this hook, but I'd quote the word "cringeworthy". TWOrantulaTM (enter the web) 04:40, 2 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@TrademarkedTWOrantula: Added the quotation marks. going forward others will also make decisions about the hook punctuation. We need another reviewer now, hopefully one will come along to approve the hook both you and I approved. I hope you stick around and continue to contribute to DYK. Bruxton (talk) 05:46, 2 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Source says "moments of", yet the hook implies all of it was. May I suggest:
ALT2: ... that AJ Dellinger of Gamezebo thought that Robbery Bob contained cringeworthy dialogue? (I think you can get away without quotes seeing as it's already attributed, but I'll leave that decision to a prepbuilder.)--Launchballer 10:39, 12 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Bruxton can you review the new hook? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 15:46, 19 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Bruxton (talk) 21:04, 20 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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