This article is rendered in a way which is extremely biased in favour of Mr Zinn's work. In keeping with Wikipedia policy, I think its quality could be greatly improved if this article was more objective. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Mbitoxs (talk • contribs) 14:31, 28 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
You need to be far more specific in your criticism. Which passages do you object to exactly? Your concerns cannot be addressed unless you make them known beyond generalities. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Crazyflag (talk • contribs) 22:37, 24 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I've edited to remove POVs and peacock terms. I think the tag can be removed now. Headhitter (talk) 13:45, 28 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]